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This FF was very dry one...and you all deserve some good Maneet moments before I end it... so i am shifting wedding to next part...and in this, enjoy few sweet moments.


Chapter 30 - Khatti mitthi..


At Jaisalmar, to site

"Maan, this is not fair. Neil is working closely on this project with me..."

"Geet, I want some time alone with you. Since you joined back KE, I am not able to even see you." he accelerated the LR.

She grumbled...

"Geet, I know you are very professional and you are not liking dropping Neil for this visit, but today I need you to be alone with me."

"Maan, I was not even willing to come to Jaisalmar. My shopping is not yet done, just 2 days are left for our wedding."

"Yes, I know. That's why this site visit is important before we take break for honeymoon..."

"Honeymoon...? Its only 2 days break..."

"Geet, I can't help it, I can't afford to go on long break..."

"Yes...I understand." she sighed.

"That's why I am trying to spend as much as time as possible with you..."

and then suddenly, the LR stopped with a jerk...he got down, looked at it.

"Geet, we are stuck..." he smiled at her.

"That is what you wanted..." she smiled back at him...

"Yes, get down...we will just go for a walk..."

"here, in this desert...? alone..?"

"Are you scared...?"

She looked at him un-believingly...

"Come on..." and he dragged her out...

She came out...and looked at the sun going down, the orange light reflecting on the dunes... he came from behind and hugged her...

"Geet...I love you..." his throat was choked...

"I love you too..."

"See..I have got something special for you..."

She looked back...He had arranged a table, with candles and drinks...

"Maan..." Her voice choked...

"Geet, I always wanted you to take out, where there will be no one other then us..."

"I am impressed...!"

He gave her the drinks and then arranged for the fire, made her sit near to it...the flames reflecting in her eyes, they mesmerized by each other...

"Geet...Can I ask you for something...?"

She nodded...

He came closer to her, she was amused...confused...he opened her top's first button, his hands traced her neck and then at her mole...

"I always wanted to touch it..."

She nodded, dazzled by his touch, mesmerized...she looked at him...waiting for him...her lips parted...eagerly waiting...

He then lied on the sands, pulled her towards him, opened her hair, his fingers went into them...the black kajaal got mixed with her eyes and she bent, claimed his lips..., he embraced her tightly...

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Next day...

He was anxiously waiting, she was suppose to join him on his private jet... and saw her running almost...behind her Neil...with her luggage, he threw it inside as they reached...she got inside swiftly...

"Geet, this is for you..." Neil gifted her a red rose...

"Neil, see you at marriage..."

"Yes...I will be there..." he waved at her as the craft took up...

She then looked at Maan, who was waiting, frowning...

"Maan...we got delayed...it takes time to select..."

"Geet..."

"Maan, its my wedding..."

"Geet...Please..."

"Maan...you took Radhika out specially for buying jewelleries and today when I asked you, you asked me to go with Neil..." she frowned...

"Geet, Don't bring Radhika between us..., you know I had meetings in the morning..."

"Yes...I know...so you have no rights to complain..."

"Yes, but at least I have rights to claim you right now..."

He grabbed her...as she was still struggling with her seat belt...pulled her towards him...

"Maan...your captain will see us..."

"I have asked him not to poke his nose outside his cabin..."

"Maan...what you are planning to do...?" she was now getting confused as with one hand he opened her front button and his other hand got busy in opening the hooks, his eyes darkened as it gazed her twins.

"Just want to see you..."... he touched her curve lightly and hugged her tightly, feeling her close to him, hearing her heart beat, giving her no chance to escape; she stopped struggling as she felt his hands moving around her, she bent and claimed his lips...


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"Maan..." Yash screamed and came running towards him and straight in his arms.

"Yash..." he also had missed him...and then Yash went into Geet arms...Geet took him inside to show him the toys she had brought...

"Geet, is this the time to come? Just one day before your wedding...You know I am alone handling everything...all guests..." Dadima grumbled as she saw her.

"Dadima...it was urgent visit..."

"Nothing can be more important then your wedding...but both of you don't listen to me."

Geet listened silently...and then as she left, she opened her bags and took out her dress to change...suddenly he hugged her from behind...

"Maan, Dadima will get a shock if she sees you like this with me..."

"I know, you will manage her..."

"Maan..." She showed her anger...

"Geet, I am just waiting for tomorrow, after that I am not going to listen to you..."

"Why you want to wait for tomorrow...?" she chuckled.

"Geet..." he looked at her...surprised.

"Maan, I challenge you...If you want, you have one day in hand..." her eyes were shinning...

He looked at her for sometime..."Fine, I take your challenge..."

"Let us see..." her eyes shinned...

Evening

Geet was waiting eagerly for him, surrounded by all women, dressed up in one of the heaviest lehengas, ornaments...she could hear dhol...baaje...her eyes were searching for him and she remembered her challenge to him...

"What he is upto ...?"

Suddenly her eyes went to Dadima, who was looking admiringly at her, holding Yash's hand, who was standing besides her...Confused with what is going on.

Her dhadkan was increasing, her anxiousness was increasing...she got up and came out looking for him...She could not find him anywhere in the hall...

She called him...but he was not picking up the cell...

"Maan...where are you...?" She anxiously looked around.

She had challenged him...and he is surely upto something, but she wanted to see him once to assure herself...

She called Yash..."Have you see Maan..?"

"Yes, he is sick...I saw him sleeping in the room..."

"Sleeping...? but when there are so many guests around, How can he do that. He is surely upto something..." but then she couldn't control herself, She has to see him...She ran...

She peeped inside his room...and saw him sleeping...she couldn't believe it...

"Geet, don't believe him..." but she could not control and went closer to him and touched his forehead, it was warm...

"Maan..." she called him softly, but he didn't open his eyes.

"Maan, Open your eyes..." but he was still sleeping...

She again touched his forehead, now she was concerned. She went out fast, got the thermometer, and cold wrap.

He was still sleeping, she fastly put the cold wrap and placed the thermometer in his armpit...and as she took it out...

"102 ?" she worriedly got up from the bed, rushed to call the Doctor but before she could go, he got up and closed the door...

"Maan...I thought so...you cheated me...?"

"I loved it...you were concerned for me..." he smiled and slided his arms around her waist, brought her very close.

"Everyone is waiting for us in the hall..."

"I know, but no one will come here..."

"Maan..." her eyes darkened as she saw his eyes feeling with passion...

"So you challenged me...?"

She couldnot say anything...her eyes gazed him deeply, he then lifted her in his arms and brought her to the bed...

Her eyes were stuck at him...anxious,she closed her eyes as his lips came closer, feeling the moment and he then released her...

"Geet, I won...I have got you today, and also, you are willing in my arms but then I will wait for tomorrow..."
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This is no bonus update..have a busy scheduloe tomorrow so posted it now
Edited by goldenball - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is concluding part, very dreamy...I will try to put epilogue next week.
If u see now...its very close take on GHSP, if Maan would have met Geet later...what would have been Geet after going thru hardships of life..
Thanks...all of you.
Chapter 31 - I will fill your life with happiness

Wedding

"Geet, Get up for the feras..." Dadima softly whispered, Geet was lost in her thoughts, she opened her eyes, her eyes were shinning, mist. She then looked at Maan, who was staring her...

"Geet..." he called her again, she nodded and he helped her to getup.

Yash came running behind her as they started taking feras, Dadima tried to stop him but he struggled and came out, ran to Maan...Maan then picked him in his arms and slowly completed the feras...Geet looked at him with proud, only he could have done this...

As they completed Saat fere, everyone started showering flowers...she stood , mesmerized...This is the moment she had awaited so much, this is the moment she always thought of but could never muster the courage for it...

"Geet, Finally you are my wife now..." he whispered, as they made themselves comfortable on the wedding chairs.

She couldn't say anything, today she was not knowing what was making her feel so shy,...she had never felt it earlier...and then...

"Hey Geet, Congratulations...!!"

"Thanks Neil..." she hugged him.

"Geet, I must say, both of you are made for each other..."

Maan came in between..."Neil, I must thank you, that day you made me realized what she means to me..."

and then he looked at Geet, who was confused..."its between us..."

"Maan...how can both of you keep me out of this...?"

"Geet, its man talk...not for you... "

Her brown eyes fluttered...and she bit her lips in anger..."Maan...I will see you..."

"I am waiting for it..." his eyes twinkled...

At Night

Geet was waiting eagerly for him...It was almost midnight and her patience was running out...She looked at Yash, who was sleeping next to her. She was overwhelmed looking at him...he was probably the most happiest one today...running around...not knowing what is happening, but knew something important is happening...Maa wanted to take him to her room, but then she didn't wanted. May be today is their first night, but he is part of them...He was in deep sleep, she cuddled him close to her chest and lied besides him, went into deep sleep.

Maan entered inside and saw her in deep sleep...with Yash. He went and sat near to her, gazing her. She like a princess in wedding attire...Her face brimming with happiness...that smile which he always felt fake, now has disappeared...she is contented, at peace.

He slowly took Yash out of her embrace...and then came to her, lifted her in his arms...

She murmered..."Where are you taking me...?"

"Keep your eyes closed..." he kissed her lightly and and brought her out to his terrace garden..., then made her sit in the araam chair...

"Shall I open it now...?" she again called him.

"No..."

She lied patiently, thinking what he is planning...and he slowly removed her dupatta...her heavy necklace...baring her slender neck; her patience was now running out...she made soft noise, protesting and felt his warm lips covering her and she swiftly moved her hands went into his hair, to his nape...his lips then traced her neck, to her mole...and soon she found her blouse was hanging loose...

"Maan, not fair..you have asked me to close my eyes...I can't see you..." her voice so low...not sure if he heard it...but he did.

"Feel me through your closed eyes..."

As his hand moved inside, she almost shaked with the feelings...the warmth of his hands were making her numb...and she felt the coolness of the breeze...hitting her chest, she pulled him towards her to cover it, his bare body was a shock to her...

She whispered..."Maan, let me open my eyes..."

"Few more minutes..."

She was getting impatient, as his hands moved to her anklets, removing them and she felt his hands moving on her thighs...a soft moan escaped...and she clinged to him, soon she found her lehenga dragged away...she hid herself against his nude torso...he then lifted her and carried her to a near by...and made her lie on it...

"Geet...now open..."

She opened it and saw the moon smiling at them, through dark clouds...she looked around, she was on a bed covered with rose petals...

"Maan...its so dreamy..."

"I promised you, I will fill your life with happiness..."

"Hmm...Yes, start is good..." she chuckled and then her hands moved to his bare body...touching it...feeling him, spellbound by his magnetism...

"I always dreamed of you in my arms like this...and today..I can't believe you are with me..."

"and I never dreamed about getting married..."

He kissed her forehead and then took the sheet and covered both of them...she giggled with pleasure..as his hands were back on job...

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Morning...

She got up and found herself sleeping with Yash on the bed inside, she looked at herself, she was back in her attire...she looked around..No signs of Maan...

She was confused...'Last night was a dream..? Did they really made love...it was so beautiful, under moon light..."

She was still very confused, she went out of the room to the terrrace garden...saw no trace of the bed...

"Geet...what is happening...but last night images...so clear in her mind...it cannot be dream..."

She came back and then looked herself in the mirror...her ornaments were missing...Yes...he took them out...and then she looked...rose petals were stuck in her hair...

She smiled, pinched herself..."Geet it was not a dream..."

She looked back as he saw his image in the mirror..."Maan..."

"Morning I was also not sure, if I saw a dream last night, a princess...so carefree, unbounded... was really in my arms...?"

"So was it a dream...?" she asked him.

"No, it was real because I can feel her fragrance...I can feel her warmth..."

She hugged him tightly...nodding.

"Maan..."

He looked at her..."Geet, what happened to your voice...?"

"Not me, Yash is calling you..."

He looked behind...saw Yash looking at them...

"Yash..." he called him softly, he came running towards them..and straight into his arms...


Edited by goldenball - 13 years ago
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Epilogue
Patiala airport

"Yash..." Geet ran and hugged him as he came out of airport


"Mom you are looking so gorgeous!" and then he looked at Dia, and hugged her.

"Sis, I missed you."

Then he looked around..."Where is Dad...?"

"He is waiting for you at home. He has some surprise for you."

"Not again his lectures...!"

"Yash, you are rude..."

"Mom, you know I love him. But I don't like when he starts reminding me again and again about values.."

"Yash..." she scolded him sweetly.

She had missed him so much, for last 5 years he is at London, completing his studies, finally back today. She felt her throat choked, as she remembered the night she married Maan, and her life changed. Last 18 years just went by and she didn't realized it.. He filled her life with happiness, as he had promised.

"Mom...what are you thinking...?" Dia called her.

"Dia, just thinking how the time flies...I was looking back at life..."

"Mom, you are very lucky. Both you and Dad are in so much love, you still are like love birds..."

"Yes, all credit goes to your Dad..."

Yash was listening to them quietly, suddenly spoke..., "Mom, you are right. "

Soon they reached home...Yash eagerly waited the car to stop, as soon it stopped he ran away inside...

"Dad...Dad..."

"Yash, come here. I am here waiting for you..."

Yash came out running in the portico, and then saw him...

"Dad..." he ran towards him and hugged him.

"Yash...I am so proud to see you back...she is wai ting for you..."

"she ...? waiting...?"

"See...what I have got for you..." and he unveiled a sports car...

"She is so beautiful..."

"Its all yours...".

"Yes...!!" Yash picked up the keys, hurriedly came inside...drove away...

Maan then came back to the hall... "Geet...where are you...?" he, shouted as he entered...

"Dad, mom is in kitchen helping Dadima." Dia smiled...

"Geet,...come out..." he shouted...feeling restless...

Geet came out hurriedly..."Maan..?"

" You know it very well...still...you know it how much restless I become, If I don't see you..." He was upset...

"Maan...I know...but abhi Yash has come..."

"Geet...you know, i will be fine if I just see you..."

She came closer and encircled her arms around him..."I love you..."

"I want this much only from you..." he tightened his arms around her.

"Maan..." maa came out...and he released her from his hold.

"Maan, after so long we all are together. Both of you took off from work and Yash also back, I am feeling so happy to see all and everyone together..."

"where is Yash...?" Maa looked around.

"He has gone for a drive in his new car..."

"I wanted to see him...but he came and vanished..." she mumbled angrily and went back to Kitchen.

"Geet..." he again pulled her towards him, as they were the only one remaining in the hall...

He eyes strated feeling with tears...

"Geet, what happened...?"

"I was thinking, how the time flies...Seeing Yash grown up..."

"Geet...but you are still same...beautiful, sweet...naughty...and I love you..."

"Maann..." she hugged him tightly...

After few hours

"Maan...Yash is not back yet..." Geet was worried now...

"He must have gone to his friends to show his car..."

"No, he knows Dadima is waiting, all of us are waiting...he should be back..."

Geet was restless...moving around...

"Let me call him..."

"Maan...he has no cell..."

he was now worried and then his cell rang...

"Dad..."

"Yash...what happened...where are you...?"

"at Police station..."

"Police station...? What happened...?"

"Dad...Can you please come here..."

"Oh...I am coming there..."

Maan, looked at Geet...whose face was now pale..."Maan..."

"Geet, don't worry...he is my son...he will not do anything wrong..."

Both of then rushed to police station...

"Dad..." he looked at him, as he saw him entering.

"You fine...?" he was worried for him.

"I am fine Dad..."

"Yes, Inspector..." he then saw the Inspector.

"Sir, there was an accident. It was averted well by Mr. Khurana...he hit the truck to save the kids, but then we called him here for formalities..."

"Oh...I was worried..."

"We have entered his statement, you can take him now."

"Fine..."

As they came out...

"Yash, for such a simple matter, you called me..."

"Dad, my sports car is in bad shape...I needed a lift..."

"Lift...?"

"Yes Dad...and now you have to buy me another one.." he hugged him tightly...

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''Love makes your soul crawl out from its hiding place'' -Zora Neale Hurston



Edited by goldenball - 13 years ago
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that was marvellous .
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congrast on new thread
lovely update
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so sweet of u. beautiful update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
but still i want the culprits to be punished
but never mind it's ur story so it u who has to decide
loved to see the cute scene b/w maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago
THX FOR DIS BONUS BONANZAAA...LOVELY...VERY ROMANTICCC...MAAR JAWAAA...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update dearloved maaneet moments
their outing in sand dunes was lovely
loved the way how msk won his challenge
glad that dadi was also eager to see them married
eagerly waiting for their marriagethanks a lot for this bonus updateplease continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter 20

am happy for bonus ❤️

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