Short story Journey of Life (maaneet)pt4 at pg9 26 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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yipppeee - u knw i already luv this naddiya...nyc to see it on IF too...cnt wait to read more n more n more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it. Awesome start but terrible accident...
continue soon...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thx dear for reading it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ash534

Good start. Waiting for next part ...

thx dear you liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tishuu

yipppeee - u knw i already luv this naddiya...nyc to see it on IF too...cnt wait to read more n more n more

yup dear many readers dont follow blog they drag me here again kya karo readers always win 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting i like it... plz cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maan: drop her on snow

Geet: ouch

Adi : clap his hand " i am a dr please all those who are hurt come her"

Sasha: my legs

Geet: aur pehno skirt ... yeh lo give her her scarf to wrap. sat next to her

Maan: smiled ...

Adi: please will you guys get the first aid box ..and other things which are not burn

Dev was just looking at his burning plane

Arjun: knocked at his shoulder "lets go and find things before it get dark"

Dev: hmmm

Mama ji : look around " is everyone here or some one missing"

NT: counted "few are missing "

Maan: we should get things from plane

Adi : all the gents can go i will stay here ..

Mama ji : mein bhi aata hoon

Maan: nahi nahi aap yahan raha... khayal raka...

Adi: jaldi jai aap log..

NT: hum bhi aata ha hum bilkul theek ha

DEV: you stay here...

Tasha fore head was bleeding

Romeo : to Lucky chala

Maan: bhai jee to brij

Brij: who was staring at Geet and Sasha " mujhe se kuch bola"

Maan:" jee aap bhi chala zara help karda "

DEV,Maan,Lucky,Arjun,Romeo walk to the plane external part which didnot catch fire...

Maan : look back saw Brij coming Maan to Dev" he is bit different we should be aware if him"

Dev: ya i felt same.


they collected what every the could find . they drag back all the things to them...

Geet: Kya laya she took sleepers from Maan.

Maan: mien Paris shopping karna nahi gaya tha

Geet: sorry ...

Dev good how you guys managed fire

nandini : i & she collected shrub

Maan :Saw Geet rubbing her hand

Geet: she was feeling cold so to help her she pointed at Sasha

Maan: we found luggage of few people please give everyone warm clothes

Geet & nt gave them

Maan sit next to fire look at Geet who was just rubbing Tasha hands

Mama ji: putar koi bottle mile

Dev: aap

Mama ji: sub freeze hojai ga...

Lucky: yeh lo uncle

Maan: pagal hogai ho...grab the bottle from his hand hide behind him

Arjun: will any one help me in fixing this tent or we all will freeze in this cool breeze

Maan:aik min .. he just jump up and help Arjun ..

Lucky: yeh tou aik ha how we all will fit in

Maan: it is big aik side per ladies on other side gents ..

Lucky i could only find 7 sleepers

Arjun: we will share.

Lucky : i just which the search team come quickly for us or we all will get sick...

Mama ji: bola tha mein na kya sub ko aik aik sip do per yeh maana nahi woh dekho iss na pee le ..he pointed at Geet...

Maan: shit he just ran to Geet and snatch the bottle ...

Geet: chupa kar rekhi thi na aap na

Maan: what are you doing ?

Geet: pee rahi hoon

Maan: pagal ho

Geet: abhi tou mein na sirf thori se pee ha

Maan: yeh bhi zaida ha .. he walk back to the tent

Geet: do muhje ko .

Maan: chup kar ka betho made her sit

Geet: nahi she started walking back behind him .."you give me "

Maan: it is not coke

Geet: pata ha mein koi bachi nahi hoon she just hold his coat .

Arjun : smiled gai yeh tou

Maan: why she is behind me pehla he pagal ha ab aur hogai ha ? he just hold her

Geet: i am not behind you

Maan: acha

Geet; mein tou hiccups ..oh sorry

Maan: smiled

Geet: haasa kyun

Maan: acha nahi haasta , tum yahan beto mein yeh laga do

Geet: hum iss mein soai ga

Maan: ha

Geet : come here ask him to come near her

Maan: who was tying the rope " kya"

Geet: pointed at Brij " woh bohot stare kar raha ha muhje ko"

Maan: you just stay with me i will see him

Geet: paka

Maan ha

Geet; thank you kissed his cheek you are so cute...

Maan: just blushed he just look around if anyone had seen them ,everyone was busy in them self .

Geet: just seated where he made her sit ..

after some time

Dev: attention please everyone

Mama ji : present

Dev: we could not find any thing to eat so we all should sleep . we could find only 7 sleepers and one tent so we all have to share...you can select with whom you want to stay.

Geet: sish sish ... i have chocolate she taken out 3 bars from her pants pocket "you give everyone"

Maan: smiled he just gave that to DEV

DEV: smiled thank " we can have this "

Geet: bus meri pocket mein itna he aai sakta tha ,agar pata hota to mein aur rakhti

Maan: colud not take his eyes off her ."you are too cute "

Mamaji: hold Brij hand "mein aur bhai jee "

Brji: looked at him in anger...

Lucky i am with romeo ... chal bhai

Sasha i am with my sis Tasha

Adi: me with my wife Pinky

Nandni i and nantara jee

Arjun mein pilot jee ka saath thek hoon

Geet me with... she paused

Maan:she is with me..he looked at brij he was staring at her ...

Dev: good lets all go in and settle...

Maan: help her to get up

Geet:feet stuck in snow ..Maan just picked her up walk in everyone was settling . "hum kab tak yahan raha ga"

Maan: pata nahi

Geet: subah ghuman chala ga thek

Maan: smiled thek

Geet: promise

Maan: ha aap sojao ... he just made her lay down

Geet: just twist and turn till he settle

Maan: kya huwa

Geet; sat and look around .everyone was laying down...she again lay she accidentally placed her head on his shoulder

Maan : looked at her ..

Geet: was about to move her head


Maan: sojao good night pat her cheek .. placed his hand on her shoulder.

Geet: smiled hold his fury over coat...and slept

coming days will bring more adventure in their life



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Posted: 14 years ago
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how they are going to survive without food?
and wat is brij's mystery? does he knows Geet?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing update. 👏 👏 👏
<3 <3 <3 it. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
How they will face severe circumstances. 😕
I think brij is suspicious.😡
I like maans behavior toward cute geet.
Excitedly waiting 4 next part.continue soon.
Thnx 4 d pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi if u don't mind can u translate it❓
awww geet and maan moments❤️

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