New Os on MAANEET-THREE WORDS OF LOVE 10oct 2011

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THREE WORDS OF LOVE




Maan
the name echoed in the air the name of her love of her life of her eternity
Maan was the only reason she survived and though she had lost him to fate she still believed he will come for her rescue from the darkening world
Her eyes fluttered open the morning was here again but even the sun hid behind the clouds denying her the warmth of the day
Geet
she heard Rano her mother scream
Wake up geet it's the day of your marriage and you are still asleep
Ma
please you know this Marriage means nothing to me
Geet
stop it stop it
Kab
tak chalega ye
Maan
tumhara attet tha bhul jao use
Tumhara
aaj Dev hai
Bas dev


I closed my yet again tears dropped down my eyes
Nahi ma mera aaj kal aur hamesha sab Maan hai
Bas kar Geet Rano said as she slapped right across her face

Geet
smiled maro maa maro par yaad rakhna Maan aayega toh aapko use jawab dena hoga
Rano
looked at her daughter and cried
Wo
nahi aayega geet
Wo
nahi aayega
Agar
use aana hota toh aa chukka hota
Bhul
ja use
Nahi
maa
Nahi
wo aayega
Wo
aayega
Her eyes closed again as she lifelessly lied on her bed


Remembering
the last night of their togetherness
Geet mein Delhi ja raha hoo dadima ke pass
Unhe meri jarurat hai
Vada karta hoon
Jab latunga toh tumhe apne saath hamesha ke liye le jaunga
She just wrapped her arms around his neck
Crying
par Maan darji will get me married to Dev soon
No
ways Geet tum meri ho bas meri
He jerked her out of his embrace and looked deep into her eyes
Bharosa hai mujh pe
geet nodded Khud se jyada Maan
toh bas bharosa karo
i will be back to get you
With
that he claimed her lips


His tongue traced her lips and entered her mouth
Tracing her every corner
He was drinking all her pain with his lips
Filling it with his trust and love
He kissed her in and out making her breathless

His arms slowly made patterns on her back adding and heightening her pleasure


After a long breathless moment they parted away
Geet
he whispered on her lips and smiled
Do you love me Geet
Geet looked into his eyes which was full of love and nothing else

She smiled and nodded for a yes and shied away
Please Geet say it once na Maan insisted
She
took a deep breath in and said
I
Love
But
before she could say you
maan jerked her in his arms and kissed her yet again
you he whispered against her lips


They
smiled at their togetherness
Geet
he heard him call her name
Maan
Geet woke up yet again
But to her utter vain she was still in her room
dreaming about him

The sound of her marriage celebration filled her ears
Nahi
she almost screamed and closed her ears in pain
Kaha
ho tum Maan
It has been 5 month now please wapas aa jao
Warna
ye meri zindagi ka aakhari din hoga she kept her head on her knees and wept

Barraat
aa gayi hai
The girls screamed out of happiness

Rano adored Geet her daughter who looked like an angel in her red lehnga
Bahut
pyari lag rahi hai meri beti
Geet
smiled
Lagungi
kaise nahi Maa
Maan
ke rang mein jo rangi hoo
Geet
Rano screamed pagal ho gayi hai kya kuch hi der mein tumhari shaadi Dev se hone
ja rahi hai aur tum ab bhi Maan maan ki rat laga ke rakhi hai


Geet
smiled Maan toh meri saasein hai Ma
He is my soul
See don't you see his love running through my veins
Mein kisi ki nahi ho sakti Maa
Kyunki mera haq mujh pe nahi raha
Sirf
maan ka haq hai mujh pe
Rano looked at her daughter from teary eyes
Hoping she will get out of the dream once she is married


Kanya
ko neeche bulaiye the Pandit said
Brij
yelled oye Geet ko neeche lao
Rano
came out with Geet
Dev
stared at her she was looking heavenly
He has always dreamt about her being his and now his dream was coming true
He smiled at her once his eyes met her
But she didn't even cared she walked lifelessly down the stairs
Suddenly her eyes felt heavy and everything started spinning
Geet
her mother screamed but her body lifelessly felt down

But then someone wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her up
Before
she can hit the ground

Maan
the words instantly came out of her lips
She
tried to adjust her eyes and have his one glimpse
Heaven
she murmured as his face came clearly infront of her eyes
She
raised her hands and touched his face from his cheeks to his lips

She
touched his lips from her fingers and he gently placed a kiss on them
Making
her believe he was real

She
smiled you came Maan
I knew you will come before i leave
her breaths got rugged as her eyes drooped again

Geet she heard his scream
Geet
no no love please open your eyes
Stay with me he screamed
I am sorry Geet i promise i will never leave you again
please love open your eyes
Rano looked at her daughter's lifeless form
Geet
she tried to wake her up
But
Geet didn't opened her eyes

The whole atmosphere became quiet everyone sobbed
Brij came forward and held Maan's body away from geet
Chod use tera koi haq nahi hai meri behen pe
Acha hua mar gayi Khandan ki izaat mitti mein miladi thi is ne
Geet's body jerked away from Maan's and landed lifelessly on the ground
Geet
Maan screamed as he came back to his senses
He
punched Brij hard on his face making Brij stumble back
Brij
came charging forward but Maan held him firmly and hit him again
Brij lost his senses and collapsed on the ground

Geet
Maan screamed and held her close to his heart
He
looked at her angelic face her closed eyes her pink lips
He
without any hesitation kissed her on her lips
All the people got shocked

Darji angrily charged towards him
But rano came in between
Use kamse kam apni aakhri ikcha toh jine dijiye aap darji
Darji looked at Rano and just stopped
he couldn't fight a mothers determined eyes


Maan kissed Geet endlessly he probed his tongue in her mouth but she didn't reacted
Still
maan kept on kissing her tears kept flowing out of his eyes
I love you Geet he kept on saying in between the kisses
He was breathless himself
Don't you love me Geet he said painfully against her lips
It was then he felt a slight movement of her lips
Maan
she whispered
Maan
looked at her without moving his eyes away from her lips
He
smiled at the small movement of her lips

I love you she murmured against his lips which was still resting on hers
She wrote the three letters of love on his lips and
he gently moved down and sealed
it forever with his kiss
Love you too he smiled at her
Rano
just came and blessed them both
Even Darji came and hugged them both
and made them sit in the mandap


And tied them forever together in the marriage

Ok
i don't know how it is
I was little bored doing my assignment so i just
Wrote it do let me know how it is
love Miki😊




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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os do write some more
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Awesome OS...loved it...👏
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fantastic...loved it

atlast Maan came to make her his own
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congrats !!!!!!! 4 yet another os ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

loved it ... awesome ...

if this is d outcome when u r bored .. then i wish u get bored always ...😛
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simply superb!
luvd geet's never ending trust..
wonderful dialogues..
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awsmmm yaar... simply fab❤️😍😍
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love dis OS small beautiful n complete...👏
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miki...i hve come across to ur os three word of luv...it was simply amzing...n ur oder os was tooo outstanding...u r a awsme writer...n ur new ss is also quite interestng plzzz continue soon n update its next part soon...
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Originally posted by: priyankasweet21

miki...i hve come across to ur os three word of luv...it was simply amzing...n ur oder os was tooo outstanding...u r a awsme writer...n ur new ss is also quite interestng plzzz continue soon n update its next part soon...


I am glad u liked it do read
Autumn love too and yup have updated my new ss

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