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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: lallu06
Baby u r chance less...Read the story till ur latest part without break. Awesome writing dear. U have a very good writing skill. Keep it up. Waiting for ur next update. 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

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its good to know he love her for her nature which brought a change in him

and his self confession part was really nice

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abhi miley to hai nahi misunderstanding kaise ho saktee hai. loved the update

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: maansee
abhi miley to hai nahi misunderstanding kaise ho saktee hai. loved the update

khabi khabi ho jata hai..😭

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Originally posted by: t_areeb
its good to know he love her for her nature which brought a change in him

and his self confession part was really nice

Thanks a lot..

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thanks for all your support and encouragement...
please keep on giving your feed back...

If i go wrong any where please mention i will correct My self...

Getting very poor response 😭😭😭 but yet i want to continue the story for my beloved Maaneet...😳

If some one feels i am not doing justice to those characters please let me know...😲

For my regular readers please do comments your opinions...

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago

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Part 12
Part 13

He realized that he is changing but will she understand his love is she really loving him? when she going to realize her love?..

while thinking about her he dozed to sleep seeing her face and dreaming about her..

Its very late in the morning where the sun light is very bright and it straightly falling in his face and not letting him to sleep he is irritated and wake up with out opening his eyes he took the watch near the table and check the time... Its very late then his usual schedule

At a jerk he wake up by rubbing his face and eyes he remember about yesterday a smile escaped from the corner of his lips...he turned around to see his geet where she is missing at this time she usually in the kitchen helping nakool and dadi

"she may be in the kitchen " saying that he came down to have a gaze of her but she is not there that she is not in the KM then where she went so soon he can't ask any one there so he went to his room...May be she have gone to college..

He is missing her want to have gaze of her but he can't so started murmuring she might have gone in another car but she shouldn't tell me before leaving... how can she go just like that with out telling me

when he is about to move for bath his sight is suddenly fell on the letter which is kept in the dressing table along with her bangles..
Good morning Mr.khurana...:)

Today i have to go soon ..But you are still sleeping its already late and i don't want to disturb your sleep so am taking another car and leaving ... but don't forget to pick me up in the evening..

Bye have a nice and smiling day...:):):):)

GEET

where the letter ends with one funny diagram...
Maan laugh at that she is really mad and making me mad too

He miss her presence in his room where she is usually hear to songs when ever she enters the room so now he switched on the Music system to feel her presence around...
where the song starts to play..

here is the link for the song which played in his player....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5QIfWdGQ0zU&feature=related

Ho aaj kal tanha main kahan hoon
Saath chalta koi
Uski hame aadat hone ki
Aadat ho gayi
Woh jo mila hai jab se
Uski sauhbat ho gayi

Ek zara masoom se ke
Dil ki aafat ho gayi
Sun le zara
Sun le zara
Dil ne kaha
Itna bas mujhe pataa hai

I am in love
I am in love
Tu hi bataa jaane
Kya mujhe hua ha

he started to feel her presence all around.. in each and every thing he founds her and he smile all a while... where the song ends but it didn't end in his mind its started to play all the while in his ears like some one is singing behind his ear...

Oss boondhon mein tu hai
Aankhein moondu mein tu hai
Dishaayon das tu hai
Tu hi hai bas tu hai
Dil ka shehar tu hai
Acchi khabar tu hai

Fursat ki hassi tu hai
Jo bhi thi kami tu hai
Tu hai mera
Tu hai mera
Kuch main jaanu na
Itna bas mujhe pataa hai

I am in love
I am in love
Tu hi bataa jaane

Kya mujhe hua hai

He left the KM and started to drive to office where today he avoided driver and drive by him self to KC through out from the morning there is a smile remain in his face which is not usual...He found geet in the back seat when he adjust the rear mirror to see the clear view of the road when he turn back to see her no she is not there...
But yes she is in his heart in his mind in his memory but not with him now...

