ArHi SS/FF - With Or Without You- Chp 61/Pg114-Last Chp - Page 18

Originally posted by: M_n_h

read all the parts its really nice

thank you so much!

appreciate you taking the effort to write a line!😊

Originally posted by: romantic.chick

UFF!!!

Missed the last two at night :(

And am now trying to read jaldi jaldi in office 😉

Like the way you're hotting it up babes ... slowly but surely!!!

LOVING IT TOTALLY ❤️

Thank you jaan e mann

i am waiting for yours now!!

awesome updates
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

OMG 5 updates... wow... am i dreaming... Vrush that was sooo hot... awesome... loved all the updates... muahs to u for making my Monday morning so good...

Thanks Gouri darling..

i am glad i could get those monday morning blues.. away!!

yep..see na... jab likhti hoon toh rukti nahi hoon

jab ruk gayee..toh u know what happens...then i cant write...

there are some who will say TMBA ka kya kiya!!

and you know uska kya haal hai..

so i want to finish this before i get over it!

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Vru!!!

Chapter 46 and 47 were...☺️

You've written the whole scene so well hun!! The air was filled with passion and emotion!

Shukar hai ke main behosh nahin hui...saans zaroor attak gayi lekin!!!

The parathas were a nice touch.

Thanks for the PMs my angel and I look forward to the next part!!

😊

Thanks my Phool!

yeah.. you liked that?

i am glad.. something ordinary yet..loving..kyon..

shayad zindagi mein aisa hi hota hai... it is the oh so ordinary looking moments..

ab hamare upar dupatta toh girne se raha...

or even getting stuck and the guy getting all mushy over the dupatta

or..even..slip and catch...hum toh shayad girenge..aur aajoo bajoo log hanseinge
so yeah..its the paratha moments in life that one should remember...!!

saath saath khana... and all!!

Originally posted by: sweet_girl234

Chapter 46
wooaaah
im speechless!
That was soo hoot!
Haha how arnav told khushi dont fight the feeling enjoy it !!
Wow khushi is definately getting bolder day by day!
You are one heck of a writer!!
I was getting worried room service may spoil it! But it only made it more interesting haha

Chapter 47
aww khushi making parathe
arnav is becoming naughty day by day!
What does arnav want but cant get
that is confusing
aww hes going to wake up to her tomorrow again!

loved the updates!!
Thanks for the pms!

Thanks mariam

i dont know about the writer bit..i try to see how the character work together..and i write what they would do in a given situation..and circumstances..

glad you like them..

arnav naughty nahi hai..ye kisne keh diya??

woh ek number ka kameena..hai!!

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Smoking hot updates! Wow Vrushali!

Thanks Abs..your one liners are like a book to me..for i know exactly what you are trying to say my love

😊

Originally posted by: pri12

stry is going awsome..good work

Thanks Priya

feels good to hear that!

Originally posted by: kins103

loved your both 18+ updates

do write more

continue soon and update today only

thanks kins..

glad you like them

i shall try...

epi ke baad..koshish karoongi

koshish mat karna