**R.O.L.I.T.S** [II] ||AR FF|| [Part 28 - pg 38] 28/06 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61


[Very Important Note]

{NO PM'S For This Note}





Hey Friends...🤗
hope you all are doing fine...😛
here i m to answer your queries
Many of you had mentioned ...ok few of you had mentioned about confusion in parts...😳

i don't know which part- confused many of you so much...
but i'll try my best to explain,...do ask me again if it confuses u more..😆😉
😉

The latest part was from Riddhima's point of you...but it depends on the scene from who's pint of you scene come out...like last update was from two point of views...
first one Riddhima's and and the writer's i.e me...see i cant explain that convo of Jack & Kabir from Riddhima's point of view as she wasn't there...and she didn't even knew they saw her or anything...if the part is from someone's point of view...than i'll mention it...

so the story is coming in two point of views...Riddhima's & mine...so that scene can be explained briefly...

and 2nd there is no confusion with track

Story till now is simple...but that's according to me only...may be i confused you all alot...do tell me if the track is becoming clumsy or anything which you feels is not right...

now comes the main thing story till now...do read it whether you like it or love it...😉...(i didn't mentioned the hate thing coz i know if you had hated my FF...you wouldn't have come here to see the note...see the smart side of mine...😎...)now back to topic

Rainbow is a musical group of 7 friends...Armaan, Sid, Shilpa, Muskan, Anjali, Rahul & Atul...they are students...living their lifes to fullest...no worries...attached to each other like 7 bodies but one soul...a grand career waiting for them...life is just about to take them on 9th cloud...A grand concert just for them...fame, money, passion & much more...

college fights, rumors, fun is also included...

Suddenly someone is spying on them...

than out of blue some Riddhima Gupta a random girl from Shimla enters in their life...but than a misshappening happens with Armaan's partner Naina & she got injured & replaced by Riddhima...who is not ready to be part of them for her own reasons...(which wil be disclosed in future...)but she agrees on last moment...but what Rainbow is not aware of is - she knew every single detail about them...some one had already sent a courier containing all information about them...

with the story you will see their life's...bit about everyone of them...including Riddhima...she is positive or negative you will know it soon...may be in nxt 5 parts depends on my speed of writing..wink ...so coming back to the track...ya...than Armaan hurts her by saying few things and she denies to be a part of the concert...and than she got kidnapped by someone in front of armaan's eyes...the twist she was kidnapped by his own Rainbow members...in anger she agrees and went Goa with them...this is present track...here in Goa everyone knows her...scared of her...(why??? well answers wil be disclosed in future...with her identity..).she has begin to break Rainbow...and actually succeed in first step...still in her thoughts she feels guilty...and continues to do the devil & evil things...

hope i cleared everything...pls give you views...i don't want to make my FF like Ram Gopal Verma's Aag.....need to know your views about the whole comfusion thing...if i forgot to answer any point mention in your comment...

now comes...

- Does Armaan will be able to save his Rainbow Group from Riddhima's evil plans...
- Or He is also one of her target...
- Who was spying on them...did the person stopped spying or...he/she is hiding behind the curtains...
- Is Riddhima doing all this for just a shot part time revenge??? or something big is about to come...


to know the answers stay tuned


**R.O.L.I.T.S** ||AR FF||






PS:- If any of you would like to receive a PM please add "Jannat_PMacount" to your buddy list





Take Care

LOTS OF LOVE...

JANNAT...😳




Edited by jannat4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: jannat4ever



[Very Important Note]

{NO PM'S For This Note}





Hey Friends...🤗
hope you all are doing fine...😛
here i m to answer your queries
Many of you had mentioned ...ok few of you had mentioned about confusion in parts...😳

i don't know which part- confused many of you so much...
but i'll try my best to explain,...do ask me again if it confuses u more..😆😉
😉

The latest part was from Riddhima's point of you...but it depends on the scene from who's pint of you scene come out...like last update was from two point of views...
first one Riddhima's and and the writer's i.e me...see i cant explain that convo of Jack & Kabir from Riddhima's point of view as she wasn't there...and she didn't even knew they saw her or anything...if the part is from someone's point of view...than i'll mention it...

