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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

O My god Mayank or teli

It was so hillarious
i loved it
Dekhat ha kasa hoti ha indono ki sahdi
thanks for pm
cont soon

lol
kitna maza aay na...jab tum larki bana sakti hoo tu mein teeli nhi...
thnku dear
yeah tu many bhi nhi soch ak kasay hogi in ki shadi
lol

Originally posted by: shubhsArti

wow a stormy start.but that was expected from Valliyah.😆
loved it,will be interesting to see,how the story moves forward.
thanks for the PM.

thnks dear...for liking it
hope so u feel the same o upcuming udpdates too

Originally posted by: aancchal

loved this noke jhok.

thnku

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

wow wow...that was brilliant...OMG!!!...way tooo hilarious..."teeli"...lol!!!

very goood...update the next part sooon please.eee...

thnks dear...lol
im so glad u all r enjoying it

Originally posted by: aysha1989

That was a wonderful update... 😃
Thanks dear and Update soon 🤗

thnks dear
wil update soon

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

luvedd it

ladaka hain dono ;)
do write soon sounds interesting

thnku ..
lol
hope u feeel the fruther to OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: --jiya--

😆🤣.. ye bahut awesome tha🤣.. plzz continue soon🤣


🤗

~jiya😃~

thnku so much Jiya ji
gald ur liking it
thnks alot

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Amazing update...
Typical mayur style larai thi...
Loved it...the lines wr hilarious specially shaadi karane wali aunty...that ws funny...btw nupur kaun se angle se aunty dikhti hai hamare mayank ko..lol...
Update soon...

thnks Auro
lol..tu bechara mayank kaha se teeli dekhta hai
lol...hope u feel the same in upcuming chp

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

hayee... yahan pe bhi nok jhok!!!😍😆
luvely update fiza!
luvd it!
cont soon!
thnx 4 d pm!🤗

hmm..yaha bhi nook aur kafi sar jhook
thnks dear...glad ur liking it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: drmaha

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yar it was hilarious update...wht a combination ...😆😆

poll ki tarha lamba, teeli ki tarha skiny, aur bahloo jasay bhalo'.she laughed n her mom to giggle, aur kiya thaw oh us k favorite jumla'

' oh mine ths so tacky"

i loved this line...i was literally laughing throught out the update...🤣ROFL they knew eachther but their thought abt eacother uff...
thier first tu mindblowing...
heads off to both of u...🤗🤗
loved this ff...
plspls cont soon...
love ya both...😉

thnks dear for liking n enjoying
thy know each other way too good...let se how things chnge

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

Gosh this is indeed an interesting ff...mayur r already versatile 4 their world famous silly nok jhoks..n u hv depicted it beautifully through ur chapter...
amazingly written Valliyah 🤗 continue soon plz

thnku so much
valiyahhh...tum mjhy akelay mein milo phir baat ti hoon...😭
yeah mein ny likha tha palu...mein bhi khabhi khabhi hasti hoo rolny k elawa..
lol..just joking...thanks for liking it dear hope u felt same for upcuming parts too

Originally posted by: daniella05

lovely update!

continue soon!

thnks aloot dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Va-FI waiting for udateee
oyeee lazy girl(pointing towards valey)-update soon-boz i know now its ur turn to update dis ff..
aur ek baat- mera valleys OS gallery suna suna ho gayi- i want an OS within 2 days...so valley be ready for it- i'll give u d situation- ok????

and fiza- manhoss - aj tera dead line hai mera OS completre karne ki. nehi tou tu mujhe apni shkal maat dekhana-samjhi-.. aur har agar tum ye soch rahi ho ki- ye dhamkiya hai- tou wohi sahi...


yaar valio ka kassor nhi mera hai mein ny agay nhi liha tha n u know why..so...
tera OS manhoos aurat taiyar hai...tu ny jo fever jarah liya hai...ap waps aay tu mein post kero na
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Ohh my God It was so hilarious😆

Nupur is too funny and Mayur ki nok jhok😆
I loved nupur's description of mayank...

poll ki tarha lamba, teeli ki tarha skiny, aur bahloo jasay bhalo'.she laughed n her mom to giggle, aur kiya thaw oh us k favorite jumla'

' oh mine ths so tacky"


That's so funny🤣

Loved it.

thnks ruchi for liking it
thnks aloot
hope u enjoy further too
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Ok guys sorry its because of me tht update is a bit delayed...sorry for tht thnks aloot for lking the previous chapter.. rplyd to u all now it over to valiyah for her chapter thnks aloot
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Thankyou soo much for liking the previous chapter...thanks for all the comments...u guys r really being encouraging...here is the next chapter hope u like this too...sorry if not upto expectation and pardon if any errors...enjoy 😳...!


Chapter: 2

Nupur: warna

Mayank: warna kiya….kiyaaa

Nupur: tumhain yahim maar dalo gi mein

Mayank: nupur…dekho tum mein tumhari mami se shikayt kero ga..

