Sindoor- Pyar Ho Gaya

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Guys,
i was thinking of creating another sindoor fan fic..

heres the promo,
dhruv and ved at this point dont know each other. dhruv works at the raizada company(his family company) and ved at her family compant as well. both have to get together one day for a meeting and it turns out that both are attracted to each other....but in the meeting both of them start arguing and start to hate each other....both dont see each other for a while when suddenly both find out that nih(ved older sis) is getting married to rudra(dhruvs older bro) and they have to see each other and get along......will love finally develop between the two.....

what do you guys think?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Characters

Raizada Family:

DHRUV RAIZADA: Middle child.A very lovable person, anyone who meets him thiks of him as the perfect person. has an older brother rudra and a younger sister tara. works at his family office, and loves his family alot.

Rudra Raizada: Oldest of the three siblings. is the assistant manager of the raizada company and is willing to marry any girl who his parents choose because he thinks that love can happen after marriage.

Tara Raizada: youngest in the family. goes to college and loves to hangout with his friends. Always knows where her brothers are and what they are up to.

Viren Raizada: Head of the family, has a very lovable wife kavitha and is the manager of the raizada company.

Kavita Raizada: housewife, loves her family and a very nice person.



Khanna Family:

VEDIKA KHANNA: a very nice girl. works at her family company and has a older sister Niharika. not thinking about marrying just yet...waiting for the right guy to come along..

Niharika Khanna: oldest child, has a younger sis, ved. Ready to marry any guy her mom chooses and doesnt go out much, more of a homely girl.

Uma Khanna: Mother of two daughters, husband died 2 years ago and has a dream of marrying both daughters into a very nice family.


OK, thats just the main charanters for now, the rest i will introduce as i go.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice promo n intro!!





plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice start 👏 👏 plzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great...cnt wait 2 read it!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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SCENE 1

Scene starts out at the Raizada companies

Dhruv has been working all day

He is very tired and frustrated

Especially after seeing two of his clients

Who kept bugging him about some properties

Right now dhruvs had enough he cant take it anymore

He decides to leave the office early

He packs his stuff

Is almost about to leave

When his secretary comes in

Secretary: sir, some girl wants to see you

Dhruv sighs

Dhruv: ok, bring her in

She comes in

Dhruv stares at her

Hes like what a hottie

He keeps staring at her

She looks at him and is like what a hunk

Both stare at each other a while

When finally she breaks the silence

Ved: hi, iam Vedika khanna

Dhruv: hi, iam Dhruv Raizada

Ved: mr. Raizada, mera aap ke saath ek appointment tha

Dhruv: kya!, dekho aap ko koi galath family hoya hoga, kyun ki aaj mera koi appointment nahi tha

Both have an argument

Dhruv has had it

He just takes his bags and leaves

Ved standing there thinking how rude

Shes really sad

Ved leaves the office

Dhruv gets home

He goes straight to his room

After a while he goes and has dinner

Hes about to go to bed when he realizes how rude hed been with ved

Hes very sad

Thinks that the next day he?ll call her and appologize

The next mornig Dhruv wakes up early

He goes and takes a shower then quickly gets ready for office

Dhruv makes it to the office fairly early

He tells his secretary to give him ved phone number

Dhruv tries calling her but the lines engaged

He decides to go to her place and appologize in person

He gets her adress and leaves

He gets to her house and knocks on the door

Ved opens it

Ved: tum!!!

Dhruv: actually main tumse kuch baath karne aya tha

Ved: (angry) muje kuch nahi sunna

Dhruv: plz ek bar tho meri baath sun lo

Ved: maine kaha na ki muje kuch nahi sunna(turns around to leave)

Dhruv gets a hold of her hand

He stares at her

Ved: ( quickly lets go of his grip)

And slaps him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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....bechara 😆

awww...hope vedika realises what she did!!

GREAT PART BTW!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 tht wz my reaction wen i read tht vedika slaps dhruv...oh god dey gna start h8in each ova...awww but hate will turn in2 luv m sure abt tht 😉 awesome part..amazin...bechara dhruv ab kya karega...bechara mafi lene aya tha aur badle mein tapar milgaya...bechara 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Well, u know..i felt like writing some really romantic parts but then i thought i had to stick to my promo so i thought of the slappin idea!!!! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆


whoa! slap!!! and that too on the 1st part!!! wow! 👏 👏 👏 ....

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