Sindoor- Pyar Ho Gaya - Page 30

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Posted: 19 years ago
The update was fantastic Kritika!!! Pls continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome update!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
plz continue soon!!! cant wait 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: moderngirl

Thanks..glad you liked it😛

😆😆Yuvi hun, how'd you know i was going to ruin their first valentines day together!!😆😆😆

😆😆😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hope you like the next part 😛

Scene 54

The next morning

Rudra and nih are cuddled together. Rudra has his arm around her waist and both are facing each other. Rudra wakes up. He sqeezes his eyes and slowly sits up on the bed. He looks at how peacefully nih sleeping. Rudra slowly leans over and kisses nih cheek, he then gets out of bed and goes into the bathroom.

A while later he comes back out. Nih was sitting on the bed but as soon as he comes out she stnds up!

Nih (hasty) Rudra, tumne mujhe utaya kyon nahi!! Aaj itni dher ho jayenge!! (she rushes towards the bathroom but Rudra grabs her by the waist and stops her halfway)

Rudra (romantically) Jaan (as he moves his face closer to hers) agar humhe thori dher hogayi tho koi kuch nahi kahega (kisses her cheek)

Nih (tries pushing him but his too strong) Rudra Choro muje!!!!

Nih gets an idea. She quickly starts tickling him.

Rudra (lets go of her) Nih stop!!! (can't stop laughing)

Nih (tickles him harder) nahi!!

Rudra falls to the floor laughing. Nih stops tickling and he stops laughing. Both are staring into each others eyes. Rudra slowly leans forward and kisses her. Nih blushes....

While in the kitchen

Ved managing well for herself. Aarti hasn't woken up yet either. Vedika's busily slicing and cutting the vegetables when Dhruv walks into the kitchen.

He walks behind her and grabs her by the waist as he rests his chin on her shoulder!

Ved (turns her head and sees him) Dhruv please, aaj nahi!! Muje bahut kaam karni hai! (continues cutting)

Dhruv (lets go of her) arre jaan (pushes her aside) lao mein tumhari madat karoonga!!

Ved (kind of annoyed) Dhruv Plz, mera kaam aur mat badao (increase)!!

Dhruv (smiles) Ved Iam serious, dehko tum Sabzeeya pakao and I'll cut them for you!!

Ved (knows he wont leave so she lets him help her) teekh hai!!

Both do their work!! Dhruv quickly cuts everything and Ved cooks them.Its much quicker.

After a while. Both their works are done!

Dhruv (smiles as he holds Ved waist) see!! We're all done!!

Ved (smiles as she leans forward and gives Dhruv a kiss on the cheek) Thanks Dhruv, you're a sweetheart!!

Dhruv (looks around the kitchen) jaan, babhi kahan hai! Shes usually here by now!

Ved (hits his chest) Dhruv!!! Shayed ab Tumhe pata hoga ki nih par kya beeth thi hogi jab mein dher karti hoon!!

Dhruv (smiles) oh I get it!! (sorry he asked)

Ved (smiles as she puts his arms around his neck) ok mere special helper!! Mujhe table set karne mein madat karoge??

Dhruv leans forward and kisses her cheek

Ved smiles as she goes to set up the table. Dhruv follows and helps her just when kavita enters the house. Dhruv and Ved look at her

Ved (happily) good morning mummyji!!

Kavita (walks up to the two with a thali in her hand) good morning beta!!(hands them both some sweets) lo bhagwan ka prasad khao!

Dhruv and Ved both take the prasad and eat it

Ved (smiles) mummyji aap itni subha akeli mandir gayi! Kissi ko saath lehjati!!

Kavita (laughs) Ved mein kahan akela gayi (you see titli mumbling something as she walks thru the door) titli mere saath thi!!

Dhruv and Ved laugh as titli mami mumbles something about the weather and walks in

Later on, when everyones had breakfast. They all sit in the living room and talk about the party tomorrow!! Tara's excited, you can see it on her face.

Aarti just listens to the conversations. Dhruvs like "I've got all the music stuff ready!!!"

Rudra agrees to pick up the food. Nih,kavita and Aarti will cook the snacks and Ved n Tara will do the decorations.

Later on, Kavita and viren leave for a friends party and Rudra/nih leave to go to the movies!!