Nupur: dhamki maat day na

He took a deep breath

Mayank: can we conce on matter

Nupur: han tu main ny kab mana kiya….tu MR . Sharma ..apki qualification kiya hai

Mayank: kyun ms bhushan, smriklng he puts his elbow on table leaning forward'.kya ap bhi interested hain'.

Nupur: mjhy bhagwan ny akal di hai samhjay tum...dekho mayank mjhy irritate matt kero pls

Mayank: ab is mein irritated kerna wali kiya baat hai, tum single ho tu mein socha shyad , trying to mingle ho

Nupur: nhi tumhare itni achi kismet nhi'seedhay se baato apny baray mein, mjhy agay bhi bata na hota hai

Mayank: common tu sab tu janti ho meray baray mein'.raha qualification tu mein India se M.com kiya hai aur phir US se mein ny PG.D..yani post graduate diploma kiya hai aur aj kal ek American national company mein financial auditor hoon'.1 plus hai salary meri...

Nupur: kiya...kiya rishwatay lete hoo

Mayank: zaroorat nhi hai mjhy..meri qualification itni achi job k lyan buhat hai ..sab ko apni tarah samhj rekah hai'.ek sec ek se'.tumhary yaha larkiyoon ki category wise rates tu decide nhi hotay

Nupur: tum larikiyon ko categorize kertay ho...sharam nhi ati

Mayank: jasay k tum larkiyan tu dood dholi ho ,,, khabhi asa kuch sochti hi nhi haina'..tum nhi apni "type" k hisab se set kerti ho tu hum kyun nhi'huh'

Nupur: shadi k baad yaha rehan pasand kerain gay ya US mein

Mayank: jaha ap rehna pasand kerain

Nupur: mayank donot flirt with me'.

Mayank: depends ,wasy 80% chances hain k yahin'..

Nupur: thik hai'ab yeah batao tum ko larki kaisi chaiy'.n pls be realistic languor k galy mein hoor nhi hosakti

Mayank: woh mjhy pata hai islayn tumhary liyan larka mein yeah deemgh mein rekh ker dhondo ga tum fikar maat kero'

Nupur: pointing finger...mujhe koi langur nahi chahiye samjhy tum'jaldi bolo meray pas pora din tum per waste kerny ko nhi hai'.

Mayank: hmm larki woh jis ko dekhtay hi dil kahe 'han yehi hai

Nupur: kuch kuch hota hai k dialogue hai..kam se kam dialogue tu apny bool lo

Fiza: mera script hai jaha se chao chorao tum ko kiya problem hai'...jab mein valiyah k chapter mein ghuss ker likh sakti hoon tu tum chup keroo...

Mayank: han jab mjhy bolny mein nhi hai tu tumahin sunay mein kyun hai'..kisi ko parhnay mein bhi nahi '.pls answer

Nupur: pata nhi kaha phas gai hoon

Mayank: acha tu mein kaha tha'..larki'...he took a deep breath n gave a dreaming expression to wch she gave disgusting n weird look'.

Okk main kehta hun tum points note karo……

N----oh hello kya samajh rakha hai tumne koi project nahi bana rahe hum, points note karo,hmph.

M----maloom hai aur waise bhi kis project mein tumne kaam kiya tha woh to bhala ho mera jo maine tumhe fail hone se bacha liya, warna project aur tum, project ke naam se aise bhagti jaise gadhe ke sar se singg.

N----dekho tum……

M----haan kya dekhana hai bolo,

N-----mayank tum to niklo yaha se tumse baat karna hi bekaaar hai.

M----arre, apne clients se aise baat karti ho, unhe nikalti off se, aise to na tumhare yeh shaadi ke dukaan mein bohat jald tala lag jayega, samjhi.

N---clients tum jaise ho to main sirf nikalti nahi infact dhakke de kar nikalti hu, aur tumhe mere dukaan I mean mere off bandh hone ki tension lene ki jarurat nahi, bohat gadhe hai jo apna band bajwane ke liye utawle rehte hai, ab khudko hi dekhlo.

M----nupur tumne mujhe gadha kaha.

N----maine sirf tumhe khudko dekhne kaha tha ab agar dekhne par tumne khud confirm kar diya tou ab main keh sakti hun, chalo atleast hum kisi baat par tou agree karte hai, with sarcastic smile.

M----tum kabhi nahi sudherne wali, humesha aise hi rahogi, insensitive, arrogant, proudy.

N----tell me something I don't know, chalo ek aur point par we agree, but with hurt expression which doesn't goes un-noticed by mayank.

M----realizes he took it bit too far, umm im sorry mera woh matlab nahi tha, feels guilty.

N----kya kaha tumne matlab, mayank aaj tak tumne matlab wali kaun si baat ki hai.

M----dekho ab please phir se shuru mat hojana, n please can we get back to the points.

N-----maine kab roka hai aur haan kya kaha shuru, hello shuru humesha tum karte ho, main nahi n yess hume woh karna chahiye jis liye tumne yaha aane ki takleef ki, please jaldi karo aur meri jaan choro.

M-----to main haan samjhu, with mischievious smile.

N-----mayankkk

M----okkk chill, haan tou main kaha tha,

N-----mayank tum pechle adhe ghante se mere off mein hi ho aur usse pehle kaha the im not interested, aur iss ke baad kaha hoge to hell with it, now shall we carry on.

