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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Fantastic update...

waiting to know the next...

thanks for loving it i won't make you wait more its just 3 more days i think
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow all the 4 parts were just awesme..cant wait 4 next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
😉😉😉all parts are just awesome
lovely maaneet moments
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update.
would Love to know what will maan do to geet's boss.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 47
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Part 47

Part 48

You know how I felt bad on that day when he hold my hands... I get irritated I don't want to see him after he revealed his weird truth...i don't like his evil smile his single touch irritates me but he came close.. near me and hold my hands I hate that to the core...when his breath fell on my face am felt that am half death when he is about to kiss I can't bear any more I don't know from where I got strength to push him and courage to beat him with sandals but at every touch of his told me that am for maan... only he has the right to touch me...

She said every thing with out a breath and felt silent when she said those last words unknowingly that words come from her mouth but it is truth which she can't hide...

He hold her shoulders and shook her.. with his left hand to bring her out of the thought about that day...geet its over relax now...you had already punished him he gritted his teeth harder while mentioning about him for what he had done then why you thinking about that now...

Maan its not over...did you remember his words he told that he is taken for granted that am an young divorcee and he thought that I will easily accept for his wish... she silently scold him for that b*****d how can he...if am still your wife he will dare to think to come near me...its all me who is responsible for all this...today he said then tomorrow some other will.....

Geet just calm down... its not your fault... its he maan gritted his teeth once again and told its not you who is going through all these stuffs but every women has to go through these...you are not responsible for this...actually its makes you very strong you should have to be strong enough now to handle all these..and am proud that you got your courage to beat him you are not that naive geet any more..you are strong enough not to face your own problems..

after composing him self he said..

But geet why you are not facing him now when its not at all your mistake why you should avoid him...is it he who should feel shame for what he had done...

Maan how can I... I will feel very nervous to meet him again...i will remember that day if I see his face.. I don't even want to remember that fate full day...

Now maan came out of the car and took geet out of the car he took maya from her and placed her in the back seat and said geet did you fear of any thing around here...

She pointed towards the darkest place near by and said maan am afraid of that dark...

Ok then come with me he took her to that place she pointed and left her hand in that dark with no single light she can't point out where he is

Maan am afraid of it... please come here.. maan please don't play...she shouted in fear

When she is very afraid and voice cracked... she can hear one familiar voice around

geet am here don't worry nothing will happen to you am near you...she closed her eyes and listen to his words and felt he is near her and remain silent... he again continued geet are you afraid now...

No...she replied in a whisper with her closed eyes..

When you are really afraid call my name I will come to you he said..she opened her eyes slowly and found there is a little light is there from the moon which is brighter now and make her way now she can also able to mark where her car is standing with that beam of moon light...

now she is not fear of that dark..walked in that dark and reached his car..

When she reached the car she founds maan sitting inside near maya and caressing her face...

maan what all this...you made me afraid

shuuu... he pointed single his finger in his mouth in a gesture to silent her as maya is sleeping and asked

Now also you are afraid of that place of that dark... she turned around and found out no she is not having that fear now.. not any more..

No.... she replied which is a shock to her self...

that's it geet when you are not ready to face the fears it will remain in you forever when you are ready to face it out nothing can make you scare ... he paused for a while to see her reaction

so face your problems don't run away from it will make you more weak...

she didn't speak but she understood what have to do next...

day 5...

she get ready to go to office today when she came to dinning table he can able to find out that she is very clear now with out any tension. and fear..

when she is about to leave after breakfast he asked her should I drop you

no need... I can go by my self she told with smirks

he know that it means she is now ready to face her problems alone...

so maan smiled at her and went to his room with maya...

In geets office every one is very shocked to see her back...as already all thinks that she quits her job

In a mean while every one thinks that she wont come to office here after but to their surprise she is there..

Especially his boss he was very sure that she wont come here after but her presence in office brings an unknown fear to him...

She didn't mind any thing and starts with her work where as in a mean while she gives a angry glare to his boss when ever she had to meet him...

He is really afraid of her now and avoid going before her...

Evening at dinning table (KM)..

how was your day.?..he asked causally

Great...she answers smilingly

Where maan is now feeding maya who is sitting on the table before him even geet too feeding her food at some times but maan is doing that as his main business...

Where maya too getting it from maan... geet felt very difficult to feed her...

Then

Every one in the office is very surprised to see me back especially my boss... she said the last word with stress...

He understood and smiled in the corner of his lips...she continued again with a laugh...

You know maan...He was terribly afraid of me...once a while in the meeting when he is about to talk I was casually looked at my sandals as I feel some thing itching near my toes he was panicked and stopped to speak in between the meeting...

Both burst in to laughter there for a while and she continued

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Posted: 13 years ago
dear
cant see any love bonding between them dear
sorry to say but truly boring dear
we knew maan ll be there for her...
but still dear
wann see maneet love again
pls dont make them compramise for maya
or what society thinks dear
pls bring the magic between them
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww
tht was a nice trick used by geet
awesomeee
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

dear

cant see any love bonding between them dear
sorry to say but truly boring dear
we knew maan ll be there for her...
but still dear
wann see maneet love again
pls dont make them compramise for maya
or what society thinks dear
pls bring the magic between them


i am trying my best to do the same... don't worry it wont be boring any more still 3 updates there after that it will end... no more tortures then..😳
and as i said early no compromise for maya or society...😕
for further details wait and watch..😃

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