AR FF ~Undercover Honeymoon~ Updt part10 - pg40

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CutiepieHarshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

hi dear

awesome part

loved it

plz cont soon

thanx 4 pm

take care

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Thanx for pm dear:*

that was lovely update yaar8-)

continue very soon:p

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BeautifulDesire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Nice part! Looks like Armaan and Riddhima are having feelings for each other. :)

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517780

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

nice part

cant wai for them to fall in love

continue soon

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blessed4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

wow amazing part ...and jet ski is sure fun ...pl continue soon and thanks for the pm !!!!

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Awsm part buddy.
Realy nice part.
Waiting 4 d nxt part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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teenorchid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Nyc one. Always fightng slwly fallng in luv

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Rabia Amla

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

mind-blowinnng part. ohhh armaan and riddhima are slowly effectingg one anothaa. yaaay ;) haha theeyy bothh havee onee big ego issueee. wheenn will theey geh ovaa thaahh? buhh imm styll lovinng theemmm. hehe ii jusst foundd thaah fact thaah the intrsuctor askedd bouhh her nails LOL. ooo armaan helpinnn riddhimaaa ;) oye hoyyyee. O O! anothaa cat and dog fight; caan;'t wait for ihhh. update sooon; lookinn forwardd to aa lonnng onnee ;) <3 xoxo

imm lovinngg this FF soo mucchh; iii dunnoo howw AR will fall for each othaa. unpredictablee. youur writee each part beautifully. alwayss look forwardd to each update of yourss. andd whenevaa ii geehh aa PM my reactionn is likee this "Yesss! mona has updateddd her FF ;)"

youurr amazzinnngg. <3 xoxo

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Shruti

@addicted2ksg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Oooh jet skiing!! That's something I've ALWAYS wanted to try! Love how you added that bit about the long nails :D They're such a goofy couple!

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Bhavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: rahmona_pakswe
Replies to part 8:

@bhavya8. Yup they surprise each other and hopefully I surprise my readers (my readers...gosh that sounds nice). AR fights are always hilarious...my only problem so far has been to keep them as realistic as possible. Probaly killed a few braincells along the road. LOL!

Yeah you really do surprise us! I think you've been writing the fights wonderfully well!
Now part 9:
I really loved how they're both so affected by each other. Like dreaming and having trouble with eye-contact. Ridz reaction to having Armaan help change her was so funny, but then when he did, I'm glad it stirred some emotions for both of them. I can't wait for next part, please update soon!!!!! Thanks for pm!!!!