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Shruthe thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update... and thanks for the update...

Am just waiting for Maan!!!!!!! Once both Geet and Maan come into picture,,,,,,,, its just gonna be rocking !!!!!

Anyways i love this Geet too as always!!! 😃

Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow you are updating again!!!!!!!! am so thrilled!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundhlae aks

part 4


he smirked yeh le
Geet came around.. wondering yeh itni jaldi kasien man gaya

armaan.. thought.. atleast aisen tho iska mind divert hoga.

She happily drove for while.. tu itni jaldi kaisen maan gaya?
He smiled ...knowing she couldn't missed that question.
He pulled his leg up in front & stretched his hand behind his head
actually I wanted enjoy my drive
she became cusrious '
kya matlab enjoy?
Armaan '
aab aagr main drive kartha..tho tu..saren ladkon ko dehk thi rahethi aur whitle bhi marthi..
Geet looked at him angrily
armaan '
aur unhe lagtha ki main kar raha hoon..
soch meri reputation ka kya hota
Geet stared at him ..wat makes u think I won't now.. & she winked at him & whistled at the guy who was driving a jeep in black vest. She drove pass the jeep..
hain.. kya solid biceps hain..she whistled again.

Maan turned angrily.
He was shocked to see armaan staring at him. Armaan smiled weakly & pointed at Geet. Before Maan could look at her..she sped up zooming past as an obvious chase.


Maan sped up chasing her.. she smiled & enjoying the thril. So did he.. he smirked & drove faster..

.as the two jeeps came line.. he turned to look at the side.. armaan.. was continuously warning her to slow down. Her head shook & her curly hair fell open spreading across her face.

She shook her head.. giggling. Maan smirked & sped.. over taking her..
oye teri..
she pressed the accelerator harder
both the vehicles very in par.. it was him.. or her..
but.. fate.. it was them together
armaan '
Geet teren takar ka hain
she snorted her nose.. no ways.. & gave him a tough competition
armaan warned agen dehken unguarded railway crossing. Signal red hain

Maan looked ..the train was coming..
Maan turned right once ..armaan.. was screaming to stop...
nun did ..it was more of fun than competition. They we were just enjoying this jhosh.


He took a deep breath & crossed the tracks.. heart in heart hoping even they did.. wondering why he wanted them to be safe..

he laughed when he saw them in par ..& the train.. right in the side of them... on the right of Geet... both laghed loud.. with the zeal of excitment running down them

armaan eyes where on her. Not even once he could blink. The moment they crossed the signal.. he pulled the hand brake.
Maan's vehicle just zoomed passed them.. really fast.

Geet almost fell on the steering wheel with sudden jerk.
Maan slowed down looking behind... her hair fell on her face... bhootni.. he smirked looking at her through the rare view mirror
a winning smirk

Geet immediately looked at armaan checking if he was ok.. & then yelled at him...
there was only a fraction of secs diff between her concerned face & the furious one. How could he miss that. He smiled at the concern that only irritated her further.

I lost because of u
think positive.. we r alive because of me..
armaan said with a wide grin
she punched straight his nose
armaan covered his bleeding nose.. I am going to get the operation today
very funny
armaan '
jis tarah tu meri naak thod thi rahthi hain.. I better remove that bone from there.. na rahegi baas na bagi baasoori
Geet passed a tissue & came around to drive.
Armaan ' stop.. U r not driving
spoke adjusting the tissue
Geet '
tu aapni naak sambal
armaan '
shut up Geet.. u r not driving thats final
he just came around & pulled her away
Geet made a face '
that was rude
armaan ' not ruder than this .. he pointed at his bleeding nose
she twisted her lips..
u r doing this because this is ur jeep
just wait until I get my car
armaan ' OHHH... actually I can't wait
her nostrils flared as she inhaled sharply
he laughed seeing her anger.
.. actually u both were in par. Both won
he could see a tinge of pride forming in her face
Geet '
that biceps wala was not bad na
kitna hot tha
OMG..
armaan ' actually chikna tha
Geet '
wat do u mean
armaan ' chikna means chikna
Geet ' frankly main ne uska face nahi dehka.. so I guess hot chikna
armaan rolled his eyes..
stop type casting
Geet '
wat ever he was not bad
armaan looked at her awe.. it was the first time she ever accepted someone was good ..


-PREV PART 3 NEXT PART 5-

well that was Maan.. seeing Geet..dhundhala sa
& Geet seeing him hazily. Well we know Geet thought.. he was hot chikna..
& lets see wat did Maan have to say about his bhootni
plz check for the updates on the Maaneet FF thread
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
Speechless thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet whistled at boys bechara Armaan kese handle krta ho ga BHOOTNI koShe whistled at Maan and The race begins
she punched Armaan and broke his nosewhat is this with Geet itna zulm
Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
r

edited.
Well technically I am first since the others were commenting for updateing fast...😆
As usual the update was lovely
Edited by Maaneet4eve - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me di...won't u ask main kahan se aa gayi?😆
anyways, update was awesome😃
Edited by princess163 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was really utterly butterly delicious update . hah , hah , so soon i got new punch line to comment muski . love the competition and yes how armaan is managing his nose that is still big ?????????????.
Edited by acjanfeb1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeyyy !!! Yeeeyyy !!!
Ek aur update aa gaya...!!! Love U Di... Muaahhh
Awesome update... Their first meeting was fabulous+rocking !!!
Love their language...hot chikna N bhootni !!! Lol
Hmmm...now it sounds like dhundhley aks... M loving the flow of the story...superb !!!
Poor armaan got his nose punched...
So Maan wanted them also to be safe with him...awww he is such a sweet heart !!!
Thanx for the lovely update Di...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just loved it...

Maaneet racing!!! Uff!!!!! Mast update yaar!!!!!!!!!

So maan named her bhootni and Geet calling him hot chikna... 😃
am just loving it... poor armaan... naak tho gaya 😆

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