MG SS: Age of love: Last chap(Winter) Pg67 (2/1)

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puth

@puth

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#491

sad,painful story...loved your writing skills...

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ArSh_Maaneet

@ArSh_Maaneet

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#492

I loved your story though it has a sad ending it has a meaningful and realistic plot and an ending. I would say this is a silent story with a strong impact. keep it up. Awesome!!! Truly enjoyed reading it.

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euphoric

@euphoric

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#493

Hey Sanju🤗

its a long while tht we hv chatted... how have u been??

Coming to the SS... one word to describe it... "BEAUTIFUL"

i was wondering about the title but then as i read i understood wht u were trying to say there... tht no matter the time... distance... circumstances and calamities... love only intensifies and become stronger and healthier... stays young forever! for it never grows old and fades away!

i seriously cried reading this... its an amazing piece of work...

their childhood was so beautiful... happy kids... friends forever!

the story was all the more painful for there was this one thing i could never shrug out of my mind and it was only if he would have realized a bit earlier and if she would have voiced out and confessed her love. But then this is life... she feared tht the friendship wud lost... and he realized it when it was just the time to let go...

Raj and Priya's character was wonderful too... the comfort zone was visible and yet the pinning was heart-wrenching... it was painful and i could feel their pain as their heart ached for its other half.

Wat i loved the most was Maan was very much human when he wondered how would it have been if she was bearing his child... how it should have been... after all how do u hide away from yourself? still water runs deep!

And then whn Raj died... i loved it how Priya let him free asking him to free her... she knew it was time they get their happiness... and then he ran to her... for he knew it was in her arms that he belonged to and he had been away from the comfort of his home for too long... but then Meera was understandable too...

The wedding was beautiful... the moments of togetherness was blissful... as thy tried to hold on to what was left... but the end was yet again... painful! but i agree with u... it couldn't have have been anything else :(

Beautiful work buddy... thank you😊

Love,

Sonia

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Nishttha Nath

@EimenEnchanted

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#494

my heart feels heavy :(

It was so sad ... but still so beautiful !

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Tamanna_TJ

@Tamanna_TJ

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#495

loved it sweetie...
it was painful yet blissful...
u made my cry...
keep on writing more maaneet FFs...
love u loads... keep writing...

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Sanjana

@maan-ki-sanjana

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: ananya95
awesome ending
too painful i was on verge of crying lol! its just fiction tends to seem like reality sometimes
all their wishes got fulfilled though through painful way n sacrifices
geet n her sadness for raj leaving n being no more n priya s understanding was awesome
finally they confessed their love but it seems they were destined to meet at time of her death
meera understood the depth of their love but too late
finally they married n it was a bliss for maaneet-their married life n dying in ur lovers arms

Awww...I am glad that the story could touch you Ananya!😳

Originally posted by: sindu555
I am crying right now ... fat tears ...

sanju ki bachee ...u better write a happy shappy OS soon .. otherwise ... am gonna kill u ...

I very well knew where this was heading ... but ughhh ... cudnt help reading it ... arrrgghhh .. why why why do u guys do this to me ... why do u have to write so freaking awesome that i can ignore it ... bolo bolo jawab do ...

sob sob ...

love
Sana

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Sorry Sana! I am absolutely evil...so love the tears!!
Hope you enjoyed the happy OS!😳

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theresa

@tintinu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#497

though it was very sad ss but very very beautiful poetic story dear

ur one awesome writer dear, god bless u

n for the beautiful ss

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maneetmayur

@maneetmayur

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#498

😭a sad ff but yeah an awesum story...👏 KUDDOS!!

but if u donno bone marrow transplant is a cure 4 cancer @ ny stage d disease maybe...

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maneetmayur

@maneetmayur

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#499

😭 Sad SS but surely a gud story!!!!!!! Applause 4 dat👏

Dere is a movie on d same lines but d ending is a happy 1 as d main leads unite... rest all d same.

Hope 2 read more of ur ss sanju, but let der b passion, happinessn of course a happy ending...

In case u donno let me inform u dat bone marrow transplant is a treatment 4 all types of cancer whichever stage it might be in... Cheers n enjoy writing n 4 sure life as wee!!!!!!😃

HAPPY NEW YEAR SANJU!!!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#500

hi thanks 4 da pm n emotioanl n sad painful update! Poor Maaneet! Love Priya..she is so sweet n giving! Well written! thanks 4 a wonderful Maaneet FF! Sorry 4 late lieks n comments!