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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Hey bidzy
don't think i forgot abt this
the pm u sent is still in my dabba
which keeps on reminding me to read it
but my condition just like yours
school psat tests clubs teams etc
will read o re pia and this one soon

be patient with me when i be patient with you
:)

You yourself are missing so many parts of all my ff's :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
OMG!!!...am very very sorry...am very very late in replying to his PM...
wow...very nice concept start and FF,...
congratulations on it...
waiting to read more on this FF...:):):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW BIDZZY...A STRONG N EMOTIONAL BEGINING!!!!!!STORYLINE HAS SOMETHING VERY INTRIGUEING IN IT!!!👏 WHAT S MAYANK'S MISTAKE DAT HAS MADE NUPUR MENTALLY UNSTABLE...DESPERATE TO KNOW😳
THANX FOR D PM...😊
CONTINUE SOON!!!!!!😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats Bidz
another ff .
awesome start ...par first update pe hi itna bara shock de diya.
nupur in mental asylum ??????
she talked like a 7 year old girl ... she forget everything ... how sad.
plz continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Bidzy hope ur holiday comes soon so we can have a update plzzz update hun
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey beautiful concpet loved next time when u update also pm me and send me frnd req so that i can add u in my buddy list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz update this FF...😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx folks for a rocking response and also for being patient! Really sorry for making you all wait for a month... Pls maaf kardo yaaro😳😆

Here's the update... wanted to make it long but that's all I could think of! Enjoy and comment fast😃

One more thing, from the next part onwards, the flashback is going to start, but I didn't plan about it yet so give me some time😳😳

Love
Bidzy❤️
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter Two

"Prem, mujhe Nupur ko ghar leke jana hai, abhi aur issi waqt." I was determined in my decision. I want my old Nupur back at any cost. But Prem asked me to change my decision. We both knew that Nupur could have violence attack anytime, and he was worried for my safety, but seriously I never cared about myself. I only needed my bubbly and smiley Nupur back.. that's it!

"Mayank, ek bar phir sochle.. woh tujhe ruksaan pohocha sakti hai."

"Koi parwaa nahi hai mujhe. Agar mujhe ruksaan pohochakar uski zindagi sawar sakti hai, toh phir theek hai. I'm ready for it!"

"Theek hai phir. Chal doctor se baat karte hai."

**

"Mr. Sharma, Nupur ki haalat aisi hai ki usse kabhi bhi attack aa sakta hai."

"Doctor, don't worry. Main uska pura khayaal rakhunga." I assured the doctor with a smile. I was so happy. Finally I was taking my Nupur to our home; our small world of love which was once filled with darkness, but now it was all going to be the same again.

"Theek hai Mr. Sharma. Main papers ready karwaata hoon."

I sat there with my fast heartbeats. I was praying to God to help me in fulfilling my determination. Till then the doctor ordered a nurse to bring the discharge papers.

"Aap Nupur ko le jaa sakte hai. Par haan, agar koi bhi problem ho toh humhe inform kijiyega."

"Jee theek hai. Thanks a lot."

I thanked the doctor and left from there.

**

"Nupur, yeh humara ghar hai."

Prem went back to his home. I and Nupur were standing in front of our home. Nupur looked here and there; perhaps she didn't recognise the place. I stared at her and unknowingly a lone tear flowed from my left eye. I was happy to see her alive but I truly didn't expect that I'd get her in this way. Anyways, pushing all my thoughts aside, I slide my fingers in hers and held her hand tightly. It was a heavenly pleasure which I was experiencing after five years. As I looked at our entwined fingers, I sighed deeply. It was the feeling I craved for so long.

While I was gazing at our hands perfectly entwined, a drop of my tear fell on Nupur's hand, and as it happened, I felt that something happened to her. I didn't understand what that was but I was pretty sure that my tears affected her. Hopes high, right? Well, I wasn't sure until he turned her face and looked at me.. her eyes spoke volumes!

