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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: moon_mine
loved it!!!!!
finally arnav n khushi met!!!!
watng fr the nxt part!!!!!
pls update soon!!!!
wanna see a khushi arnav convo!!!!!

Hi moon_mine,

Glad you like Part 12 of Khushi is Kidnapped. Thanks for your comments. I appreciate it.

Best,

KF :-)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: xxMizzyxx
hey great wrk...finally that freak shyaam gt arrested...hpe he stays der 4ever and doesnt return to create problems...and thanxx fr makin arhi meet...cnt wait 2 see what happens next...wen will u be updating ???...plzz make it asap...thanxx

Hi xxMizzyxx,

Thank you so much for your kind comments about Part 12. I will be updating fairly soon. Appreciate your interest in my writing. Thanks for reading.

Take care,

KF :-)

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..
You Are TOOO Good :) I Feel Bad For Khushi, She Is Going Thorught Tough Tym Just Coz Of Shyam :X FINALLY ArHi Met, But Want Them To Meet Properly Next Tym 😳 & Arnav Has To Help Her Coming Out Of Her Trauma 😍 Update SOOON 🤗

Hi Sanzz,

Thanks for your wonderful comments for Part 12 appreciate it. Yes, I will update the first chance I get.

Take care,

KF :-)

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MysticalRealm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

Wow.
One word.
Wow.

Truly truly wowwing.

I loved this to bits and pieces. Everything just molds together perfectly. I really hope you continue soon because now that all this drama is done, I am really looking forward to some ArHi!

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: sruthirishi
omg...tooo gud!!!
jus read @ one shot...a very different story line.!!
gr8 man...keep updates coming asap😃
waiting for ARHI to meet...

plzz add me to ur PM😊

Hi sruthirishi,

Thanks for reading Part 12. So glad you like the story. Appreciate your positive comments. Yes, it is different from the other ff mine is more of a mystery or suspenseful story and less romantic I suppose. Yes, you have been added to the PM list. Appreciate your interest.

Take care,

KF :-)

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: Zeee
yay! arnav knows! shyam is done with wooo! loved it! hope we get a arhi scene next time!
xxx

Hi Zeee,

So glad you liked part 12. Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate your interest in my writing. Your feedback means a lot to me.

Take care,

KF

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#337

great update dear

felt sad for both anjali and khusi and glad sham got his due.

do continue

bye sumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: SiRul
Awesome update but that's so sad to see Kushii like that

Hi SiRui,

Glad you like the update for Part 12. Thanks for your positive feedback/comments.

Take care,

KF :-)

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: bmtdluver
Just read your ff. It's written really well. I'm glad shyam is finally caught and arnav escaped. Hope khushi recovers soon. Please pm me when you update. Thanks

Hi bmtluver,

Thanks for your compliments on my writing. Glad you liked Part 12. Yes, I will PM you when I update. Thanks for your interest in this story. Appreciate you taking the time to give me your kind feedback.

Take care,

KF :-)

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#340

Hello all,

I want to take this opportunity to thank everyone who has taken the time to read any of the parts of this story: Khushi is Kidnapped. I've been pleasantly surprised at the extremely positive reaction this mystery and suspense story has received. I thank you all for your generous comments and for your time in reading it and leaving such positive comments which are interesting to read.

As you may have noticed there are no dialogues in the story. As a writer it has been the first time that I have chosen to not add dialogues and just use a third person narration in the story. It had been bugging me, I felt the story was lacking in some respect in terms of how the characters related to each other in real time and in setting the tone and mood of each scene and the continuity of the plot as a whole for the part I was working on at the time.

So I have gone and added real time dialogues in each part (12) and even changed some of the scenes and added a few. I ended up writing a lot more than I had expected to. So there is real interaction along with third person narration and better plot construction. I think it has added a dramatic flair to the story and made the characters more real and easier to relate to. I hope you like it.

Take a look and let me know what you think. There is a lot to read, and I don't expect you to read all of it all over again. But I wanted to improve the story and I think I have achieved that goal.

Thanks for your interest,

KF