OS - Dupatta, Part XIV, posted on 1/11 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Very well written updates..pls continue..

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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 part nicely written w8ing for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one angel!!
I wonder what Nani's told Arnav!!
Looking forward to the next part!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh Tin

i love the pace ur going with ,

very interesting :D

and talking abt Humsafar the show is great but try to catch MAat too

its on Hum tv and u will never know whats coming ur way ,

One of the best story i read ever by Umera Ahmed (im sure u heard the name )

try to watch it too :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
O I just died in ur arms tonight! I love the use if Faiz!!! He's my favorite!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love this OS!! can you please add me to your pm list. thanx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Friends, I am sorry the update is not ready, I will try to do one more update before I go on leave tomorrow afternoon, much as I wanted to complete the story it seems I have to do it on my return at the end of the month...Love Tin
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter XIII

Ji what?...I did not get you, come again please….Arnav exclaimed, clearly hearing a more shocking news!!

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The return journey was done in breakneck speed, it is a miracle they are still alive thought Khushi as she followed Arnav who strode into the house after bringing the car to a halt in the evening...

Chhote!! Exclaimed Anjali who was sitting at the dining table and helping the children of the servants who work in the house with their homework, what are you doing here...I thought you are on honeymoon!!

Di what am I hearing...I mean Naniji in the morning called me up ...

Oh God Naniji...hey bhagwan aisa koi baath nehi hai, it is just that after all these years I brought a man home, he is just a friend...Naniji bhi kya ...aur tum chhote...you could have spoken to me instead of driving back...aisa koi baath nehi ha for which you have to come back...

Who is this man? What does he do? When can I meet him? Arnav pulled a chair to sit next to Anjali...Anjali asked the children to go to her room and complete the work, she would join them soon...Khushi I am sorry, I had told Nani to take it easy but I guess is was too excited aur mere pagal bhai apna honeymoon beech me chhorke a gaye...

Khushi tried to give a smile, well he got what he wanted and in full cooperation from her too, she once again cursed herself...

Di I asked you something...

Chhote I don't have answer to all your questions, his name is Dev Dutt, he said he was a regular kind of guy with a regular 9 to 5 job, got a beautiful labrador by the name of Mojo...

Bus? Aur kuch?

Aur kuch nehi, today morning after our walk, he said he will drop me to the gates of my house, I invited him for breakfast, he was reluctant at the begining but then I said have a glass of juice...

So you are morning walk partners?

Well sort of, never spoke until yesterday till he invited me for coffee...

Khushi noticed Arnav jaw dropped...only yesterday and you are in love with him!!

Chhote when did I say I love Dev, I am just attracted to him...

Anjali didi will you start living together with Devji now? Khushi asked in an innocent voice...

While Arnav looked furious, Anjali smiled broadly not a bad idea Khushi, der se hi sahi but then we can give it a shot what say...

Nothing, Arnav growled before Khushi could reply, Di before you go any further with that man err gentleman I would say I would like to meet him first...

Chhote!! Anjali exclaimed...

Di I am not saying no but then I would like to meet him, whenever/wherever he is comfortable...and I mean it, saying so Arnav Singh Raizada walked to his room...

After he left, Anjali turned to Khushi, I am sorry Khushi yuhi tumhe ana para, you had to come back here for nothing, I told Naniji not to get hyper dekho toh Chhote came rushing back ...

Anjali di please do not apologise, it is good to see he atleast has some feeling for someone in this world...

Aisa baath nehi hai re Khushi, the thing is the adversaries of life makes you...

Hello Hi bye bye...whom do I see...Manorama was up from her siesta, isn't it Khushi, huwa kya that you are back from your honeymoon?

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Khushi went back to her room to see Arnav half undressed without his shirt, speaking to someone on the phone….

Listen I want full information, kaha rahta hai, most probably in our locality, kya karta hai and etc etc, note down whatever there is to be noted….naam is Dev Dutta, he has a dog with whom he walks in the Park with my Di….as he disconnected the phone, his eyes fell on Khushi glaring at him….

Admiring your handiwork? He asked rubbing the nail marks left by Khushi on his torso….

Khushi turned red, I think you should leave Devji alone….I don't think Anjali didi will like what you are doing….

Listen mind your own business, she is my Di and I know what is best for her…

Of course yes but she is also my 'nanad' I have every right to think about her wellbeing….

Nanad? Arnav curled his nose….

Or have you forgotten that you my husband…..

Hardly but then most of the time you refuse to act like a wife…

Khushi stood difiant, clearly she was not in agreement…

Even last night I found out I was being taken for ride ….

Woh mai…..

First learn to perform the duty of the wife aur uske baad show your alligence to my family…picking up his towel he went to the bathroom…

Yeh kya baath hui, what does he mean by this? And who is he to certify me to be a good wife when he himself does not believes in marriage…

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Anjali was sitting in her room, watching TV but not registering anything, she knew her brother, he was very possessive about her, she was his anchor, he was hardly 14 when that incident happened, Anjali remembered those days which followed, he could not sleep alone, most of the days crying in his sleep, clutching her hand…Anjali was afraid of losing him to some mental case but then it was Nani who said, love and time are the only healing factors…

Oh how many times Anjali sat outside his class as he attented school and how many times he sat next to her as she worked in the tailoring shop, following her like puppy, not that Anjali was hurt anything less but then it is for him, Anjali had to forget her own grief…

One day Arnav suddenly grew up, the day, the school principal paid him for designing the dresses for school annual function, a special prize and appreciation was also made during the prize distribution ceremony, the shy, scared boy suddenly became confident as he was pushed by his sister to walk to the stage to receive it…

Anjali was worried, she knew much as her brother looked confident and hauty, he was still an insecured boy inside, she knew he was worried about her, she was still his lifeline which he never wanted to let go, he must be now desperate to find out more about Dev….knowing Dev who did not speak much about himself nor wanted to know about Anjali, though he dropped her home, had juice here today morning, he never asked till now, whom this house belongs to…yes many in the locality there were many rich people and in Delhi people liked to keep themselves to themselves, Anjali was not sure how would Dev take her brother's possessive attitude …

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Dear Friends, this is the last update till I come back from leave...keep well..love Tin

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..too goood..btw when r u returning???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sarach

wow..too goood..btw when r u returning???

end of the month😉

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