Originally posted by: AbhiYa_luver
I liked that the great ASR now has to be humble and basically beg for food. I also like how you showed that the parents didn't care to fill their own stomach as much as they wanted to fill that of their children. Also, I don't think that Khushi can be the same person that she was before. So much has happened to her, and she can't trust just anyone again, like she used to be able to. I'm pretty sure that her confidant, either her only confidant, or her first, will be Arnav, because they have been through similar things. But finally Shyam gets what he deserves. I was happy about that.Please continue soon!
Hi AbhiYa_luver,
Thanks so much for your comments on Part 9. I like how you have put your thoughts about what I've written so specifically and succinctly. It helps me understand what you liked and what you enjoyed reading. Thanks for your encouragement as well.
KF :-)
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