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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats for the new FF..😊 Awesome Start
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundhlae aks

part 3


aunty looked turned to look at Geet.. she winked at armaan & made a complaining face at aunty..
it ni meeti meeti laasi peeyen ga tho diabetes ho sakta hain na aunty.
Aunty gave up & left from there.

Armaan pounced at Geet.. Geet ki baachi..
Geet ran for her life screaming ..mera show abhi bhaki hain...
armman ' teri tho '
she showed her tongue & ran down.. starting her bike ...armaan managed to catch her & hopped in the back seat. He held her shoulders..
umh kya bol rahi thi
Geet laughed...
both of them laughed & reached her home after spending the whole day saying to their frds & a small party in the filed.

She walked in tip-toe.. to her room.. saying bye to armaan.

GEET...stop right there shouted Rano.
She bit her tongue.. & turned holding the juthi in her hand ..up in air
Rano '
hights of irresponsibility Geet
Geet '
lekin mama
rano ' u r going tomorrow didn't u feel like having ur last night dinner with us
Geet '
lekin mama papa, veerji, darji,, thya ji..thai.. sab tho bhar gayen hain na
rano rolled her eyes ' u have answers for every thing
Geet smiled sweetly & came close to rano
rano looked away angrily.. that was almost melting..
Geet knew her mom very well.. she hugged her & kissed her.. in the cheek..
love u mama..
rano chuckled..patting her cheek.


Next day
rano.. came & shook her.. Geet utt..
mama sono do na plz
rano '
utt... armaan kab se wait kar raha hain
Geet '
armaan.. wo yanha kya kar raha hain.. itni subha subha
armaan ..
dhing dong..we r supposed to be driving to delhi today
Geet jumps up from the bed.. holy crap!!
Geet looks at mom..
mama aap ne mujhe phelen kyun nahi utta ya
rano ' khud se utta tho jatha nahi hain.. pata nahi .. wanha jake kya karen ghi
Geet runs to wash room '
mama I have been in hostel for last 6 yrs
rano '
pata hain
Geet -
I used to manage there na
armaan ' aunty main roza subha warden ko request kartha tha issen uttane keliyen
rano ' why r u not staying with Geet.
Itna bada tho flat liya hain ussne
armaan '
isken saat..no ways
aunty yeh mujhe
(the thought of strip tease came in his mind.. he chuckled.. )
khaa jayen ghi
Geet added from the wash room..
wo bhi kacha
rano looked at him .. & sighed
tum saat rahten tho I would have felt better..
pata nahi yeh aklen kya karegi
Geet comes out slipping her t-shirt .. - kuch nahi hoga..mama aap yun hi worry kar rahen ho


the entire family gathered down in the main hall. Geet kissed every one & hugged them dearly.
She hated going away from them...but them she had.. she teased rano ..for having tears in her eyes.
Wasien tho mujhe daathe rahten ho.. aur jab main jaathi hoon tho sabse phelen aansoon bhi aapken hi aaten hain. She continued teasing every one & smiled widely & sat in jeep next to armaan.

As the jeep crossed the district limits.. her heart was heavy..her eyes burned. Armaan quietly drew knowing how she felt.
(Geets pov)
wipe ur tears.. armaan ne dehk liya tho ..mera mazak udaya ge

(armaan pov)
pagli hain..
uppar se ek dam rough & tough...

he smiled..
andar se bilkul maum...

seeing her silent for so long he.. teased..don't tell me..ur crying
she cleared her throat... main aur crying..
she twisted her lips..tu ne aaj thak mujhe kabhi routen huen dehka hain?
Armaan '
phir itni chup chup kyun hain
Geet '
actually irritated hoon
armaan '
kyun
Geet '
tu itna slow jo chala raha hian
armaan ' main tere liyen slow chala raha tha
Geet '
stop...stop..stop...
armaan.. stopped suddenly '
kya huwa
Geet ' uttar main chala thi hoon

he smirked yeh le
Geet came around.. wondering yeh itni jaldi kasien man gaya

armaan.. thought.. atleast aisen tho iska mind divert hoga.

-PREV PART 2 NEXT PART 4-

Hope u like this new side of Maaneet
ok..don't shout...wat maaneet.. yanha tho sirf Geet..hain..
challo next part main Maan...lol
plz check for the updates on the Maaneet FF thread
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Armaan and Geet are soo close! and sweet.. perfect best friends😆.. but yeh.. cant wait to see Maan and Geet in the same frame.. for them to interact.. yep.. this is going to be fun :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
really loved d bond between geet nd armaan...in dono ne tm ke dino ki yaad dila di...lekin 1 part se hamara kya hoga di...plz one more😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet is sweetheart!!
lovin her!!
plz update dreams too
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part
So Geet is finally heading to Delhi.
Armaan and Geet's bonding was beautiful.
Geet seems to be the darling of the house.
No wonder she couldnt leave the house and the family.
Rano was the sweetest mom concerned so much about her daughter.
The friends are headed to Delhi
Wonder what that place has in store for them
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice prt,luv geet armaan bondng
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Posted: 13 years ago
I hope armaan aur geet ka koi scene nahi hain mujhe toh geet ki intentions par doubt hai byegod...lol...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Amazing👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️ Geet is so Bubbly😊😊😊😊😊 Loved The Bonding of Geet and Armaan😃😃😃😃😊😊😊 Geet is Rough and tough to the world But inside softie😃😃😃 Waiting For next part continue soon😍
Muski Di👍🏼🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update Di...!!! Love armaan N Geet's frndship... Hope it is limited to that only...frm both sides...
I guess U know us too well... WHERE IS MAAN ??? Di...cant wait for MSK's entry in the next part... Plz cont soon...
Love ya...!!!

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