Anjaan-AK FF pg.117 10/12, THE END - Page 26

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Posted: 19 years ago

ANGAD FIRST THEN KRIPA!! BYUT PLZ CONTINUE SOOOn

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Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
I LOVE URE FANFIC

URE BRILLIANT

Please continue soon 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

THANKS FRIENDS FOR HELPING ME

next part will be posted today, iam working on it

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Posted: 19 years ago
next day
angad is waiting fro kripa in a cafe
a: looking at the watch, ye kripa abb thak kyun nahin ayi anedho vuse main bath bhi nahin karungha
just then he sees kripa entering the cafe, kripa waves to angad but angad turns to the other side
k: (thinking) shayad vuse gussa aya hey and she checks her watch oh no main tho pura ek ganta late ayi, abb kyaise vuse manavu
kripa goes and sits oppoiste to angad
k: hi angad
a: .......
k: angad iam sorry
a: .......
k: sorry bhola na abb tho idhar dekho
a: .......
k: main bhi dekhunghi tum bath kaise nahin karoghey
she getsup from her seat goes near angad and kisses his cheek
angad mouth is half open in shock by her action
a: kripa tum ye kya kiya sab log humain dekh rahey hey
k: angad ye tho meri dialouge honi chahiye anyway tum bath tho kiye
a: lekin kripa tum ithni late kyu ayi
k: kya karu achanak hospital jarruri kam agaya tha, agey se main late nahin avunghi tik hey abhi kuch order kare mujhe bhuk laghi hey
a: agehy se tum late ayi tho bhi mujhe kuch problem nahin hey
k: oh kisliye
a: oh issliye ki jab bhi tum late avoghi main gussa hojavungha aur tum mujhe mannane keliye kiss karoghi
k: hits his hand playfully, besharam
and both laugh, they order something to eat and drink and head back to home
angad drops kripa at her home
when kripa is about to get down from the car angad holds her hand
k: angad chodo meri hath
a: kripa kya jana jarruri hey kya
k: nahin tho its already late mujhe ghar main bahuth kam hey aur kal subha hospital tho jana hey
a: please kripa thodi dhair aur
k: ek karam kariye angad ji, jaldhi se app mere hath mangney mere ghar ayiye aur mujhse shaadhi karlijiye
a: wow what a idea abhi mangtha hu tumhara hath
k: budhu pehle uncle aunty se bath karle phir vunke sath gahr ko ana samjhe aur abb mujhe jane dho
angad lets go of his hand
a: I LOVE YOU
k: I LOVE YOU TOO, abb jao good night
a: good night
suryaban is watching all this from the window, he has tears in his eyes
angad drives back to his home, all the way he is thinking how to tell his parents about his love. he calls aliya
aa: hey anagd kaha ho tum jaldhi ghara ana mummy, papa tumhare wait kar rahey hey and she just cuts teh phone
a: isse kya huva, mujhe bath karne ki moukha bhi nahin dhi kahi vunko aliya ne mere aur kirpa ke bare main bathadhiya kya oh no
and he increases his speed and reaches home
angad enters home calmly where he sees his mother in the dinning room arranging the dinner, aliya watching something in the tv, dilip looking at him seriously
a: dad .....
di: chup angad tum kuch nahin bholeghey
na: angad ithni badi bath huvi tumne humse chupaya kyun
a: maa main app se bathane vala tha lekin
di: lekin kya angad
a: dad oh bath nahin hey main darr gaya tha issiliye nahin bhol paya
di: angad iss main darr ne valli kya bath hey
na: atleast abb tho bholo hum tumse suna chahthey hey
a: oh dad kya hey na
di: angad bholegha bhi ya nahin
a: dad main kripa se pyar kartha hun aur vuse shaadhi bhi karna chahtha hun
di,na: kya???????
di: ye tho bahuth achi bath hey, turning towards naina , naina ajj main bahuth kush hu ek hi dhin mujeh dho dho kush kabri milgaye
listenning this angad is shocked
na: luaghs, haan main bhi bahuth kush hun, kripa bahuth achi ladki hey
dilip hugs angad
di: iam really proud of you beta
angad is still in shock, he looks at aliya who is trying real hard not to laugh
na: arey kya huva beta ayise kya dekh raha hey thu
a: mujhe kuch samjh main nahin a raha hey
na: iss main mushkil bath kya hey jo tujhe samjh main nahin a rahi hey
a: app pehle ye bholiye app kaunsi bath kar rahey tey, mera mathlab dhusri bath kya hey jo app mujhse naraz tey aur kush bhi
di: kya tujhe sach main patha nahin
a: nahin dad
di: tujhe young achiever of the year award mila hey
a: kya!!!!!......wow thats great
aa: congrats bhaya .... lekin pakad gaye na app ajj tho
a: twisting aliya's ear, tho e sab tera plan tha
aa: ouch, bhaya kan chodiye na iam sorry
a: lekin thune e sab kiya kyun
aa: app kripa ne mujhe ye nahin bhola ki app ko kripa ne haan kaha ya naa jab app vuse propose kiye tey issliye maine revenge le li
na: abb tho bathadho beta kripa ne haan kaha ya naa
a: kuan angad ko naa kaha saktha hey
aa: with all excitment, mathlab kripa ne haan bholdi
a: yes
di: akhir beta kiska hey
every one laughs and they enjoy there dinner and goes to bed
next day
angad is working busily at office someone knocks his door
a: without looking up, come in
someone comes in : hello beta
angad looks up and it is suryaban
a: gets up from his seat, uncle app yeha , please bytiye tho, kya lenghye chai ,coffee
su: main tumse ek jarruri bath karne aya hu
a: bholiye, kisbare main
su: beta main kripa ke bhare main bath karni hey mujhe tumse
a: kahiye
su: kya tum sache dil se kripa ko pyar karthey ho
a: kripa meri zindhaghi hey
su: tho tumhari zindhaghi ke bare main ek sach kahni hey mujhey tumse
a: ji

