Khushi is Kidnapped Updated Part 19 Page 82 - Page 21

hey the update ws fab!!!!

Originally posted by: moon_mine

hey the update ws fab!!!!

pls pm me the nxt time u update!!!!!

Hi moon_mine,

Happy that you liked Part 8. Yes I will PM you when I post Part 9. As always thanks for your kind and encouraging words. All the best.

KF :-)

It's so sad to see arnav like that

Originally posted by: sihamluvparul

It's so sad to see arnav like that

Hi sihamluvparul,

Thanks for your comments/feedback. And thanks for reading Part 8. Yeah, Arnav seems to be going through a bad patch right now ;-)

Best,

KF:-)

I'm wondering when you will write Part 9???

I am seriously hooked.

Can you PM me pleeeze?

Some feedback for you...

When I watch the actual show, and then read your novelist take on things, I can see the difference between a professional writer and one who may not be.

The finesse is missing on the show.

But you supply it by the cartload.

The flow, the suspense and especially the way you make your characters transform themselves with each new experience is very beautiful...

It is not cutesy, you don't dumb them down, they're not taking dips to music every few minutes...you're actually psychologically making them more refined, more human and more susceptible to pain, which we all are.

I want my heroine to be strong and empowered, not a spring flower floating away in the wind with no purpose...

I want my hero to be a man, a man's man who is open to change and willing to improve himself and grow emotionally.

I love what you have done to Anjali, that is awesome...

Please PM me when its up...I want to read Part 9 so bad! (-:

Originally posted by: Archanafan

I'm wondering when you will write Part 9???

I am seriously hooked.

Can you PM me pleeeze?

Hello Archanafan,

I'm done with Part 9 and will be posting it soon. I'm glad you are liking what I'm writing. Yes, I will PM you. Thanks for your interest.

KF :-)

Originally posted by: Archanafan

Some feedback for you...

When I watch the actual show, and then read your novelist take on things, I can see the difference between a professional writer and one who may not be.

The finesse is missing on the show.

But you supply it by the cartload.

The flow, the suspense and especially the way you make your characters transform themselves with each new experience is very beautiful...

It is not cutesy, you don't dumb them down, they're not taking dips to music every few minutes...you're actually psychologically making them more refined, more human and more susceptible to pain, which we all are.

Hi Archanafan,

I am so glad you like the continuity and the suspense I try to add to my writing. I am glad that you noticed that I am trying to make the characters more human than they are on the show. Really appreciate the feedback.

Best,

KF :-)