so the story is coming in two point of views...Riddhima's & mine...so that scene can be explained briefly...

and 2nd there is no confusion with track

Story till now is simple...but that's according to me only...may be i confused you all alot...do tell me if the track is becoming clumsy or anything which you feels is not right...

now comes the main thing story till now...do read it whether you like it or love it...😉...(i didn't mentioned the hate thing coz i know if you had hated my FF...you wouldn't have come here to see the note...see the smart side of mine...😎...)now back to topic

Rainbow is a musical group of 7 friends...Armaan, Sid, Shilpa, Muskan, Anjali, Rahul & Atul...they are students...living their lifes to fullest...no worries...attached to each other like 7 bodies but one soul...a grand career waiting for them...life is just about to take them on 9th cloud...A grand concert just for them...fame, money, passion & much more...

college fights, rumors, fun is also included...

Suddenly someone is spying on them...

than out of blue some Riddhima Gupta a random girl from Shimla enters in their life...but than a misshappening happens with Armaan's partner Naina & she got injured & replaced by Riddhima...who is not ready to be part of them for her own reasons...(which wil be disclosed in future...)but she agrees on last moment...but what Rainbow is not aware of is - she knew every single detail about them...some one had already sent a courier containing all information about them...

with the story you will see their life's...bit about everyone of them...including Riddhima...she is positive or negative you will know it soon...may be in nxt 5 parts depends on my speed of writing..wink ...so coming back to the track...ya...than Armaan hurts her by saying few things and she denies to be a part of the concert...and than she got kidnapped by someone in front of armaan's eyes...the twist she was kidnapped by his own Rainbow members...in anger she agrees and went Goa with them...this is present track...here in Goa everyone knows her...scared of her...(why??? well answers wil be disclosed in future...with her identity..).she has begin to break Rainbow...and actually succeed in first step...still in her thoughts she feels guilty...and continues to do the devil & evil things...

hope i cleared everything...pls give you views...i don't want to make my FF like Ram Gopal Verma's Aag.....need to know your views about the whole comfusion thing...if i forgot to answer any point mention in your comment...

now comes...

- Does Armaan will be able to save his Rainbow Group from Riddhima's evil plans...
- Or He is also one of her target...
- Who was spying on them...did the person stopped spying or...he/she is hiding behind the curtains...
- Is Riddhima doing all this for just a shot part time revenge??? or something big is about to come...


to know the answers stay tuned


**R.O.L.I.T.S** ||AR FF||






PS:- If any of you would like to receive a PM please add "Jannat_PMacount" to your buddy list





Take Care

LOTS OF LOVE...

JANNAT...😳






hey jannat... i don't think its confusing...its myserious or we can say supspense but not confusing...mujhe shrue se sabclear hai...but mystery ko chod kar😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
hey love the note
u clear all confusionx thankjx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
HEY CONGRATS FOR NEW THREAD

awesome update

thanx fo rpm

continue very soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Thanx 4 d note.
Update super soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Hey dear the part was absolute amazing...felt bad for atul in btw loved d song too...update asap thanks for d pm:):):)... love kiara.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Liked the part Jannat. Personally I dont like picturising Ridz in a -ve role. But I can take it, because I enjoy reading something different. Hats off to you... for pulling out 3 different stories with same charecters. Thank you a lot for keeping us entertained..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
hey jannat di
frstly congratulations on ur new thread
i hope there r many more to come


coming to d update
it was a mindblowing update
hhmm ridzy's evil side s really evil
but igues theres some reason
or some mystery behind her
hmm she s ignoring her feelings
lekin kab tak she shud accept she s
feeling bad while hurting them
nd she shudnt do that
update super soon
nd thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

u r awsome writer...

continue soon...😊

Edited by minnat_mahi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
hey

njoyed last update ...story has interesting plot ..but ridhima's behavior is little weird & confusing and why she hates rainbow so much ...waiting to know wat is ridhima's connection with goa and why those 2 guys were scared from her :))

update ssoonnn

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