M-----very funny, waise accha yaad dilaya, don't u have manners, kya tum apni clients ko chai coffee nahi puchti, adhe ghante mein pani tak nahi pucha yaar.

N-----tum yaha date par nahi aaye ho samjhe, ab jaldi karo mujhe aur bhi bohat kaam hai, tumhe entertain karne ke elawa.

M------so u agree ur entertaining.

N-----shut-up, n bako.

M-----nupur tum pehle decide karlo ki tumhe chahiye kya, I mean shut-up bhi kehti ho aur bolne ke liye kehti ho, n oh hello yeh bako kya hai.

N----arrrggghhh, mera matlab hai bekar ki baatein bandh karo aur point par aao.

M-----jab maine kaha point likho tou itna lambaa lecture de diye, itna lamba ki pura ek update cover hojaye aur ab khud kehti ho points par aao, nupur tum itni confuse kyun ho, I wonder tumne hi yeh shaadiyan karwayi hai na.

N-----who kya hai na ab tak insaano ki karwayi hai, tumhare saath pehla experience hai, so isiliye tumhe aise feelings horahi hai shayad.

M----tumhara matlab hai main insaano ke category mein nahi aata.

N-----gives look as if sahi jawaab.

M----tum phir se,

N----cutting in between, haan tou kaisi life partner chahiye tumhe.

M----okk tumhe main baad mein dekh lunga, abhi ke liye cease fire, hmmm tou main kya keh raha tha,

N----cease fire,

M----nupurrr,

N----okkk now serious, bolo.

M-----okk, dhayan se sunna, uski aankhen aise ho jin mein doob jane ko dil kare,

N-----kyun suicide karna hai, aur agar karna hi hai tou yaha samunder mein pani ki kami hogayi hai kya, and laughs out loud.

M-----isse suicide nahi feelings kehte hai, jo tum nahi samjhogi, with sarcasm.

N-----suppressing smile okk aage.

M----uske hoth jaise rose petals, cheeks rose ki tarah pink, uski chaal hirnee jaisi, baal resham jaisi, awaaz koyel jaisi meethi, haath butter jaise nazuk, woh aisi ho jise dekh kar phool bhi sharmaa jaye.

N----I guess mujhe order dena padhega.

M----kyaaa

N-----ab jo saare qualities tumne likh wayi hai use dekh kar lagta hai ki mujhe ladki order par banwani padhegi, accha r u sure tumhe insaan se shadi karni hai, as yeh rose, hirnee, koyel, butter……

M-----Nupur tum jealous tou nahi feel kar rahi as yeh ladkiyon wali baat tum mien nahi hai.

N-----jealous my foot, mujhe jaanwar aur phool banne ka koi shouq nahi, main jaisi hun khush hun...

M---really ..lagta tu nhi hai..

N---acha tu apko kiya lagata hai...

M—areu intrested in listen..

N---ji nhi...thik hai..tumhary point note ker liyan agar asi koi larki mili..jo posible nhi lagraha ...tu i'll give u a call

M—yaar wasy ek baat bolo..i dont mind anythng like tht...bus us se dekh ker, aur baat ker k acha lagan chaiy...n plus maa ko bhi izaat day

N—lo anty se kisi ko koi problem kyun hogi...woh tu itni sweet heart hain...

M—akhir she is myyy mom.

N---apne muh miyan mitthu hona koi inse seekhe...hadh hai..

M----chalo kuch to hai jo mujhse log seekhe...aur waise bhi tum to tareef karne se rahi to socha kyun na khud hi karlu...

N---whatever...waise yeh tareef mangne ki adat kaha padhi..koi naya tradition hai kya foreign mein...

M----nahi koi tradition nahi par agar samne tum jaisa kanjus ho to besharam hona padhta hai...ab dekho na na tea, coffee, aur nahi pani se pucha...ab tareef mein kaun se paise lagte hai atleast woh to karti par nahi...to socha...

N---hogaya...i think tumhe der horahi hai...

M-----nahi nahi mujhe koi jaldi nahi u take ur time...

N----but i don't have time.so Mr.sharma u may leave now...

M---okay okay, jata hoon chilla kyun rahi ho...kya zamana hai log clients ko pakad pakad ke baithne ko kehte hai aur ek yeh hai chilla kar nikalti hai...sar phiri hai ek dum...n turn towards the door...

N---errmmm mayank...

M---stops on the way n turns towards her, yess boliye aur kuch formalities baki reh gaya hai...

N---nahi woh mama ne kaha tha tumhe bata doon aaj dinner humare ghar par hai...

M----kyaaa...

Edited by valliyah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

YUPI valiyah

congrats on ur frst Post...see u can do it
yaar pehli baar apny FF per coment kerny k moqa mil raha hai its sound so good sachi..
u know whn i read it frst time tabhi i was laughing n enjoying..hope readers feel tht to...
lov ya gr8 part
Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
so funny and cute plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
That was too funny and cute update
By God Kitna larta ha
thanks for pm
cont soon

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