OS - Dupatta, Part XIV, posted on 1/11

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Friends,
My name is Tintiny, you will get to know me gradually, I am a late entrant in this show so was catching up on the show...I got to see the scene where Khushi pretends to faint and ask ASR to bring a glass of water and she runs away getting the opportunity only ASR comes to see the Dupatta slipping between the doors, I loved it so here is first part of the OS I decided to write...hope you will enjoy it !!
DUPATTA
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Arnav could not believe his eyes, here in the middle of the hall he was standing like a fool holding a glass of water and again she has fled, his eyes caught the slipping of dupatta between the door'So Khushi Kumari Gupta has once again managed to get away, Arnav threw the glass of water on the floor making his mami jump from her skin'.

Areh Arnav beta, kuch chahiye tumhe she asked trying to gauge the reason for his sudden temper but then Arnav Singh Raizada did not reason to get angry as Monorama watched Arnav striding past towards his room, Monorama cursed herself for asking, he did not even acknowledge her presence, hello hai bye bye she almost whispered to herself who wants to stay in this house where there is no respect and let alone acknowledgement but then remembering her good for nothing husband and her son who loved to work for ASR (pata nehi kya dekhta hai apne bhai pe) and of course the comfort of the house'..

Jaiprakash, Jaiprakash kaha mar gaya'..clean the floor and ask the driver to take out a car, I am going to the spa to beautify myself and relax a bit'.thoda aaram karke ayu'.is ghar me toh'..

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Standing in the terrace attached to his room, Arnav clipped the branches of his favourite potted plants, what a chit of a girl, she even acts her faintness and what a fool I am not realizing it'..why the heck she cannot stand still and hear him out for a change?!! Aisa toh nehi hai I have a bad breath that she runs away'.

ASR, ASR are you there'.Lavanya was calling out but he was in no mood to answer'there you are, I am going to the office, some girls have turned up for modeling assignment, sent by the agency, let me see if they are of any use'.

Well that is your job'he literally snapped at her'.why the heck she is telling me even'in anger he trimmed a branch a bit too much'..Oh shit yeh maine kya kar diya, he barely heard Lavyana's heels clicking away, he felt guilty for snapping at Lavanya and cutting the branch carelessly, while he was in no mood to apologise to Lavanya as the girl seldom used her brains, he still could not fathom what did he see in her except for her great body, he was more sorry for cutting off the branch a bit too much, looking for a spare pot he decided to plant it when he heard two cars driving out of the gate'.one was carrying his mami and another Lavanya'he shook his head 'no use to telling them to save fuel, most probably going in the same direction but then he could afford it'..he concentrated on the plant trying to cool his temper when he heard the gate opening again, now who? He cursed himself for failing in concentrating the work he was doing, kya ho giya mujhe, why am I losing myself when he watched the reason in the form of Khushi Kumari Gupta walking in through it'.so she is back he narrowed his eyes, suddenly it struck him his there was nobody else in the house now except for the servants and he if he reaches the door before any of them he could teach this Khushi a lesson of her life time, throwing the clipper and the gloves he ran down across the hall towards the door'.

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Khushi walked towards the portico to see two of the cars parked in front of it was missing, good so Laat Governor has decided to go to office at last she thought, this is what happens if you are the boss of your own office, ane jaane ka koi time nehi, somedays he will sit in his studio making sketches of funny looking dresses or roam around in his terrace digging at plants'and they say he is damn good'isme good kya, who wears those dresses except few rich ladies who love to spend on good for nothing items, ha ha he does have other businesses but those are mainly taken care by Akaash and his other employees'jaye bhad me, why am I thinking about him, he is not worth it and mujhe apna kaam se kaam rakhna chahiye, apna kaam karo, ghar jayo, get money for what you are doing'khel khatam paisa hajam'.Khushi raised her hand to push the bell when the door opened'.

Areh vah Jaiprakash Bhaiya, aapka toh koi jawab nehi Khushi exclaimed only her words died in her lips, he was standing with a mean smile'' to be continued...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Tin, Nice to see your post on this forum... have been a silent reader so far...would like to see how you take the story forward...looking forward to the update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Tintiny!!!
Loved the OS.
Its great to read your writing again!
Looking forward to you continuing!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tintiny...loved ur name😃
n da OS..really wna see hw u cntinue dis😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey pls continue writing...and add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jayati
Welcome to this forum. Loved your writing. As usual crisp and interesting. So what now? The potted plants have got their treatment; Kushi ki bari toh aagayi. Waiting to see what Arnavji has in store for her.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks friends for the wonderful welcome. I love to write but not getting enough time to write anything long now as I am busy with my story in the fourm called http://alliswell.express-forum.net which I run with my friends, a free forum all you need to do is sign up and secondly being a Bengali we have our Durga Puja in another two days...This OS I will complete within next part hopefully which I will put up today and lets see if I can write a few more short ones...if you like any scene pm me, I will try and watch it and then if it strikes me will do something about it...till then love Tin
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi welcome to IPKKND, thanks for the OS .
hope you write a FF here to 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey di
welcome to this forum
just loved the 1st part
do continue soon

love
Nidhi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tinni Di, welcome to the forum...šŸ¤—


The part was lovely, as usual...hope to see some amazing work from you regarding ArHi in future...😃




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