Tara, aarti, Ved and Dhruv are left. They're sitting in the living room talking. DhruVed are sitting next to each other and tara and aarti are sitting by one another on the other couch. After a while Ved gets up saying she'll go make food.

Dhruv (grabs her hand and stops her) arre Ved, Tumhe aaj khana banane ki koi zaroorat nahi!!

Ved (turns to look at him) kyon???

Dhruv (stands up beside her) kyon ki aaj hum sab dinner restaurant mein karenge!!

Tara (stands up) Yayyyy!! Great idea bhaiya!!

Dhruv smiles

Dhruv (happily) ok, tum sab jao thaiyar ho jao phir hum khana khane chalenge!!

Everyone nods as they leave to get dressed

DhruVed are in their room

Dhruvs wearing a light brown suit

Ved still cant decide what to wear, shes still looking through the closet when Dhruv comes up to her.

Dhruv (cutely) jaan, aaj tum koi dress pehen lo!! You know that pink and light green one looks stunning on you! (grabs her waist and kisses her cheek)

Ved agrees and both get dressed

Ved wearing her chandelier earrings and the necklace that Dhruv had gifted her with high heels. Shes got the perfect amount of make-up on looking very nice.

After a few mins

Both walk downstairs. Aarti and tara are waiting. Tara gasps as she looks at Ved!!

Tara (awed) WOW Babhi!! You look gorgeous!! (turns to aarti) haina aarti!

Aarti (fakes a smile) yeah!!

Ved (smiles) thank you!!

Dhruv (feeling left out!) arre, tum dono mujhe nahi thanks khahoge?? I am the one who chose the dress!!

The girls laugh

Ved (like shes talking to a baby) Thank you Dhruv (pinches his cheeks)

Tara cant stop from laughing!! 😆 😆

Dhruv feels embarrassed 😳


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Posted: 19 years ago
cute update 😳 😳 plz continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great update!!! Pls continue soon!!! I love Dhruv sooo much...I mean he is sooo sweet in this ff!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Thanks for the comments everyone!! heres the next part!!!

Scene 55

The next morning
Nih wakes up. She looks at the time and realizes that they've got a ot of work to do today. It's the day of the party. She turns to face Rudra but he's asleep. Nih slowly gets out of bed and goes to the bathroom.
Rudra slowly opens one of his eyes to make sure she's gone. He smiles to himself.

A while later

Nih comes out of the bathroom and walks to her dresser as she dries her hair when she sees their room.

Nih (looks around the room) OMG!!

Then you see Rudra walking towards Nih with a big bouquet of Red Roses.

Rudra (holds nih waist) Happy Valentines Day Jaan (kisses her cheek)

Nih (shocked) Rudra tumne yeh sab (looks at the room that's all decorated) kab kiya?? Abhi tho mein fresh hone gayi thi??

Rudra (pulls her colse to him) jaan maine abhi hi tho kiya hai!!

Nih (smiles) thanks Rudra, Happy Valentines day!! (hugs him)

Rudra Kisses her and both get a lil carried away

While in DhruVed room

Ved in the shower when Dhruv slowly turns around to her side..he moans as he places his arm on her but his hands fall on something soft!!

Dhruv (confused as he feels the softness) What the heck!! (opens his eyes as he sits up on bed)

Theres a giant teddy bear on Ved side of bed that says " I Love You"

Dhruv smiles as he looks at the bear, just then Ved walks out of the bathroom and goes to their wardrobe to put on her jewelry. Dhruv gets up and walks behind Ved. He puts his arms around her and kisses her cheek

Dhruv (holds her tight as he places his chin on her shoulder) Happy Valentines day Jaan!

Ved (turns around as she puts her arms around his neck) Morning sleepy head!!

Dhruv (kisses her forehead) jaan thanks for the bear lekin tum itne Jaldi kyon jaagi?? Kuch aur dher soh(sleep) lehthi!

Ved (smiles) Dhruv aaj humhe party ki sab thaiyaari karni hai!!bahut kaam baki hai!

Dhruv (moves his face closer to hers) lekin aaj muje kuch aur hi karne ka mann kar raha hai! (winks at her)

Ved (pushes him off) Dhruv tum fresh ho jao aur mein tumhare khana laga dehthi hoon!!

Dhruv nods as he walks into the washroom

Ved walks downstairs

Everyone else has had breakfast and are in their rooms.

