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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mulan.

hello everyone! as payal said, kinzu is all caught up and busy! so once she is back hoepefully we will get the ususal amazing update expected form kinzu! <3

till thn lets wait patiently! :)

okay..
we wish hr all the best for her exams
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry guys 😳
I am sorry i was very caught up and busy, but now hopefully i'll update daily for a few days, bz then again i have a busy week.
Hope u all haven't forgotten the story and will enjoy!!
Apologies for mistakes and the length.

Chapter 14:

mayank", she murmured and smiling, he pulled her close, "haan nupur?"

"i was just thinking about love", she snuggled closer,

"making love ?", he chuckled and received a punch from her, "about love mayank", she raised her eyes and the softness couldn't mean anything else than what his heart signaled, feeling a contentment settling in his heart, he stroked her cheek, "what were you thinking?'

"i was thinking being in love is beautiful right?', she smiled.

"more than beautiful nupur, it is indescribable ", he smiled back.

"but the whole world is always describing love, songs , poetry, stories, everywhere ..

"they don't describe love, they just describe the feeling of being in love, love is way too beautiful to describe"

"hmmm", she shifted her weight on her elbow and looked in his eyes, "what are your feelings Mr Sharma?"

Although she tried her best to incorporate peppiness in her voice but still mayank did reach the anxiety in her heart,.

"i feel ecstatic, loved, special, ", he leaned and whispered in her ear, "i feel happy nupur .. ", he smiled and she lowered her eyes.

"happy?", she asked slowly,

"yes nupur, i feel happy", he kissed her ear, "do you feel happy near me?'

Nupur raised her eyes and his penetrating gaze touched her heart, "i do mayank, i feel happy when you are near", she smiled sincerely.

"is there any other thing you feel happy about?", he asked.

"ofcourse, my soon to be money", her eyes glowed while the twinkle in his eyes faded a bit.

"hmm, it was expected", he sighed, "lets sleep?"

"so soon?", she pouted and leaned closer, "i was thinking about making love now", she winked and shaking his head, mayank kissed her deeply, passionately and very lovingly.

**

Days were passing with wings, and with then it felt feelings getting in more deep, strong and enriched. Nupur's heart fluttered everytime she placed a cross on the calendar. Every passing day proved that she was coming near her target, near the day she will be awarded with her heartiest wish, but deep down in her heart she knew that with getting wealth meant her days in this house were nearing end, and it used to make her restless.

The house where she came in as a guest started to feel as a home. Kitchen cabinets, laundry room, lounge, terrace, their bedroom - everything seemed a part of her life, he routine. The small household chores, the petty issues, everything felt like her own.

A number of times these thoughts crossed her mind that this life wasn't bad either, a normal house wife to a man who loved her dearly was something fascinating, but then again the deep rooted desire of money used to re surface and her little blooming feelings used to submerge in the tornado of selfishness.

Mayank knew he was heading nowhere, everytime he used to glance at the calendar on nupur's side table, her heart used to sink a beat. Days were passing, she had to leave - she will leave. Many times he saw that flickering flame of love in her eyes too, but then again that used to die. He started to hope for a miracle, anything which will keep her bonded to him, anything .. but he knew miracles are fairly tale elements, forgetting the universal truth that .. Miracles Happen!.

**

"what happened nupur?", mayank pulled close a sweating nupur.

"pata nai mayank, my head is spinning", she closed her eyes and cuddled to him,

"did u eat properly today?, "he asked softly and stroked her hair, "I don't feel like eating anything mayank", she answered back in a low voice and the frowns on mayank's forehead increased.

"nupur lets go to the doctor, you are not well",

"doctor", nupur raised her head alarmingly, and swallowed a lump in her throat, it felt like something ringed inside her mind, "umm, no mayank, I guess we can wait till tomorrow, I'll be well", she tried to smile and nodding mayank continued stroking.

**

Next morning mayank woke up to an empty bed, he looked around and nupur wasn't there, thinking she must be in washroom, he slept again, but then when woke up after an hour, the bed was still empty. Confused he got down the bed and saw that nupur was sitting on the floor, beside the dressing table , hugging her knees and blankly staring at the point.

"nupur!!", mayank gasped and rushed to her, "kia hua?, why are u sitting like this?", he shook her arms and a small plastic stick fell from her hands,

"nupur ..

"I am pregnant mayank".

Chapter 15 - Page 85

Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
API...
EID MUBARAK...
i know meri dono Apis ke xams bhttt acche gaye honge...
awesome update API...
i loved it lodsss...
bt m really scared of Nupur's reaction...
i hope nothing bad will happen...
i hope she will accept dis baby n wont reject dis happiness jst for dos money...
bt m feeling actually bad for Mayank...
i hope she will love him soon...
awesome update API...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
to akhir kar miracle ho hi gaya...
--Sanchu-- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
next update wuld be interestig...waiting for it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice parts, sorry for the late comment. how were your exams, btw?
nupur is starting to feel something for mayank, but she can't name it. she's confused wether its obsession or love! i hope she realizes soon.
ishika wanted to know about MayUr's love for each other, and mayank told her that he loves nupur. i wonder why she was asking. :/
nupur waited for mayank to come home, and even cooked him dinner. their cute blushing moment at the end was really nice :)
nupur still hadn't moved the thought of money off her mind. its important to her, but then it shouldn't overshadow everything! she shouldn't be so greedy, i feel.
i hope she does get the wealth, though. :P
mayank wanted a miracle to happen, and it did. she was pregnant. i kind of expected that twist. :P i wonder what they're going to do now?
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
it shouldnt be the miracle. cuz its not a miracle its just another normal incident. if she needs a miracle to stay, it should be mayank and his love.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yes miracle happens
But some time they give happiness and contentment and some time they gives pain for whole life
Lets see what will happened in this case
Lovely part
thanks for pm
and How was your exams?


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Posted: 13 years ago
Glad ur back Kinzu 🤗 the update as usual was brilliant
Nupur is fallin in Mayank happy for that
hope Mayu's love she'll stay, about the pregnancy is making more intresting the story hope everything goes well
all the best in ur remaining busy week sis
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
very beautiful update and now waiting for mayank's reaction

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