NEW FF : DIL SE DOSTI UPDATED PART :5

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Angel

@Endurance

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

hey awsum i m liking this story more than the real one hey ur gr8 u wrote it so well that we want keep on reading this and yeah ur welcum i'll give u more suggetions like this if u want 👏

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Kriya

@RanbirJia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Plzz update soon!!!! I can't wait!!!!

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Anila

@Anilaa

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Lovee the intro and Part 1&2..
You are a Fab writer.. 👏

Can't wait 4 the next part!.. 😃

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jia kapoor

@hrhr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

PART 3:

IN THE PARTY
R= chalo kriya lets cut the cake

N= yaa...fir hum dance krenge

V= aur khaenge bhi...😆😆

R= are sab hoga phle cake kat ke party to shuru karo

KRIYA CUTS HER BDAY CAKE

KRIYA 1ST CAKE PIECE RAY KO KHILANE LAGTI HAI KI ACHANAK EK AWAZ ATI HAI

VOICE= phla piece RAY ko?

R= hey sheron...
wot a pleasent surprise...

S= hey sweetie...
tumne itne pyar se kaha tha to mai kaise miss krti😊😊

R=how sweet of u ...😊😊

V= sweet kya...bhukhi khana khane aa gy free ka..😉😉😆😆

S= xcuse me!!!😡😡
kuch kaha tumne

V= han vo maine kha kya sai tym pe ay ho tum
abhi cake kata hi tha KRIYA ne😛
😛
K= chal re jaldi aa na...cake kha yar
bhut bhoookh lagi hai..

R= han ek minute aaya

S= cake pe phla peice khane ka haq to BF ka hota hai na

K=:-/...🤢🤢🤢😕😕😕😕

S= o sry mai bhool gayi thi tumhara koi BF hai hi nh

R= aur hoga bhi nh
kya kregi BF bnake
ajj kal ladke vaise bhi bot ajib hai

S= but tum...
😡
😡V= plz cake khao yr
ye KRIYA KA SWAYAMVAR bad main khel lena...😆😆

N= ha yr ray jaldi kha...hume bhi kahan hai

FINALLY RAY EATS CAKE FROM KRIYA'S HAND👏👏

R= HAPPY BDAY...STUPIDO...

K=thnkewww so much...dumbo

N= HAPPY BDAY KRIYA

K= vo sab thik hai mera gift kahan hai

N= han han gift ye rha...

V= yr kriya meri taraf se gift due rha

K= ha ha koi bat nhi vicky last 3 years se vo due hi aa rha hai

V= koi bat nhi kriya ...ek din mai tumhe BMW gift krunga

K= ya ya sure...:P

S= HAPPY BDAY KRIYA...

K= thnkeww so much...

S= this z for u

K= ohhh thnkeww so much...

N= RAY VICKKY KRIYA
LETS GO...DANCE KRTE HAI

R=sheron...come lets dance

S= ohh thanxx bt tumm log jao
enjoy urself

R= bt

S= plzz RAY mera man nh hai
plz

R= okii...its ok!!

ALL WERE DANCING AND SUDDENLY

K= ohh shit...

R= wot happened

K= nothing!!!

R= batao kriya...y r u so worried

K= vo vo

R= han bolo

K= mujhe lagta hai meri dress ka hook piche se open ho gy hai

R= kya

K= hmmm...

R= dont worry...lets go...
mai sath chalta hu washroom tak
tum thik kr lena

K= par tum

R= see kriya ye club hai
and kafi ladke idhar drunk hai so i have to be with u

K= okii,,,,

SHERON CALLS RAY

S= ray kahan to tum

R= han sheron mai yahan washroom tak aya tha

S= i am waiting for u
jaldi aao
mujhe jana hai

R= han aya bas 5 min tk

S= 5 min nh abhi aao😡😡😡

R= sheron but🤢🤢

S= ray maine kaha na abhi aao

R= mai nhi aa skta

S= okii fine be there me leaving

K= kya hua

R= nothing vo...

K= ray tum jao...
use see off kar aao
vaise bhi yahan koi nhi hai

R= bt kriya

K= are koi prob nh hai

R= acha kuch hua then do call me

K= han han pka pka bye
now leave

KRIYA SETS HER UP AND LEAVES THE WASHROOM AND THEN
SOME BOYS CAME

BOYS= hey honey
happy birthday

K= thku...bt may i knw you

BOYS= nh bt we must know each other

K= xcusee me

BOYS= itni jaldi

KRIYA WALKS AND THEN THEY FOLLOW HER

K= stop following me

BOYS TRY TO CATCH KRIYA BUT THEN A BOY COMES

STRANGER= hey buddy koi prob hai kya

BOYS= tum kon

STRANGER= is ladki ka bf

K=:-?...:O

BOYS= we are sorry bro,,,,

STRANGER= its ok...now leave

K= OMG...tum

SWAYAM tum kab aye yahan

SW= abhi
K= OMG ...i cant beleive

SW= hehehe...tumhara bday party and main na aau
aisa ho skta hai kya

K= but tum to family ke sath
abroad the na

SW= han to tumhara bday tha
mai classes ka bahana krke aa gya
vaise bhi maine tumhare college mein admission leli hai