"Tum rou mat please," she requested me childishly.

I grinned. "Nahi royunga," I said and wiped my tears with my other hand.

"Tum mujhe kaha leke aaye ho?" she asked confusedly.

"Yeh humara ghar hai. Hum aaj se yehi rahenge, ek saath."

"Sach?", she asked excitedly.

"Much."

She smilingly gazed at our home which was lightened up because of the roadside lights. I was amused seeing her like that. I wondered what made her so excited but I was happy seeing her smile.

"Tum khush ho?", I asked to be sure.

"Bohot khush hoon. Pata hai, jaha main reheti thi woh kitna ganda place hai. Waha pe mujhe bilkul accha nahi lagta tha," she informed me with sad expressions.

I felt myself overwhelmed with guilt as she said that. She went through a lot of hardships because of me. I cursed myself for doing what I did five years back, for not believing my love.

"Nupur, yeh bohot accha ghar hai. Tum yaha jo chahogi, sab kuch milega," I told her and instantly she gave a 500-watt smile. Oh, this is the smile I fell in love with!

"Sacchi?"

"Mucchi!", I said imitating her way of talking.

She gave an ocean-sized smile. Suddenly she hugged me and I freezed.

"Thank you Mayank!"

Closing my eyes, I hugged her back to never let her go. Tears gushed from my eyes once again but those were the tears of joy and pleasure!

**

It was late night, so Aastha was sleeping. I was sure that she'd be jumping with joy seeing Nupur back. After all, she was the closest person to her after me. Anyways, I led Nupur to our room.

"Nupur, yeh hai humara bedroom. Iss room mein humari kitne yaadein hai, yaad hain?", I asked with a hope and an expectation that maybe she'd say that she remembered everything, but nothing seemed going that way.

"Nahi yaad hai.", she said and pouted. Aww the poute was still the same as before. So darn cute!

"Koi baat nahi.", I said to her and gave her a side-hug. All of a sudden, she shrugged off my hands from her shoulder.

"Nupur!", I said with disbelief.

"Mayank, main tumse nafraat karti hoon. I hate you! Tumne jo kia uske baad main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti.", she shouted at me and I was dumbfounded.

I was astonished. I had never seen her so angry. She came near me and slapped me on my cheeks. I stood there still and numb. I knew that I deserved it. I just kept on shedding tears. My eyes were fixed on hers; her eyes reflected hate and anger; my eyes reflected guilt and shame.

"Nupur, meri baat suno please."

"Kuch mat bolna. Tum bure ho. Tum acche nahi ho." She exclaimed furiously. Grabbing my hand, she dipped her nails in my skin deeply and gave me scratches.

It was painful but that was nothing in front of what Nupur had suffered all these years. While I was in my thoughts, Nupur suddenly fainted.

"Nupuurr!" I shouted. My eyes widened in shock.

I picked her in my arms and made her lay on bed. I was in so much fear... literally shaking and sweating. Calling the doctor immediately, I informed him about the recent incident, but he ensured me that she just fell in sleep and would wake up in the morning and also informed me that every time Nupur would fell asleep after a few minutes of her attack. I sighed in relief.

**

"Barish ho rahi hai. Shayad bhagwaan aaj bohot khush honge. Kyun naa ho.. aakhir mujhe aaj meri Nupur mil gayi." I said and smiled.

I looked back and saw Nupur peacefully sleeping, that was enough to give me peace, and then I looked at my scratches that were given by her. Touching my scratches and rubbing them slowly, I closed my eyes and tears flowed instantly in pain, but my lips curved in a smile thinking that at least she poured out her anger that were maybe making her feel miserable since years.

Leaning against the wall beside the window, I stared at the sky and the rains which had blessed with an angel in my life.. My Nupur!

**

Pre-cap:

Going back to the past... Mayank Nupur's first meeting!

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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osom dear
felt bad for mayur
both r suffering but nupur suffered more
now waiting for their past to know the story what happened?

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