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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum updates.. I luv d racing part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
so they finally met...😃 loved maan's entry in the FF... n geet's rxn ... the whistle😍... awesome update... mzaaa aa gya ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

loved it

awesome

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u r superb diii 👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by yashviagarwal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundhlae aks
(means hazy image..)
part 5


Geet ' frankly main ne uska face nahi dehka.. so I guess hot chikna
armaan rolled his eyes..
stop type casting
Geet '
wat ever he was not bad
armaan looked at her awe.. it was the first time she ever accepted someone was good ..
Geet '
kya hain aisen kyun dehk raha hian
armaan looked away
..kuch nahi
Geet made all kind of faces ' well that was only until she spotted another hoty... she whistled again..
just to irritate armaan. & the whole drive she managed to spot handsome hunks .. especially Delhi roads are full of them.. wow she was thrilled .. By the time they reached her flat in DLF armaan was tired of getting embarrassed.


Maan drove smilingly to rajveer's place.
Maan parked the car in the portico & ran in.. the guards greeted him. Rajveer's dad is an army officer. Quiet senior personal. Though rajveer has been traveling when his dad was transferred but he spend all his summer holidays with Maan in delhi. & now for last 5yrs they have been together.

Rajveer is joined NDA (national defense academy) after 12th. After the initial training he is doing his Engg from IIT delhi via army itself. Best thing these buddies could dream off being in the same city yet again.

Rajveer was busy packing his bag.
Maan '
kya akar raha hain
rajveer '
kal se hostel
Maan snapped '
kyun?
Rajveer '
well rule is a rule yaar
Maan '
uncle kanha hain.. I will speak to him
rajveer '
don't even think about it..army aisen sab nahi chaltha
rajveer looks at him.. kya baat hain.. u looking in a different mode all together
Maan threw the key on his bed.. & lay on his back ..
wat mood.. u just ruined every thing
rajveer ' wat did I ruin
Maan '
just forget it
he completed his packing '
did u meet any girl today
Maan got really conscious, especially with raj.. he never asked him anything like this..they know each others every tiny little secrets
he made an odd face '
GiRL???
rajveer '
then why r u so hyper excited
Maan laughed.. - I won a race
rajveer ' race..
Maan '
actually not race...but yah kind of race...
actually I didn't win.. but that bhootni...
he laughed again.. thinking of her face
rajveer was amazed to see the glow in his face.. especially when he said bhootni
Maan looked at him.. staring at him blankly
rajveer blinked his eyes couple of times... u r not making sense
Maan rolled his eyes ..
I will tell u from the beginning
I was coming back from the service station.. on the way back.. a sporty jeep passed me.. & guess wat.. someone whistled.
Rajveer ' tune uska moo nahi thoda
Maan '
I so much wanted to ..
rajveer '
then
Maan '
when I staired at him
rajveer interrupted ' tera gussa wala glare dehken hi.. they would have ran away
Maan stood there fuming..
aab main boloon
rajveer looked down ..
umm..
Maan ' when I turned to see. There was this shorty tattoo guy
rajveer '
short ..tattoo.. I don't think we know.. anyone like that
Maan '
nahi yaar I don' think he is from here.. punjab registration ki gadi thi
rajveer ' Oh ok..
Maan ' he pointed at the driver..
I leaned forward to see his face.. but..he zoomed passed like.. racing types..
rajveer smirked '
no body can touch u in that
Maan '
but she was not bad
u won't believe.. we were zooming pass at a speed easily 140...160.. we crossed the railway track in that speed.. & missed the train .. like.. inches.. nehi.. centimeters.. actually.. their jeep was on my right.. & the train to their right..
some guts that bhootni has.. she probably saw the train.. coming into her..

maans eyes was twinling.. like he encountered most enchanting species in the world.

rajveer's felt dizy.. ek min.. yeh she kanha se aagyen.. wohi tho bhootni
rajveer shook his head..
Maan.. hold on.. mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha hain
u where racing with a bhootni.. like a ghost..
then who is that shoty tattoo guy & the driver..
Maan hits his head.. how the hell did u clear NDA yaar .. tujhe itni si baat samjh nahi aati.. this curly hair bhootni was the driver with the shorty tattoo..
rajveer gave a big understanding look.. OOOHHH
he immediately screamed.. bhootni..whistled at
u
Maan laughed again
rajveer teased '
how is she to look at bolna?
Bolna. Like.. HOT HOT types
Maan laughed..
bhootni...puri ki puri bhootni..
rajveer '
did she have big eyes types
Maan '
may be
rajveer ' fair?
Maan laughed yet again looking at the ceiling.. may be...
rajveer '
damit how is she to look at ?
Maan '
I don't know.. I didn't see her face..
she has that curly fence all over her face.. when she shakes her face..
rajveer gave one disgusted look..
O.. u didn't see anything..
both of them fell laughing at his last line.

-PREV PART 4 NEXT PART 6-
plz check for the updates on the Maaneet FF thread
thanks for the lovely comments & likes

PLEASE PLEASE MOTIVATE ME

love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOved that Maan loved this encounter ! and was impressed ! I am dying for them to meet.. Muskaan!! when will their attraction begin?😍 how many updates later.. I hope this is a long long FF.. will love it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow di...awesome but i want one more
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
luved every bit of it
will read more whn come back
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved to see the excitement in maan's face when he was tellig about geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update as always!!!!!!!!

Just loved it...

Poor Armaan... so much embarassment😆...
Maan - Rajveer convo was too good... OMG... kitni baar bulaadiya Maan Geet ko Bhootni... 😃

So, both Maan and Geet have not seen their faces... interesting...

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