K=OMG...kya

SW= OMG...han

THEN RAY CAMES

R= kriya tumhe itni der kio lag gyi

KRIYA TLLS HIM THE WHOLE SCENE

R= tumne mujhe call kio nhi kia
mai bs vo sheron ko

K= its ok ray...swayam aa gya tha

R= han but fir bhi vo

SW= its ok buddy
main bhi kriya ka friend hu

R= han lekin best friend nh

SW= (silent)
K= (silent)

K= acha chalo party main sab hamara wait kar rh honge

R= tumne mujhe bataya kio nh

K= its ok stupido
chal ab party enjoy kr

R= hmmm

K= sun
sheron ke sat to sab thik hai na

R= hmmm

K= ye kya hmm hmm kr rha hai
tu koi humming bird hai kya

R= kriya tujhe batana

K= acha chal ab ye help pending rhi bs

R= yr vo bat nh hai
main teri responsibility leke gya tha
nd ab mujhe guilty ho rha hai

K= ray plzzz
senty na ho yr
chal m sry

acha pata hai SWAYAM bhi ab hamare college main aa rh hai

R= kio

K= are kio kya
padne aur kis liye

R= mumbai main sare college main admission nhi mili kya use
jo yahan aa gya

K= RAYYY...
tu itna sadta kio hai sadu
kam sada kar...nhi to jal jaega
and mere pass fir FIRE BRIGADE ka number bhi nhi hai

R= hahahahahah...

PARTY OVER

EVERYBODY LEAVING TO THIER HOMES

K= oohh shit...mai apna wallet andar hi bhool gy

R= mai leke ata hu

K= nhi tu gifts andar rakh gaddi mai
mai ay

R= okii,...be fast but

AFTER 10 MINUTES

R= ye ayi kio nh abtak

SW= han kafi tym ho gya

N= ray call her

RAY CALLS KRIYA

K= help ray help

RAY RUNS TO THE CLUB
SAB USKE PICHE JATE HAI

R= kriya kriya

K= ray...vo log mujhe mujhe

RAY SEES THAT BOYS AGAIN

VO SAB KRIYA KO FIR TANG KR RHE THE

RAY FIGHTS WITH ALL OF THEM
AUR VO SAB BHAG JATE HAI

R= tu thik hai na

K= hmmm...

R= oye meri humming bird
thik tarah bata

K= han m fine

EVERYBODY GOES TO THEIR HOMES AND WHILE SITTING
IN THE CAR

RAY TO SWAYAM= friend friend...
AUR BESTFRIEND BESTFRIEND hota hai...

PRECAP

COLLEGE EXAMS

EXAM FEVER IS ON...:p

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Anila

@Anilaa

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Loveelyy Updatee! 👏

ahaha its cute how Rey gets Jealous 😉

''R= mumbai main sare college main admission nhi mili kya use
jo yahan aa gya

K= RAYYY...
tu itna sadta kio hai sadu
kam sada kar...nhi to jal jaega
and mere pass fir FIRE BRIGADE ka number bhi nhi hai'' 😆

❤️ Lovee it!.. Please update soon.. 😃

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Piya

@piya2025

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Aww Our lover boy is already jealous before becoming a lover boy hun..Lol nice really liked the part,well written..What I like about your writting is that very casual..close to reality how friends talk..
Best dialouge of the part - Humming birl lol & The last one Rey to swayam..he's already so much into Kriya..Hota hai hota hai jab tak BFF ka koi BF na ho other BFF ko pata nahin chalta how much he loves her :)aww..Cont.soon :)

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jia kapoor

@hrhr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: xsweetiiix
Loveelyy Updatee! 👏
ahaha its cute how Rey gets Jealous 😉

''R= mumbai main sare college main admission nhi mili kya use
jo yahan aa gya

K= RAYYY...
tu itna sadta kio hai sadu
kam sada kar...nhi to jal jaega
and mere pass fir FIRE BRIGADE ka number bhi nhi hai'' 😆

❤️ Lovee it!.. Please update soon.. 😃

thnkewww so much...😊😊😊

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jia kapoor

@hrhr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: piya2025
Aww Our lover boy is already jealous before becoming a lover boy hun..Lol nice really liked the part,well written..What I like about your writting is that very casual..close to reality how friends talk..
Best dialouge of the part - Humming birl lol & The last one Rey to swayam..he's already so much into Kriya..Hota hai hota hai jab tak BFF ka koi BF na ho other BFF ko pata nahin chalta how much he loves her :)aww..Cont.soon :)

thnkewww so very much dear...
ur appreciation gives me ideas to write...

thnxx...