lovedthe update dear but i feel sotry has slowed down a little bit
i am sure u want to show the challenges they faced together and the part where Maan shared his turmoil with Geet was beautifulbut today's part, though nicely written didn't give me the next flow i was looking forjust my personal opinion so don't feel badhope to read the next update soon
I was looking forward to such a comment...
Thanks a ton... When I now read the story today, I had the same feeling... But then couldnt edit the part...
What flow were u looking upto btw??? I'll make sure I give u something better next time...
I am really glad someone helped me improve... 😊😊😊
Thanks again...
Looking forward to hear more from u...
Love
Sakshi
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