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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
congtars omn new ff muskan..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Congo for the new ff...
Me very happy to see that you started a new ff:)..which im sur will be as awsome as ur other ffs...
Loved the title...
Nice start...
Nice update...
Cont soon... ^_^
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Dhundlae aks

part 2


Maan ' issne mana kiya mujhe juice peena se..
mainne tho organe juice hi order kiya
raj ne hi..
he emphasized ..MANA kiya.
Raj coughed...
Daadi & Dev laughed & left them alone.


Geets Village

Geet took her scooty & drove to armaans place. She almost ran over the main door & ran into the hawali.. nipping the fresh paratha armaan's mom had just taken out of the tawa.. aunty.. armaan uppar hain na..
before she could reply.. Geet had ran up half way through the steps. She laid next to him in the manja.. the bed made from woven strands suspended between a frame with 4 legs made of carved wood
nibbling the paratha.. & squeezing her way to the mid..almost pushing him off. He balanced himself..
Geet phir gira rahi hain mujhen
she giggled in her own typical stlye..pushing him off..
aur kitna giravoon
he rolled his eyes & got up to sit next to her.. shaking the dust on his kurtha.

She turned to see him.. aacha sun hum kal nikal rahen hain
armaan '
mama maan gayen?
She shook her head sadly.& smiled instantly . lekin papaji maan gayen.
Armaan smiled..
lekin thu mama ke bina mane tho jayen ghi nahi
Geet turned her lips thoughtfully..
actually is bar nahi... main mama se bahut naraz hoon.
Unhe pata hain mujhe tumharen saat hi college jana hain
phir pata nahi kyun zid karti hain
armaan looked at her
Geet '
dehk tho mujhe aisen mat dehk ..mujhe pata hain
armaan smiled teasingly '
kya?
Geet '
yahi .. teren iss look ka kya matlab hain?
Armaan innocently '
kya?
Geet '
yahi na.. mama jo bhi kahthi hain teehk kahthi hain
armaan kept quiet
Geet '
dehk tho mujhe senti mat kar
main ja rahi hoo bus.. aur tho bhi chal raha hain
armaan wondered if he had an option.


Geet went speeding down to his room & packed his cloths. She picked his pants, t-shirts.. dumped away all the shirts.. then checked on his shoes.. & naugtily opened his inner section.. armaan immediately closed the door.. kya kar rahi hain
she teased him..
excuse me.. I have seen u even without them..
armaan blushed furiously..
just shut up Geet
she laughed loud...& scanned him top to bottom
armaan very shamelessly offered ..
phir se dehkna hain kya
she jumped.. why not..

curiously hot hain kya?
Armaan '
do u doubt that
Geet teased .
Oh yes I really doubt it big time
armaan .. hand went around his waist..reaching his belt Geet nicely straightens herself & sat in front all ready for the view..

(armaan pov)
yeh ladki kabhi nahi sudhar ghi..sachi meri pant uttarveygi kya?

(Geet pov)
giggled within.. abhi bahane marenga

lucky .. armaans mom just walked in.. armaan immediately removed his hand from the waist..
aunty looked at both of them suspiciously. .
Geet '
aunty dehko main ne iski puri packing kar di
aunty ' aacha dehko wanha jake jhagda mat karna chotn bachon ki tarah
Geet '
main kanha karti hoon aunty yahi mujh se jhagadtha hain
armaan '
yah humesha tho tuje hi problem hoti hain..
issi liya main ne hostel main stay karne ka decision liya
Geet got really upset.. tu sach main hostel main rahega?
Aunty '
wohi teehk bhi hoga.. tum log bachen thodi ho.. koi sunega tho kya kahega
jawan ladka laki ek saat
...
Geet rolled her eyes..
aunty aap ko tho pata hain.. mama-papa ko bhi pata hain.. phir yeh koi koun hain
armaan '
lekin mujhe tere saath nahi rahna
Geet '
as u wish.. but u will give me a ride na.. ki uss main bhi problem hain
armaan '
kyun teri red wali car ka kya huwa?
Geet ' mujhe delhi registration chahiyen.. tho.. wonhi veerji dilayen gen
armaan sighed..
oh god.. don't tell me.. 2 hrs I will have to bear ur torture
Geet made a angry face..
waisen 2 hrs nahi..788400 hrs
armaan why 788400? 2 ' 3 number aur add kar lethi
mujhe nahi lagtha thu 90saal se zyada tu jiyen ga
armaan '
why why can't I love beyond 90?
Geet ' jis tarah se tu pita hain tu 60 bhi touch karlen tho badi baat hain
aunty immediately held his ears '
u drink?
Armaan '
nahi mama..
Geet '
jhoot bol raha hain aunty.. kal bhi pee thi puri ki puri lassi pee gaya ...mujhe taste bhi nahi karne di
aunty looked turned to look at Geet.. she winked at armaan & made a complaining face at aunty..
it ni meeti meeti laasi peeyen ga tho diabetes ho sakta hain na aunty.
Aunty gave up & left from there.

Armaan pounced at Geet.. Geet ki baachi..
Geet ran for her life.

-PREV NEXT PART 3-

I told u its a slow story...
plz.. bare with me...
love
muskan


Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

di, pehle to name pe mera confusion door karo!

pehle u titled it dhundhale aks...
then u changed the name to dhundhlane aks...
now the update again says, dhundhale aks😕
also, is it going to be abt the dhundhla aks that teases the sense...that dream guy/girl?
Edited by princess163 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
naughty geet 😉
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
hayla..mai default se first...
swati baby...*sticks out tongueee*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hayla..mai default se first...

swati baby...*sticks out tongueee*

aapke liye ek to kya, hazzar first spots kurbaan😳😛😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: princess163

aapke liye ek to kya, hazzar first spots kurbaan😳😛😆

hayy meri jaannn
ithe aaa...*crackk crackkk*
ummmahhh😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Awesome

Loved their bonding...
They are really very close to each other...

Updt soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hayy meri jaannn

ithe aaa...*crackk crackkk*
ummmahhh😳😳😳😳

❤️🤗

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