He entered Kc with a smile every one greeted him but he didn't reply as usual but the unusual is he is smiling all the while and didn't shout at any one...
When he entered his cabin a girl came with note pad to get the dictation where he find geet behind her and teasing him by making faces which distracts maan so he send the girl out and ask her to do some other work he is not able to concentrate in his work where he founds geet every where...
on the couch near the door behind him and some times sitting on his lap and distracting him from his work...

Baadal pe chalta hoon main
Girta sambhalta hoon main
Khwaishein karta hoon main
Khone se darta hoon main
Jaaga na soya hoon main
Musafir khoya hoon main

Kuch sarfira sa hoon main
Budhu zara sa hoon main

Dil kya kare
Dil kya kare
Tere bina
Itna bas mujhe pataa hai
I am in love
I am in love
Tu hi bataa
Jaane kya mujhe hua hai

adi enters his cabin and ask him to come for the presentation where as Maan can only see geet all the while in the presentation where some times she is behind shasa who is giving presentation and imitating her some times behind adi and laughing when ever he laughs and once he is about to fall form chair when he founds her on the table and dancing...when he founds its just a dream he hits his forehead with his fingure and try to manage the situation...
He cannot sit there any more so he excused himself from there and went to his cabin where he cannot bear this sweet torture any more...

He checking the time then and there.. He want to meet his Geet soon but its a long day which not ending so soon now its nearly 2hours more for him to pick up geet but yet he can't stay in KC so peacefully so he walked out KC than its usual time which made all employee amazed..

sir wont leave office so soon but today what happen to him... he didn't shout at any one and left so soon.. he is behaving very different from the morning...

But maan didn't care for others and went to geet's college and wait near the gate inside his car
#What happen today why she taking so much time ?can i call her No she may be inside class let me wait till she come#

Its her usual time but for maan it seems to be very long he was desperately wating to see her from morning he is waiting for a single gaze of her...

But he didn't know what is waiting for him...

Finally she came out of her college when maan see her he is about to get down from car but for a while ford fista car is stopped in front of him.. where one guy get down from it and walk towards geet who is very much excited after seeing him and she is talking to him as if she knows him for ages...

Maan didn't see his face yet and thought he may be geets friend so she is very excited to see him let me wait till they finish there conversation he is normal till he seen geet talking to him with all josh...He didn't able to accept that geet is close with some other men other than him... his face went down and at last when geet hugs him some thing some where pinches him he knows its a very friendly hug but even though he can't bear that any more and at last he console him self by saying...

may be some close friend of her... let me wait till she comes..

But it didn't happen after some time while talking they both get in to his car and moved away from there...Maan at last seen his face its him yeah its him sanjay...who is the competitor to maan in each and every thing from his grads to business sanjay and maan didn't talk to each other but know about each other as they are belongs to high class society...In the whole business market sanjay and maan are the competitors and two different opposite individuals who having very different opinions and thoughts...sanjay take every thing easily where as maan every thing is serious...

so they hate each other officially...Nothing is in between them neither friendship nor hate... but some thing is in common between them is Money, family name, family business,popularity ,success and both are handsome... all girls are always around this two young business tycoons but when it comes to maan he hate to be friendly with others but sanjay is very friendly with all...

Maan don't like to see geet with him it hurts him a lot...don't know what but he is very much disturbed now and didn't move from there he became statue and can't believe his eyes that geet is with some one else and not even notice him...he was eagerly waiting for her.. to see her.. to talk to her..from the morning but she went with some one else and didn't even inform him...he is lost in his thoughts where his phone buzz

Geet he murmur...yeah its her she called him after a while.. he attend the call finally after 2 or 3 rings...
Maan:ha..hallo( he cleared his throat before speaking so that she can't find that is some thing wrong with him)
Geet:sorry today i came with my friend...don't need to come or pic me up
and I will reach home by my self...you carry on with your work...Bye

hmmm...nothing else he can speak..(he is not ready to cut the call) but she cut the call after informing him...

Precap:Maan went to london with out informing anyone...

Part 14

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago