MN - Magical Realism. - Page 43

so far story is going great. Thanks for the PM.

such an cute update kinzu!!!
i'm luvin dis new nups!!!!
cont soon!!
luv ya!🤗

U ARE JUST A MARVELOUS WRITER!!!!!!D WAY U WRITE EACH MAGICAL JOURNEY F MAYANK N NUPUR, INSPITE OF IT BEING FICTIONAL IT SEEMS SO REAL AS IF D CHARACTERS ARE STANDING N TALKING RIGHT IN FRONT F MY EYES!!!D WAY U WRITE S JUST HEART TOUCHING!!!!I M ACTUALLY SHORT F WORDS IN PRAISE F YOUR WRITING !! U ALONG VID MAYUR R ONE F D REASON FOR ME JOINING DIS FORUM!!! 🤗

its just mind blowing this update ande me speechless.

I don't know what to say Express.. the difference between need and want.. and the way you have penned it down and the feelings.. were just BEAUTIFUL!!!

Nupur was left alone in the home, staring at walls and the surroundings, she sat down on the sofa hugging her legs and started to wonder about the differences of love and obsession.

Was she really developing an obsession for him?, does she so badly needs to smile all the time that she always needs him beside, or is it that smile or not, she wants him beside.

Again he said, need and wants were different, she still needs him, and he is waiting for the day she will want him!! ' urghh!!. She closed her eyes in desperation and got up,

"whatever nupur!!", she got up smiling, "we'll think about it later, for now!!, mayank said he 'll spend the evening with you", she smiled and started to dream about the evening.

*

"thank you sir", ishita smiled sweetly and mayank smiled back.

"you're welcome, go through this thoroughly and I don't think you'll need any more references", mayank was writing down page numbers on a separate piece of paper and ishita was nervously fiddling with her fingers.

"umm, sir, how is nupur?", she asked slowly and mayank raised his head, 'she is fine"
, he smiled and got back to write while his smile conveyed everything what she wanted to ask.

The glow, sparkle and love - it was so evident with only her name that suddenly his eyes lit up like stars.

"you love her right?", she asked and mayank fingers stopped in between the pages. He raised his eyes to find she was already staring. "right!", he smiled normally and said it with ease and flow that it came as a shock for her, "and does she loves you back?"

This time his fingers didn't stop before they finished their work, "that is none of your business, here are your page numbers, these pages have the best explanations, go through them", he got up and ishita followed him, '

"Sir I am sorry if I was personal but ..

"you were not personal, you were curious, ", he stated simply, "

I wasn't", she fumbled, "I wasn't sir .. I was just ..

"curious, I can understand, it's alright, I didn't mind ishita, it's okay", he smiled, "you just remember that I love her, that is the answer to every question of yours, see you'

**

It was almost 8 in the evening and nupur was waiting for mayank. She wanted him r needed him, she had put this question on a hold for a while and was just waiting for him. Wearing a simple turquoise knee length skirt, her hair were flowing down her shoulders and she was pacing around in the room, when her wait finally finished.

"good evening", mayank entered flashing his warm smile and nupur rushed to hug him, "good evening, you came early"

"early?, I thought wait is always long, even if for a second, but you said I came early?", he pulled her close smiling and nupur threw her arms around his neck, "mayank that wait is different, when you don't know if the person will return or not, I knew you'll come", she smiled looking in his eyes and mayank pulled her more close, "not bad nupur, that felt like coming from a deeply philosophical person"

"but that came from a simple needing heart, a heart that needs you"

"yeah I know, by the way can we move forward to dinner because I even skipped lunch", he pouted and nupur kissed his cheek, "this is the reason I wanted to come with you, you forget eating mayank!!"

"that is because I love my work, and I love when I see hardware getting paid, so it's okay and moreover I have a wife, so eating isn't a problem", he winked and went to change while nupur headed to kitchen with contentment.

It was strange how easily contentment filled her heart when he was around.

**

"how is it?", nupur asked nervously and mayank nodded, leading nupur to frown,

Mayank how is it?", she asked again and mayank nodded again this time with a mischievous smile which made her smile too.

"alright don't tell, but the fact that you ate more than you eat daily shows that the dinner was good", she shrugged her shoulders and got up and was passing him when mayank pulled her back and she fell in his lap, "what mayank?', she gasped.

"you know which language of the world is the most beautiful one?", he placed his arms around her and confused nupur cuddled, "although I don't understand the logic behind this question, but I guess it's urdu, the most poetic and courteous language", she looked up, "right?'

"wrong", he kissed her head, "it's the language of silence, because when silence speaks, even the heaviest words fall short", he pulled her close and nupur snuggled, "you know that was beautiful", she whispered and mayank smiled, "I know, but even more beautiful is how you understood what I wanted to say"

"oh come on mayank, that was no rocket science, it was plain logic, anyone could have guessed that you liked the food"

"yeah, but anyone couldn't have guessed that how much I eat daily and when I ate more", he entwined their hands and surprised nupur looked up, "mayank!!, you are being ..

"what?", he chuckled,

'you are being utterly romantic and I don't know what to say now", she giggled and hugged him tightly, "you don't want to say anything nupur, even I understand silence, you are blushing", he pulled her cheeks and nupur glared, "I do not blush', she was about to get up but soon enough mayank pulled her back, "wrong grammar princess, it should you did not blush, now you do",he rubbed the clearly visible pink blotch on her cheeks and nupur sighed, surrendering all her protests, "how do you do it mayank?, how do you make me sigh every time?", she moved close and mayank leaned on her ear, "because I love you", he whispered and nupur smiled shaking her head, "you should better stay quiet, because you are making me speechless,", and with this she captured his lips in a deep kiss.

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Awww this was a total romantic update ! The sweet subtle romance...n m a big fan of that...:D seriously her realisation is slow but beautiful indeed...:D and the way u write, it makes it even more beautiful!!

nice and romantic one .

aww sooo beautifull and romantic