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cyberprincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Very nice marvee, the part where Geet asks maan for one last night , I have seen this in one movie marvee, but in that movie the girl offers herself to the man without telling it as last night and then when they woke up says I offered myself to you for one last night as a token of our love and taking it as memory for the rest of her life, I felt how could one move on after offering themself to their loving person!!

You know what happens in the movie, the Girl on her way back home gets killed herself and its withnessed by her lover, and he goes mad and keeps on waiting for her thinking she will come today for every day. ofcourse apart from this wait he is all good in other matters like getting job etc...

I loved your update later, Geet fought for him, to reject a marriage a lady should have looots of guts... and both didnt move on , the meet up after long is just great, much more than they could ask for in the life.

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

I really liked the os. Mansi is the cutest thing!

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allibr

@allibr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

congrats for ur another os
mind-blowing update
Loved it

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cue1

@cue1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

OMG!!!

Dude that was awesome!!

It was soo beautiful!!

You know i love all your work and this is no exception!!

I absolutely loved it...i kinda want more

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Maya_P

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Lovely OS Marvee... Maan and Maansi bond was sweet...and Maaneet love and passion were magical as usual...hope to see more of Maan and Maansi in some of ur other writings like in untold emotions😉 as Maaneet will be having twins.i could imagine two daughters and Maan as a team.while Geet throwing tantrums