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Posted: 13 years ago
it is geet who is losing and so is the child.
what is geet's fault here, she is not at fault
how can she provide a father figure to her child
maan wins ...here...i hate that
geet is at the losing end, she loved him, did all for him, he cheated on her and how they have a child...the child needs a father...n maan wins...

hate that😡

even if geet forgives him who will erase her pain...who will...the time she suffered all these years who will erase it...no one can.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

I know in the past maan has hurt geet and had relationship with Sam but haven't he suffered enough without his baby 😊and geet


no he has not suffered enough...and never will.
what he did was unforgivable
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Posted: 13 years ago
am so sorry friends i don't know that you are so fast than me you read the entire part before i complete editing it i mistakenly posted that entire part i need it to be edited sorry for that its my mistake...😭😭😭


but any way that's the way the story moves 😉 i come back soon with the remaining edited parts...😆



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nishha

am so sorry friends i don't know that you are so fast than me you read the entire part before i complete editing it i mistakenly posted that entire part i need it to be edited sorry for that its my mistake...😭😭😭


but any way that's the way the story moves 😉 i come back soon with the remaining edited parts...😆




are !!! we are so eager to read your updates that we dont care weather its editwed or not edited😃 .
i have completed till part 30 . the updates were excellent . will comment after i complete the others also !!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 34 continues...

In that time sanjay came back to India again...

he came to know everything through meera he immediately went to see geet who is struggling with her life every day to forget that one bad day which is not so easy for her...

after convincing her for a long time he took her back to US..

where he placed her in a job in his own company and made her to involve in work which makes her life fine some what where while working she can forgets everything but yet she didn't forget to wet her pillows with tears even after a year..

All of a sudden she gets a call from meera who sounds very scary and the bad news she share is that dadi is not well...

Geet can't resist her self from going back to india.. she is very adamant to go back to india to see dadi' sanjay already who is against her will didn't respond at first but at last he agrees..

she went to see dadi immediately after her return... from dadi and meera's conversation she came to know that maan is not in home.. she felt relaxed knowing that she didn't have to face him which makes situation odd but the memories of her past not let her alone each and every corner of KC there is a story of there mischief and fun they share which she can't forget...

She try to stay in meera's house as she can't able to share the same roof with maan but dadi who insist her to stay in km for some days... she accepted to stay in KM as there is is no one in KM to take care of dadi ...

After 2 days

evening at KM

she came into KM after her usual visit to the near by park with maya she founds there is a pin drop silent in the KM she know this means maan is in there...

she try to avoid going before him but at the same time her heart is longing to see him...she went in to her room immediately made maya lie on the bed who is sleeping and sit near her where her hearts starts beating fast and her eyes went moist again thinking of him...she didn't came out till she hears the car start...

after some time she thinks that he left so came out but to her surprise he is sitting in the couch of the living room and checking some files she stunned at the sight of him..

In this one year he changed a lot now his bear has grown longer than usual and his face lost its color totally there is no life in his eyes no glow in his face he seems to be very week... for some time she admire her ex-husband features with comparison with his previous appearance...

her admiration session didn't last for a long time until he shouts in anger at aadi and sasha for bringing the wrong file at the same time servant brings coffee which fells down when he throws the file it hits him and he puts it down unknowingly which made his anger double... he again shouts at the servant with a loud voice along with his voice there is also a mild crying sound of baby which made him stop and turned towards to that side to find where sound is coming

he is too shocked to see geet there which is clearly visible in his face no one has informed him about geet's stay in Km.. she is yet admiring him which made her not to notice maya's cry...at a sight or her his eyes become moist he hold his tears back and went out soon...

geet who at last get her hearing sense back after he left... she came back to maya to console her...

after that for a weak she didn't find him in KM and also found out from servants that he is staying in out house for the past one year...

she didn't care about him now... she came here to take care of dadi so now her full focus is on dadi whos condition is going worse day by day she take a good care for dadi with in that process she can't pay full attention to maya who is growing more mischievous day by day which leads to greater trouble...

geet can't leave her alone for a while where she will brought more troubles to her self and others...any have the servants in KM help her to keep an eye on maya some times which again turns into trouble for geet which makes maya more adamant due to every ones love, care and attention towards her...

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part 35

i hope you like this...

feed back are always welcome...
sorry all silly mistakes due to my limited knowledge...

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

lovely update
but seriously i dontwant this sanjay guy to interfere in her life whether he is her friend but i dont like it
meera is also maan's friend but she is not interering in his life so why is sanjay
is he showing that he is the only one to take care of geet

plz rmove sanjay from the FF i dont like his interference


now you hate sanjay too😕...
he is just helping geet as a friend to get out of her depression some times no one will understand as better than a good friend...
every one around geet is just thinking about her and maya's future and trying to console her to forgive maan for his mistakes but sanjay is the one who understands that she wont takes such a huge decision so easily with out any strong reason so he tries to give her moral support to lead her life with out maan..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

it is geet who is losing and so is the child.

what is geet's fault here, she is not at fault
how can she provide a father figure to her child
maan wins ...here...i hate that
geet is at the losing end, she loved him, did all for him, he cheated on her and how they have a child...the child needs a father...n maan wins...

hate that😡

even if geet forgives him who will erase her pain...who will...the time she suffered all these years who will erase it...no one can.


you point is a strange fact geet is the one who had to suffer till the end..😭...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nishha


you point is a strange fact geet is the one who had to suffer till the end..😭...


ab kya hoga? life is unfair...kya kar sakte hain???
i cannot forgive maan for what he did to her😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nishha


now you hate sanjay too😕...
he is just helping geet as a friend to get out of her depression some times no one will understand as better than a good friend...
every one around geet is just thinking about her and maya's future and trying to console her to forgive maan for his mistakes but sanjay is the one who understands that she wont takes such a huge decision so easily with out any strong reason so he tries to give her moral support to lead her life with out maan..
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and by this u think that he is doing great for geet that how to lead life without maan
i dont hate sanjay i hate his interference in geet's life
i dont think a good friend would tell anyone to leave her love despiste knowing thatit will only cause her pain
he should just support her not give advice of leaving maan or not that's her personal decision and no freind has the right to interfre in any friends persnal space this is what i feel

once u only told that this FF is only on maaneet no focus on side character so why now ur focusing on sanjay in such crucial stage that's why i m saying to neglect him totally
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.


ab kya hoga? life is unfair...kya kar sakte hain???
i cannot forgive maan for what he did to her😭


me too can't forgive maan for what he had done but here we are not the one to decide about maan...
geet shouldn't decide yet she didn't forgive him yet lets see what happen in her future...

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