TAQDEER-(DISCONTINUED)

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Chandlerbing1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

sounds really interesting

pls cont soon

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Simran Kaur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Nice update 😳
Continue soon...
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smritiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

CHAPTER 7
Geet applied the khol...in her eyes and looked up from the table...she caught Maan's gaze on her .Somehow Maan just controlled himself from going and talking to her...A cute eyelock followed...and resulted in a pink blush which climbed up Geet's delicate cheeks and a smile which would defeat a freshly bloomed flower...😳
They were lost in each other until the bell rang...It brought them out of a little dream world...
Geet was walking lost in her thoughts...
Geet's (POV)
Who is this Mr.X anyway? Why is he really caring for me? Do i know him?Why was I happy when I received that Bouquet? "
Her chain of thoughts were broken when she ran into some one...He helped her to get up and gave her back her property and slipped an violet envelope and walked away smiling...Geet did not notice who it was but then suddenly stopped...She felt a familiar aroma around her...She knows its him...she ran just into him a few days back...but prayed not to see him again...
She was about to move away when she heard a voice from the auditorium...A familiar song which filled her with unfamiliar emotions and gave comfort to her tattered heart in her present and past...It was like this...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ywGwN8OVp58

The song brought a surge of pain but the voice gave unmeasurable happiness...She opened the door and spotted a guy in black shirt bend down with a guitar and singing...She could not see his face and was really disappointed😭😭😭.Every line he sang had emotions in depth to it...She did not know why but she had a instinct to run and hug him...comfort him telling she was going to be there for him...But who was he???(Smrithi wonders does any one know?)
Abhay came in through the other entrance and stood there rooted...His friend was expressing himself after a long time...
"Maan..."is what he murmured...and left quietly, not noticing Geet who was trying to catch a glimpse of him...😲😲😲
Armaan was really confused with Ridhima...One minute she was absolutely fine and next minute she ran away...crying...
She entered the auditorium with Armaan following her at a distance...She found solace to her heart in that song...highly inspiring her...She stood at the side of the door...Armaan heard it as well but to him it was just a song...
Pia walked out of the library at same time angrily.She had slapped a guy and ran into a girl...
"Am really sorry..." she said...
"Its ok chill Babez..." she looked up to see a pretty girl...
G-"Hi i m Anjali..."
P-"Pia here nice to meet you"...
They continued chatting and walked together...Abhay came humming the tune and Pia just gave him a glare while Anjali just stopped and gave him a bear hug...
A-"So gud to see you...Abhay"
Ab-"Yup same here..."
Pia felt a wave of anger as soon as Anjali touched Abhay...she found it really baseless and scolded herself...
Geet felt familiarity in the voice but then shrugged it away...

Edited by smrithi1234 - 13 years ago

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smritiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

"THO SHURU HO GAYA YE KAEL TAQDEER KA...KYA HOGA ISKA ANJAAM...?????????????
kya geet kuch payega Mr X. ke sath...
Kya hain Maan ka dard?
Kyun Ridhima baag raha hain?
Kya Abhay aapne aap ko samaj payenga?
Kyun karta hain Pia itni nafrat laadkon se?
KYA TAQDEER INKA JAWAB DEGA?

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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rasal1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

i really find it getting interesting every single chapter and really excited as to know what happened in their past...👏...luv the way ur devloping dis mystery abt Maan's memory loss👏👏👏
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Edited by rasal1234 - 13 years ago

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Simran Kaur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Nice update dear...
Loved it..
Update d nxt part soon...
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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

creating too much mystery yaar..!

who s dat guy?

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smritiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

NOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dEARIES M REALLY SORRY BUT I WONT B ABLE TO UPDATE THE NEXT CHAP .THIS MONTH U WILL GET IT ON THE 1ST WEEK OF DECEMBER AS I M HAVING EXAMS...SO HOPE U WILL UNDERSTAND...AND WILL WAIT...
WIT LUV
SMRITHI

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