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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: Archanafan
I want my heroine to be strong and empowered, not a spring flower floating away in the wind with no purpose...

I want my hero to be a man, a man's man who is open to change and willing to improve himself and grow emotionally.

I love what you have done to Anjali, that is awesome...

Please PM me when its up...I want to read Part 9 so bad! (-:

Hi there Archanafan,

I'm glad you find Khushi and Anjali empowered in my writing. That is my aim. I guess in that sense they differ from the characters on the show. The girls cry a lot and come off as being weak on the show. Yes, I am trying to add a more human aspect to the male lead's character my hope is that people will empathize with him more and understand him more as a character. Yes I will PM you when Part 9 is done. Thanks for your input.

KF :-)

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

KHUSHI IS KIDNAPPED Part 9

Edited by KaushalyaFan - 13 years ago

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Hello all,

Part 9 of Khushi is Kidnapped is on Page 29 (previous page) has been posted there. Hope you like reading it and enjoy it. Please press the like button and leave your feedback/comments on Part 9. Thanks as always for your interest.

KF :-)

Edited by KaushalyaFan - 13 years ago

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littlemoi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

awesome update!!

aww...poor arnav!! but soo damn happy khushi is free and shyam is trapped!! hope anjali and khushi's misunderstanding clear up soon!!

thank you so much for the pm !

continue soon!!

Edited by littlemoi - 13 years ago

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Ritika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

I liked that the great ASR now has to be humble and basically beg for food. I also like how you showed that the parents didn't care to fill their own stomach as much as they wanted to fill that of their children. Also, I don't think that Khushi can be the same person that she was before. So much has happened to her, and she can't trust just anyone again, like she used to be able to. I'm pretty sure that her confidant, either her only confidant, or her first, will be Arnav, because they have been through similar things. But finally Shyam gets what he deserves. I was happy about that.

Please continue soon!

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Hanieya Rehman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

I LOVED IT!!!!

Your story is such a page turner!!! If this was a book I could keep on reading forver!

I love the way you write...such emotion and flow is a hard feat to achieve and only a few writers can do so!

Thank you so much for writing such beautiful pieces for us!

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mimi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

thnk god khushi has returned home safe!!!!!

hope arnav also returns home safe nw!!!!

want khushi n arnav's lovestory to kick start soon!!!

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Deeksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

gr888 ff.. it is..

i hope shyam goes to hell ..

and arnav is all well ..

continue soon

and plzzz add me to the pm list..

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

Lovley Part :] 🤗 FINALLY Khushi Is Safe & Reached Her Home . I Want ArHi To Meet , Make Arnav Come Home Naaa 😳

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: littlemoi
awesome update!!

aww...poor arnav!! but soo damn happy khushi is free and shyam is trapped!! hope anjali and khushi's misunderstanding clear up soon!!

thank you so much for the pm !

continue soon!!

Hi littlemoi,

Thanks so much for your great feedback. You are welcome for the PM. I realized I hadn't added a link when I sent the PM out. But will do so next time. Happy that you liked Part 9 of Khushi is Kidnapped. Take care.

KF:-)