Ved sees Nih serving Rudra breakfast at the table and goes over and Both sis talk as Ved waits for Dhruv.

A few mins later Dhruv walks downstairs. He sits down as Ved gets his food for him.
Both bros talk as both sis talk.

A while later they all get to work. Kavita, Nih and Aarti do the cooking.Rudra needs to pick up the food and tara needs the fresh flowers for decorations, so both leaves together to pick up the stuff.
Ved does the decorations alone while taras gone. She puts up the balloons around the grand room where the party will be. Dhruvs gotton all the music set. His was a two minute job. Dhruv made a list of all the music to be played during the party and gave it to the dj. He's now bored.
Dhruv goes around humming tunes when he sees Ved setting the balloons all alone. He looks around to see if anyones there and when he sees that the coast is clear he quietly walks over to Ved and hugs her.

Dhruv (kisses her neck) Hey jaan!!
(just then aarti was passing by and sees this..she feels jealous and walks away)

Ved (pushes him) Dhruv!! Tum pagal hogaye ho kya??

Dhruv (laughs a little but still holds her waist) jaan tumhare pyar mein tho main pagal hoon!

Ved (laughs) Dhruv aaj kya tum maar khaoge??

Dhruv (acts all lovey dovey) tumhare haath se tho mein kuch bhi khaloonga!!

Ved (nods her head) acha!! (grabs a broom that was on the floor) Tho bhagna(run) shuru kar do!! (chases him with it)

Dhruv runs..Ved behind him..after all shes in a sari...Dhruv runs towards the kitchen just as kavita walks out...Dhruv smiles..he hides behind kavita...Ved reaches there with the broom!!
Dhruv( behind kavita) Mama dekho na, Ved muje maar rahi hai!!

Ved (responds before kavita says anything) mummyji yeh (points to Dhruv) muje koi kaam nahi karne dehtha!! Muje thang karta rehtha hai!!

Kavita (looks at Dhruv whose got a winning smile on his face) Dhruv, tum mere bahu ko kyon thang kar rahe ho!! Jao apne kaam karo!! (dhruvs smiles fades as he looks at Ved whose got the winning smile now!!)


After a while. Everything is prepared! The foods ready and the decorations are up. The music ready as well as the disco light that Dhruv put up!

Everyone goes and gets ready!

In Rudra.nih room

Rudra cant decide which sherwani to wear. Just then nih walks upto him

Nih(holds his hand as she rest her head on the side of his shoulder) kya doondh rahe ho??

Rudra( holds her waist as he looks in the closet) jaan, I don't know what to wear!! Mera sab kapre purani hai!!

Nih smiles.."ek minute"..she looks in the closet and gets out a box!! (gives it to Rudra)
"here" (hugs him) "happy valentines rudra"

Rudra smiles as he opens the box! it's a brand new designer sherwani!! He's happy!!

Rudra(hugs nih) Thanks jaan!! (kisses her cheek)

Nih blushes

While in DhruVed room

Ved looking through the closet to find a sari just as Dhruv walks in the room with both his hands behind him.

Ved (looks at him) Dhruv!! I need help choosing a sari (he walks over) which one should I wear??

Dhruv (smiles as he shows a box that he was hiding behind him) lo, mein janta tha ki tum yahi khahogi!! So I came prepared!! (laughs)

Ved takes open the box and finds a really nice blue combination sari
Like this


Ved(hugs Dhruv) Thanks jaan!! Its beautiful!!

Dhruv smiles

While in aartis room...shes looking through her closet.


Aarti(searching through her clothes) hmm, I want something nice...aisa kuch jisse sab ki nazren mere upar hoga...(gets jealous) sab ki nazren tho hamesha Ved ya Nih ki upar hoti hai..lekin aaj nahi!!..(finds one) yes, this ones perfect!! She smiles to herself!

it's a lehenga like this


A while later. The guests have arrived!! The party's about to get started!!!



Hope the part was ok 😕
Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part hun! i loved it. arti and veds clothes are matching....wonder wat happens next. lol cant wait for the next part.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great Job Kritika!!! I like Vedika's sari a lot!!!! Anyway that was a really cute part!!! Cont' soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
GREAT JOB!!! It was really cute 😳
cant wait for the next part 😛

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