Khushi is Kidnapped Updated Part 19 Page 82 - Page 35

I really enjoyed chapter 12 with the Dialogues. 👏👏👏 👏

Originally posted by: AbhiYa_luver

I'm sorry I didn't reply for the last chapter, but the past few days have been very busy for me.

This was really good! I can't wait for the next part! Shyam is finally getting what he deserves. After all this time, lying, cheating, and stealing, he is finally getting punished for his sins. The part where Khushi attacks Payal I felt was very realistic. People who have gone through stressful events usually do have PTSD, and I really like that you kept the story realistic. I hope Arnav and Khushi will be able to meet soon!

Continue soon!

Hi AbhiYa_luver,

Glad you liked Part 12. The story has been updated significantly - I've added dialogues to all 12 parts. You may have noticed that the parts didn't have dialogues before. I think adding dialogues which was a long process really added more to the story and I think improved it greatly in terms of the fact that you can see the characters speak and relate to each other and react in real time.

And I think it has enhanced the plot as well as bringing a greater sense of continuity to the story than before. I ended up writing a lot more than I expected. So glad you liked the scene of the interaction between the 2 sisters. Now with the dialogues it is even more gripping than it was before. I appreciate that you find the story realistic that has always been my first goal. To keep it real.

My writing is on a completely different wave length than where the show is and that is my intention. Since it is a mystery/suspense story it's going to be really different from the show. I will begin working on the next part today. Really appreciate your feedback, it is invaluable to me. Thank you.

Take care,

KF :-)

Originally posted by: HasanaHasana

Your ff is realy realy good...
Hope d next part wud b d meeting btw arnav nd khushi.
Hey plz do pm me.
Plz

Hi HasanaHasana,

Thank you for your kind words. Appreciate you taking the time to give me your feedback. Glad you liked Part 12. Yes, I will PM you. I have added you to my buddy list so the next time I update you will receive a PM. Thanks for your interest.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: Vsc94

So poignant!

Very sad to see khushi in this state!😭

But Arnav's back...the real medicine to her wounded soul!👏

Hi Vsc94,

Thanks for your kind words. Glad you liked reading Part 12. Appreciate your feedback.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Can We Get Any Update Soon ?! 😳

Hi Sanzz,

I'm working on it right now :-)

KF

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Waiting Then :) 😳

OK. Hope to finish it today :-)

KF

Originally posted by: anjs

beautiful...i didn't knew u updated...was wondering and today checked the link and was pleasantly surprised...

awesome update

Hi anjs,

Thanks you for kind comments. Glad you liked Part 12. I hope you enjoyed reading it. Appreciate the feedback as always.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: mirnalini

OMG!

What a nail biting thriller you've written girl!

Just finished reading the entire thing.

This is impeccably written! So different from all the other FFs on this forum. Very innovative idea, and amazing detail!

The way you've portrayed the role of Karma and fate here is simply poetic.

Keep updating!

Looking forward to the next part.

And plz add me to your PM list😛

Hi mirnalini,

I liked that you called it a thriller. Yes, it is different from the other writings on the forum. Glad you noticed the aspects of fate included in Part 12. It just seemed to fit in very well with the story. Yes, I'm done with the next part and will be post part 13 in a few minutes. You have been added to my buddy list. So you should get a PM when I send them out. Really appreciate your comments and you wonderful feedback.

Take care,

KF :-)