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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

part 6

Maan ' I don't know.. I didn't see her face..
she has that curly fence all over her face.. when she shakes her face..
rajveer gave one disgusted look.. O.. u didn't see anything..
both of them fell laughing at his last line.


Latter in the evening.
Maan '
veer u have to come with me
rajveer '
wat is the point ..u always select wat u want, mujhe bas haan kah na allowed hota hain
Maan '
tu chal raha hain bus
rajveer '
thats so boring
Maan '
plz.. yaar I need to get my autumn collection.
Rajveer just rolled his eyes.

They drive down to the mall in Gurgaon. He pulled over the jeep into the basement parking & they took the elevator to the retail outlet floor. Just before the doors of the elevator closed.. she slid in.. dragging armaan along with her. Maan stood facing his back to the doors.. seriously engrossed in planning the events to follow later that evening.


Geet pulled armaan's hand & almost landed on maans toned back. She immediately straighten..asking sorry. He stepped a bit closer to rajveer giving her space & nodding in acceptance to her sorry.


tu pagal hain kya armaan whispered
she giggled '
ek tho teri liyen lift rohki.. aur thu mujhe hi gali de raha hain
armaan ' oh lift rohki..
she twisted her lips
armaan '
now wat is this shopping for?
Geet '
I don't have anything to wear to college first day
armaan '
aur jo usdin le thi.. aur issen phelen walen din.. aur
Geet frowned '
they were not for college first day
armaan ' mama ko bola
Geet ' haan

rajveer smiled.. hearing her giggle & talk non stop to armaan. Especially the way she kept irritating him. Maan noticed he was not at all paying attention to wat he was saying. He turned back to follow his view.. thats exactly when lift opened & she rushed out.. pushing armaan by his shoulders.

Maan waved his hand infront of his eyes.. challen..wo bhi challigayen
rajveer grined.. chall

Maan & rajveer walked straight into the mens section.
Rajveer '
yaar thu college ke liyen humesha shirt kyun letha hain
Maan '
I have a reputation to maintain u know
rajveer ' wat reputation
Maan ' thoda studious, sincere types.
Rajveer '
studious
he coughed
sincere !!!!
aur tu
Maan ' haan issenliya yeh sab..he winked
rajveer shook his head & parked himself comforatbly in the couch. He knew he will be lost for next couple of hrs.

maan picked few shirts, jeans..jackets


while Geet picked herself jeans, skirts..sweaters.. scarfs..she just can't stop. Armaan tried his best to escape..but she didn't give him a chance. She dragged him to the changing room & pushed him in the next room that was just separated with a wall but open on the top side.

Armaan ' wat if I peep
Geet ' tho kya
armaan ' thu jhe biklu sharam nahi aathi
Geet '
sharam aur tujse
he knew there was no point '.
Geet ' wat if I peep she giggled
he immediately looked up..knowing she is capable of.. he didn't want to take a chance.. just decided to try only after she completed & sneaked out

Geet tried the tops .. & got confused.. aacha sun.. in dono main kausi loon
Maan looked around consciously...as his hand rested on his waist opening his zipper.
Geet shouted..boltha hain ki peep karoon
Maan immediately pulled up his jeans.. nahi..
Geet knew it was not armaan.. she laughed to herself.. hearing the nervousness in his voice..
aacha suno.. in dono main kaunsa aacha hain
she threw the tops at him

he got really irritated as the dress landed on his head.
Jaldi bolo.. mujhe sweater bhi try karni hain
phir jeans..

why should I..
I don't even know how u look
she rolled her eyes..
I know.. thats why puch rahi hoon..
u see I don't want u to be judgmental
& see it is mutual.. U help me.. I will help u
he retorted .. I don't need anyone's help to select my clothing
He said it placing his jeans & shirts on the wall that separated them.
I can see that
is that a compliment
as u please

he threw the pink top back.. yeh aachi hain
she smiled..
thanks.. mujhe bhi yeh pasand hain
he was so proud.
He took the jeans to wear
suno
umm
tum lose jeans mat pheno.. tumhe tight jeans phena chahiyen
kyun?
Secret se baat hain

he smiled
tight jeans main ..hips look sexier aur girls love it that way
he was so embarrassed but was loving it
but well that was Maan Singh Khurana
wat if I am really fat ..&..have a fat.. he was trying to get a decent word
ass she offered
he lifted his brows..
kyun jhoot bhol rahen ho.. tumne jo jeans le hain uski waist size dehki main ne
he wondered yeh cheese kya hain..

