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samira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

it was awesome start hun looking foward to read more cont soon sis thnx for the pm

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drmaha

@drmaha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

nice fiza...

their relation seems bit cmplicated..but as story proceeds it will reveal...

nupurs pov owards mayank was surprising rite from the beginning of their relationship...

and mayank is so calm, quite person...sumtimes it feel tht he dont care abt her just to ask abt her needs in order to fullfill formality,...

pls cont soon...

thi sstory is really different from others and i want to read it...

pls update soon. dear...

love ya...

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

lovely start

nice

continue soon

😊

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

this is quite strange relationship...i'm eagerly waiting to know why they got married...was that a simply arrange marriage or something else?
wonderful update as usual...plz update soon

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Marvelous writing...
abhi se mujhe craving ho rahi pura padne ki...
Loved the beginning...the way u start ws mysterious yet fascinating...made my interest increase more...
Update soon...want to read further...

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valliyah

@valliyah

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

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Nupur is confused...she fears but she cares...she may think that she is not a part of his life still her own life revolves around HIM...she hesitate when he is early on bed n waits when he is late...one side of her wants to be his whereas the other feels to be a burden so doesn't want to proceed...she wants to give him all the space in the process creating unwanted space(distance) between them...like paas hokar bhi hai doori, jaane kaisi hai majburi...if only she communicates ...on second thought agar woh communicate kar leti tou yeh FF kaha padhne ko milta 😳😆...!

p.s...kyun ki update sirf nupur's pov per hai isiliye comment bhi nupur par hi kiya hai humne...no comment on mayu till i get to know him or his pov 😳...brilliantly penned down...!

Edited by valliyah - 14 years ago