Sindoor- Pyar Ho Gaya - Page 28

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: zhasan2

cool! ill be going to Canada soon too, i think next week or something, but im going to be missing out on a lot here...well, ill have a lot of reading to do when i do get back i guess 😛

😆Everyones going to Canada!! We should all meet up somewhere!!😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS EVERYONE!!! HERES THE NEXT UPDATE!! ITS KINDA BORING BUT SEQUENCED WITH THE NEXT PART!!! 😊

Scene 50

The next morning

Dhruv and Ved are getting late

Ved (hurried voice) Dhruv Jaldi karo muje rasoi mein khana banana hai!!!

She starts doing dhruvs tie..shes getting late and dhruvs not hurrying

Dhruv (serious) Ved (takes her hand away from the tie) Yeh tie wie choro!! Aaj mein office nahi jaoonga!!

Ved (smiles at his sudden change of mood) Kyon??

Dhruv (places his hand on her shoulder) jaan, bas mann nahi kar raha jaane ka!!

Ved (thinks) hmmm, tumhare mann nahi kar raha lekin Dhruv yeh tumhare mood ko achanak kya hogaya!! Abhi tho tum office jaane keliye thaiyar ho rahe the aur ab....

Dhruv (loud) jaan please!! Mein thori dher rest karna chatha hoon!! (gets his kurta from the closet) muje disturb mat karna!!!

Ved (normal voice) OK!! Mein nih ko rasoi mein madat karne ja rahi hoon aur waise bhi aaj bahut dher ho chuki hai (leaves the room)

Dhruv nods as he walks into the bathroom

Rudras leaving for work as Ved walks downstairs

Aarti's setting up the table for everyone else

Nih sees Ved

Nih( happily) arre Ved, aaj itni dher kyon kar di aur Dhruv kahan hai???(considering that her and Dhruv always come down together)

Ved (quickly rushes to clean up the mess in the kitchen) sorry nih, voh Dhruv ka mood achanak badal gaya aur voh kehne laga ki usko office nahi jaana!! (laughs)

Just then tara walks downstairs and sits down followed by viren

Kavita and aarti sit down to eat as well

Nih and Ved serve the food

Later on

Tara leaves for college and viren leaves for work

Its just the girls now!! Aside from dhruv

Kavita decides to take her bahus and aarti to go shopping

Nih like YEAH!!

Shes excited

Ved like that'll be fun!

Aarti (concerned) lekin Dhruv tho yahan akela par jayenga na??

Ved (smiles) aarti uski chinta mat karo!! Agar hum usse saath lehjayenge tho woh humhe chain se shopping karne nahi dehga!!

Nih laughs and kavita nods

Everyone goes to their rooms to change

Ved enters her room and her eyes fall on Dhruv

Hes asleep

She goes and sits by him

Ved (softly) Dhruv!!! (feels his forehead to see if hes feeling ok)

He slowly open his eyes

Ved (smiels) Dhruv are you ok!!

He nods "yes"

Ved (happily) ok, hum sab shopping karne ja rahe hai, Tumhe kuch chaiye!!!

Dhruv (tired) no (holds her hands) lekin ghar Jaldi aana!!

Ved nods as she kisses his forehead and gets ready

After a while the women leave for shopping

Kavita and aarti go to a jewelry shop as nih and Ved walk around the mall

They walk into a mens store and Ved decides to buy a kurta pajama for Dhruv!!!

Nih buys a cute blue shirt for Rudra

Both go back out

They buy a few saris and go to other stores

Ved and nih are both tired now

They've been shopping for a while now

Both go to a caf when nih notices something

Nih (taps Ved shoulder) Ved dehko wahan kaun hai!!

Ved (loks that way and sees the back of some guys head) nih wahan tho sirf woh ladka hai!!

Nih (persuasive) Ved (points her finger at the person) uss ladke ke samne jo ladki hai usko dehko!! (smiles)

Ved (shocked) TARA!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
YAY!!! That was a really good update!!! Pls con't soon!!! Wonder who the guy with Tara was?? 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks!! 😛

I'll try cont soon! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow!!!! tht wz reali good..plz continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
AWESOME JOB!!!! Please continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: moderngirl

😆Everyones going to Canada!! We should all meet up somewhere!!😆

yeah, that'll be nice😆😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks alot for the comments everyone!!

I'll be posting the next part tomorrow!!

Take care,
Luv Kritika 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: moderngirl

Thanks alot for the comments everyone!!

I'll be posting the next part tomorrow!!

Take care,
Luv Kritika 😛



Great!!! Can't Wait for the next part!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks for the comments...hope you like the nexy part!! 😛

Scene 51


They see the guy kissing taras cheek as she blushes

Ved (shocked) Tara yahan kya kar rahi hai aur voh bhi uss ladke ke saath!!