thats for today
hope you guys enjoy the part , the truth will be out in my next part
thanks once again for voting
luv
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg what will be the sach of kripas life

pls cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg wats that truth plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great part! I rly waana know the truth! Cont. soon plz!
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Posted: 19 years ago
kiya yaar itna suspense dal ke kidhar chiligayi 😭 plz tell me truth varna mein maarjaoungi 😆 (me and dieing for a ff no way 😆 )continue soooooooooon 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
GR8 Part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wut's the truth??????????hurry i am dieing with suspense! cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
HERE COMES THE TRUTH PART


su: angad kripa ko 5 saal ki beti hey
angad is shocked
a: appka mathlab kripa ki shaadhi ho chukhi hey
su: nahin angad, vuske sath jabardhasthi huva tha
a: lekin kripa ne mujhe bathaya kyun nahin
su: aghar vuse yaad raha tho kuch bathayeghi na
a: mathlab main kuch samjha nahin
su: 6 saal pehle hum log shimla main rehtey tey, ek bar kripa ne vuski teacher ko sab ke samne wrong prove kiya tha aur vuse insult samjhkar vus teacher ne ek dhin jab kripa ghar main akeli thi akarr vuse jabardhasthi kiya tha
angad's blood is ragging with anger
su: jab sakshi ghar ayi tho oh kripa ko dekh kar pareshan hogayi thi, kripa behosh thi,vuski halath bahuth buri thi, sakshi ne mujhe phone kar ke bathayi, jab kripa ko hosh ayi thi vo kuch nahin bhol rahi thi main darr gaya tha, jab doctor ko dikhaye tey tho patha chala ki kripa mental shock hone ke vajha se ayise behave kar rahi hey, aur oh kab thik hoghi bhi bhol nahin paye doctors ne, maine kripa aur sakshi ko lekhar nainital gaya tha vaha jane ke badh sakshi aur meri maa kripa ko chotti bachi ki tarah dekhli aur dho mahine badh humain patha chala ki kripa pregnant hey, humne soch ki abortion kare lekin vuse kripa ki jaan ko hi kathrey thi, kripa ko patha hi nahin tha, hum bholthey bhi kya vuse, jab vuska delivery huva tha thab oh bache ko payidha karke behosh hogayi thi, maine bache ko apne maa ke pass chod dhiya , dho dhin badh jab vuse hosh aya tha vuse kuch yaad nahin tha, vo humain puch rahithi ki oh hospital main kya kar rahi hey, jab doctor se puchey tho
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flash back
su: doctor ye kya hey meri beti ko kuch yaad nahin hey
do: apki beti ki bhimari ek rare case hey, oh shock ke vajhese kripa ki dhimakh ki ek portion numb hogayi thi, jab oh pregnancy ke pains ke vajhase jo part numb hogaya tha oh dhire dhire kam karna shuru ho raha hey au vuse kuch bhi yaad nahin raheygha
su: maghar doctor vuse kabhi yaad agaya tho
do: ayise logo ko purani bathey thab yaad ayenghey jab oh same places gaye tho, aur normally vunhe yaad anekhe chances bhi sirf 10% hey , lekin....
su: lekin kya doctor
do: lekin vuse aghar app zabradhsathi yaad dhilne ki koshish kare tho oh pagal hone ke chances bhi hey
flahs back ends

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su: issiliye humne kripa se ye bath chupayi aur vuse bathaye ki vuska accident hogayi thi issiliye oh hospital main hey aur hum log bombay agaye hey
a: abb oh bachi
su: oh meri maa ke pass hey, har saal camp bhol ker main jake vuse dekh kar atha hu, aghar ye sab kuch jane ke badh bhi tum kripa se shaadhi karna chahthey ho tho main tumhara ye yehsaan(favor) kabhi bhul nahin pavungha
saying this suryaban goes away from there leaving a shocked angad
angad is not able to decide what to do, he cancels all his meetings and goes to home
at Khanna mansion
naina is going through some magzine, she sees angad coming with a dull expression
na: (worried) angad beta kya huva tum ithne pareshan kyun ho
a:(thinking) should i tell my parents about this
na: angad bholo na
a: kuch nahin mom bus thoda thak gaya hun
na: beta tum apne kamre main ja ke aram karo main tumhe khane keliye kuch lavunghi
a: nahin mom mujhe abhi khane ka mood nahin hey
saying that he goes into his room
a:(thinking) kripa kya galthi thi ki vuse a saza(punishment) mili hey, kripa ko ye sab yaad nahin hey oh abb mujhse pyar karthi hey, aghar mom aur dad ye bath nahin mane tho, nahin main ye kissiko bhi nahin bholungha
in the evening angad gets a call fom kripa
a: hey kripa
k: angad main tumse naraz hun
a: kyun maine kya kiya
k: mujhe tumse abhi aur issi waqt milni hey, jaldhi se mere gahr ko ajao
and she disconnects the phone
angad gets ready and goes to the kripa's home, he don't see any light in the house he looks around for kripa
a: kripaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
suddenly someone closses his eyes from back
a: kripa ye kya hey
k: angad tum chup hojao aur haan apne ankhain(eyes) bandh karke mere sath chale
she takes him near dinning table
k: angad now you can open your eyes
angad opens his eyes and sees a cake which is home made
on the table on which it is written congrajulations
a: kripa ye sab kya hey
k: tumhe award ane ki kushi main, abb jaldhi se cake cut karo na mujeh bhuk lagh rahi hey

thats for today
hope you guys like the part, please do write comments
luv
sweety

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