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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update akka

man deserves this punishment
but sumwhere i cant wish see them apart .may be adhukaagave i want geet to forgive him but i dont want her 2 forgive him (i know its too confusin . i am even confused )

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome part dear i had from from maan n baby conversation part to till nw i will read previous one when i get time but i think jab maan ne geet se kaha ki vo kisliye itna pareshaan hai to geet ne hi javab diya ki maan apne dil ki suno is baar apne dimag ki mat sunna par kya maan dil se sameera ke pass jana chata tha nahi vo sab us last wish ki vajah se hua jisne use kuch sochne hi nahi diya but maan tumne jo bhi kiya vo duniya ki sabse badi galti we know that u love geet n maya a lot then sirf ek wish ke liye tum kaise aisa kar sakte hoo i really don't want geet to forgive maan soo soon because maan ne galti hi aisi ki hai koi bhi wife ke liye ye sab bahut muskil hai par as far as i m maaneet fan to main unhe dur bhi to nahi dekh sakti i don't know wt will happen next but i hope ki sab theek ho jaye jo ki itna assan nahi hai
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: niticool

nice update akka


man deserves this punishment
but sumwhere i cant wish see them apart .may be adhukaagave i want geet to forgive him but i dont want her 2 forgive him (i know its too confusin . i am even confused )

continue soon



am also in the same state dear😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshi04

awsome part dear i had from from maan n baby conversation part to till nw i will read previous one when i get time but i think jab maan ne geet se kaha ki vo kisliye itna pareshaan hai to geet ne hi javab diya ki maan apne dil ki suno is baar apne dimag ki mat sunna par kya maan dil se sameera ke pass jana chata tha nahi vo sab us last wish ki vajah se hua jisne use kuch sochne hi nahi diya but maan tumne jo bhi kiya vo duniya ki sabse badi galti we know that u love geet n maya a lot then sirf ek wish ke liye tum kaise aisa kar sakte hoo i really don't want geet to forgive maan soo soon because maan ne galti hi aisi ki hai koi bhi wife ke liye ye sab bahut muskil hai par as far as i m maaneet fan to main unhe dur bhi to nahi dekh sakti i don't know wt will happen next but i hope ki sab theek ho jaye jo ki itna assan nahi hai



kya maan dil se sameera ke pass jana chata tha nahi vo sab us last wish ki vajah se hua jisne use kuch sochne hi nahi diya--- i try to convey is maan's mind is warning him to not help or trust sameera but his heart till cares for her...
Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nitsy-siyana

what punishment this maan is getting? his dadima asking him for another marriage is this punishment?
How on the earth he claims that he loves geet when he lied to her [part 31] that he is busy in office, after talking with geet he was getting intimate with another woman...
Let both family know the truth what he had done...
He deserves all hatred from both family members.
maan does not deserve forgiveness from geet nor love from maya.
Even in real life guys like maan got punishement when their own child looked at them with hatred and felt disgusted to call them their father.
And here he claims that maya is his blood and he loves both. Such a shameless person he is! Being an woman i will never forgive him.
i always wish to see maaneet together but its not possible here plz plz plz dont make geet forgive him at any cost...

what punishment this maan is getting? his dadima asking him for another marriage is this punishment?-- this mystery will be cleared soon
he is busy in office, after talking with geet he was getting intimate with another woman... he feeling guilty to go before geet to avoid his presence before her he try to be busy but he can't concentrate on work he done mistake so he feels guilty...i personally feels instead of asking sorry and giving explanation for our mistakes is better to leave the person alone with out making them irritate with our presence...
Let both family know the truth what he had done...
He deserves all hatred from both family members. ----- both family didn't came to know the main reason behind there separation but they know that there is some thing went very wrong between them... you are right he deserves all hatred but geet don't want this happen to him she don't want maan to get disrespect from her family mainly she don't want maya to hate her father... she till loves him she don't want maan to suffer...

i try my level best to explain about maan and geet situation hope you understand... i know its very hard for all of us to accept a husband who is cheating his wife but this is the hard fact which is taking place in our society...😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
I try my level best to explain about maan and geet situation hope you all understand.😕.. i know its very hard for all of us to accept a man like maan...😡 but this is the strange fact that geet till loves maan...😭😭😭😭
i don't going to conclude any thing now but i assure that every thing will be fine soon no one here will going to get disappoint...😃
regarding fo
rgiveness geet didn't decide yet to forgive maan...
let us see what will happen in there future...



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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 34

He don't have any guts to face her further and he knows very well staying away from geet is hell to him which hurts him inside but he don't want to show it in front of geet in the form of tears so he stepped out of hosp with a moist eyes after getting in to car he cried like a kid by hiding his face on dadi's lap...

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Now..

While thinking about his past he dozed off to sleep

where maya is slept over him on his chest...

Geet who came to his room to take back maya see this sight and don't want to disturb the sweet sleep of both and went back to her room...

She know how much maan love maya .. she always don't want to separate maya from maan but now maya is the only one hope for her to live..she has a fear of losing maya...

She know that maya and maan's love bonding is not develop in this three months but it starts from the first day when she tell maan about her pregnancy he used to verify the baby as girl and he always longs for a girl baby and he started to talk to baby when she is in her womb itself.. at certain point maya is also starts to respond for his words by kicking

geet thinks about the love bond they both share with maya...

------flash back---------

Maan what are you doing... she giggled and asked

he look up and says..Am kissing my baby you have any doubt in that...

maan please stop its just 3 months and she can't feel you now.. you know baby will be very tiny at this stage... she gestured her figures to show the size

he shift him self next to her in bed is it so?? ' ok then no problem you can feel now and then you let her know after few months... saying that he again bend to kiss her on her tummy...

maan please stop it... she pushed him a side

by the way MR.khurana why you always mentioning baby as her...

his face went serious for a while and he continues...you know geet I love my mom a lot she is my best friend always when she died i was totally lost i can't even able to believe that she is no more . I hope she will come back to me one day as my daughter... I think this baby is going to be mom...

she had tears hearing this from him he didn't ever believe in these kind of things he used to make fun of these things when ever dadi and she spoke like this but now he is speaking about rebirth of his mom this shows his love towards his mom... to change the his mood from thinking about his mom's death she continues...

ok let the baby be girl...let us name her

name?

haan maan we can't just call baby na..?

think a name to her'

both started to think for a long time and came across with more names but both are not satisfied with the names at last maan get tired and lying down in bed saying

am tired geet you are not accepting my names...

maan she is the magic of our love we need to name her in a special way...

after some time he said magic of our love???..Maya' how is it?

Maya ... she whisper nice name maan..

.both hugged as they found the name for there child'


to be continued.

part 34 continues in the next page...

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update


fear of geet is true


only maya is dere wid her at dis phase of life


bt fathers love can be given only by maan na


as mothers love can be given by geet


sooo one chance


nd nt ki i forgive u


just one chance


as a friend as a father of her child


bas




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Posted: 13 years ago
i hate maan, what he did with sam on that one night is unforgivable.
I cannot n will not forgive him
He does not deserve Geet
Geet deserves someone who loves her and cherishes her and that someone is not maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
but seriously i dontwant this sanjay guy to interfere in her life whether he is her friend but i dont like it
meera is also maan's friend but she is not interering in his life so why is sanjay
is he showing that he is the only one to take care of geet

plz rmove sanjay from the FF i dont like his interference

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