Nih (laughs) lagtha hai humhare banno ko banna mil gaya!!

Both sis laugh as kavita and aarti walk up behind them

Kavita (smiles) arre, tum dono itne haas kyon rahe ho!!

Nih and Ved share looks!!

Nih (smiles)voh kuch nahi mummyji!!

Kavitas like ok and all walk out of the store without anyone else noticing tara

As for tara

Shes enjoying her time with rahul

Both have a lot in common

Rahul takes her to the beach

Both are walking holding hands

Rahul- (happily) tara, are you going to the dance with anyone!!

Tara (looks at him) no!! you??

Rahul (smiles) mein bhi nahi!! But I was hoping maybe you'd like to go with me!!

Tara (smiles) YEAH!! I'd love to!!

Both smile

While at the Raizada house

The girls arrive with their bags of stuff

Ved runs upstairs to find Dhruv but when she enters the room hes not there

Ved (looks around the room) ab yeh Dhruv kahan hai?? shayed jogging karne gaya ho!! Who knows!!(walks back downstairs and sits with the rest of the girls)

Nih discussing how valentines day is coming up

Nih (gets an idea) mummyji kyun na hum valentines day kehliye kuch special karen??

Ved (gets excited) haan, it'll be fun!!

Kavita (smiles) tho..kyon na hum ek party rakke??

"haan that's a great idea mom" echoes form the door!!

Everyone turns to look

It Dhruv!

He walks over and sits next to Ved

Dhruv (happily joins the convo) mama, that'll be great!! Hum valentines party rakkenge..(puts his hand up proudly) RAIZADA style!!

Everyone agrees

Kavita- tho teekh hai...mein viren se iske baremein baath karoongi aur hum ek zabardasht party rakkenge!!

Everyone smiles

Just then tara walks through the door

She walks up to everyone

Tara (smiles) hi everyone

They all look up

Nih and Ved share looks

Nih (happily) arre tara, kahan thi tum?? I completely forgot it was your day off from college varna hum saath kuch waqt beetha dehthe!

Tara (gives a weird laugh) babhi mein tho apne dost ke saath thi!! Hum mall mein kuch shopping kar rahe the!!

Ved (gives a weird look at nih and controls her laughter) Arre tara!!! Agar tum pehle kehthi tho hum sab saath mall ja sakthe the!!

Tara gives an unconvincing smile and walks off as Dhruv looks weirdly at nih and Ved..both are smiling at each other!!

Later on

Rudra and viren come home

Nih in the kitchen cleaning as Rudra walks up from behind and hugs her

Nih gasps

Nih (turns to look at him) Rudra!! Kya kar rahe ho???

Rudra (holds her by the waist) arre nih...thora romance karne do na!!!(kisses her cheek)

Nih (pushes him) Rudra..kisine dekh liya tho..(he hugs her again)

Rudra (holds her tight) jaan, tho kya!! Hum koi chori tho nahi kar rahe na?? (kisses her neck)

Nih smiles

While on the other hand

Dhruved are in their room

Ved standing by the closet showing him the new things she bought

Dhruvs standing behind her with his hands around her waist as he watches and listens to her talk

Dhruv (curiously) jaan

Ved (as she puts her sari back in the closet) hmm

Dhruv (turns her around to face him) why were you and babhi smiling to each other weirdly when we were downstairs..like you're doing something you shouldn't be!!

Ved laughs

"Dhruv aisa kuch nahi hai!! Hum tho sirf party ke liye excited hein!!"

Dhruv (smiles) oh ok!! But are you sure??

Ved (smiles) yes baba, iam sure!

Later on

Everyone has dinner

Dhruv and Rudra do most of the talking

After they finsh everyone goes to the living room

All talk about their day and the party

Tara excuses herself and goes to her room

Nih and Ved do the same as they follow tara

While Dhruv sees them going and decides to follow them as well!!

Tara goes to her room and sits on her bed

While nih and Ved stand outside her door watching her

And Dhruv a little behind both watchin them

Ved and nih straignten up as they walk into her room

Nih (sweetly) hi tara!!

Tara( looks at them) arre babhi aap!!

Both sis sit on either side of tara

Ved (happily) so how was your day??

Tara (smiles) mm, boring a usual!!

Nih (remembers) boring?? Tara can the mall ever be boring??

Tara (laughs weirdly) voh, you know babhi, I've gone to the mall so many times.its not that fun anymore!!

Ved (smiles) tara tum apne babhi se jhoot nahi bol sakthi!!

Tara (nervous) matlab???

Nih (happy) we saw you two at the mall!!

Tum (nervously) us two??

Ved (laughs) haan, tum aur voh ladka!!

Tara (makes a face) uh oh!!


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