she tried her jeans & got confused again
suno
umm
yeh delhi ke ladkon ke samne low waist teehk rahe ga kya?
Yeh kaisen sawal hain?
Tum yanha ke nahi ho?
Nahi
phir bhi u would know na.. like guy types

he wondered wat was guy types!!
don't tell me u don't look. I am sure u do
he was so embarrassed.
Its ok.. agar tum nahi dehko tho problem hain.. u know the gay types..
he was almost about to accept.. but then...how could he
but actually too much is also dangerous.. u know gay also r into all that
how do u know so much about all this
he tried to corner her
common don't tell me u don't watch movies
well by now he realized it was no point being shy with her..she will strip him otherwise
Before she could speak a word more..
u know.. low waist is sexy.. but with a right kind of top.. more than the top I feel it is more impt to wear the right inners.. like a bikini..string types.
She turned all pink in embarrassment
it looks so odd to see color panties...
she was mum for a sec.. not very long.. wat about a waist band she asked
wow that will be so hot
gold or silver?
which one do u have
both actually.. I change it accordingly
umm.. actually silver more with western I guess...
yah gold.. is more traditional.
She removed her jeans & wore her skirt.
She tried the sweaters
shall I buy a high neck ?
I like high neck
she smiled & wore the high neck again..
she threw the scarfs at him..
jaldi se select karke do
he picked two & threw it back
I don't like that green check shirt.. blue wali is better
he didn't say anything.
She had liked a jacket from the men section.. & but didn't know whom it would suit..she had just picked it in craze.. she just threw it to him..
try this.
He was totally floored at her selection. Didn't accept it though


by the time they came out.. his room was full of her rejected cloths & the cloths she rejected for him. He heard a sibilant whisper of skirts off to his right & he glanced across in time to see a girl dressed in blue silk emerge from the nearby room..still pulling out the high neck sweater she had tried..he couldn't see her face.. not her curly hair. She almost walked into him..
yaar tumharen high neck tho meri galen se utteren hi nahi raheni..
he smirked..
waisen bhi meri choice sab ko suit nahi kartha..
before she could answer him back.. he had walked out to the check out.
Like she cared. She just simply admired her shopping proudly
armaan came & helped her out of the sweater... why r u buying this..
she snapped it & put it back in her basket..I like it.


-PREV PART 5 NEXT PART 7-

Uff mama gussa on Geet
plz check for the updates on the Maaneet FF

PLEASE PLEASE MOTIVATE ME

thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nvr knew this was possible...that i wud b the first to comment on ne of u'r updates...
me luving it...rejoicing the feeling🥳

the update was a fun read. 👍🏼
their constant crossing paths gave me immense pleasure.❤️😍

without knowing oneother, they accepted eachother's choices!
that's a good start to a beautiful journey. 🤗❤️🤗

lookin forward to read about these two bold characters.
Edited by basicquestion1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
r
me 2nd??? nooo😭

n e ways...r we seeing a love triangle???😉😆
waise abt geet's confusin on buying slothes for the 1st day...

i say every girl
in this world thinks of it...
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.mein aaj kya pehenoon..mere paas to kapde hi nahi hai!!!!🤣

n loved their trial room clothes selection...
yaar both r too frank types...
lets see what happens when they get too know each other!!!
muski di...u r too good...👏
update is super awesum!!!!!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part
maan like bhootni
loved it

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Posted: 13 years ago
This hide and seek game is too good Muskan.
Meeting and missing in the lift was good.
Now even Raj knows Geet.
She is super sweet.
The changing room was awesome
Maaneet were selecting clothes for each other without knowing each other.
Geet was so bold
that was what she has been from he beginning.
Maan was feeling shy initially but he didnt back out too.
Maan's super boldness made Geet turn pink.
But their mutual advice on attire was superb.
But no meeting again
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
they dont no eachother
but did shopping for eachother
great di
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey musu di
both update 5 and 6
is superb
mindblowing
waiting for ur next update continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
still updating 😲
am i dreaming 😆😕😆
faint thud 🤢

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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME

IT WAS REALLY DIFF

EK STRANGER KE SAATH SHOPPING IDEAS ... TATS NEW
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Posted: 13 years ago

THIS WAS A MIND BLOWING TREAT UPDATE DEAR MUSKI

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