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Posted: 13 years ago
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me commenting first, ohhh ive never been the first to comment..i'll like to thank my timing and its reallyreal for coming up with such a beautiful concept...
"I'm sorry Geet, I was jealous of the hair on your lip so decided to replace it with my lips
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nawww...that was so cute! i love this maan, i was shy for geet myself!
"Geet smiled innocently trying to give him her cutest look so that he wouldn't get mad but then suddenly started yelling herself."
hehehe, that is such a sweet part, it made me smile till me cheecks started to hurt, you write everything soo nicely, its as if im watching a movie!
"I don't know Geet," Maan said sarcastically, "maybe a TENT," he looked up at her with one eyebrow raised.
ohhh, i see where this is leading to
"fine Maan, we'll both use the sleeping bag."
SAY WHAAAT????
WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE...UPDATE AS SOOON AS POSSIPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
EVERYONE PLEASE LIKE SO WE GET UPDATE SOON,, A HUGE STADING OVATION FOR BEAUTIFUL UPDATE!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
ohhh very looong update... lemme read first... will comment later
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
yayy you finally updated! great part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Congrats for the new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Finally Marvee.. u updated after a heck of a long time.. But i must say the waiting was totally worth it.. amazing update.. thanks alot for this super duper long part.. will wait for the next update eagerly.. do update soon.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
oye hoye... geet forgot the bag with the jackets and helmet.. wow...
sharing sleeping bag... wooowie
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Congo for the new thread...
Awsome update...
Loved maan jealous of geets hair on her lip...
Eagerly waiting for the sleeping bag scene. ...
Cont soon... ^_^
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
awesome , brilliant part
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

Awesome... Just loving the build up... and the entire story..

Freedom... hmm... i'm really enjoying this part of the story i guess this Geet has a part of all the girls out there... i can relate to her.. and i'm sure a lot more can...
thanks for the awesome story Marvee... and hats off to you 😊 Please update soon 😉

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