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maancrazy

@maancrazy

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#381

I'm at a loss for words... starting with amor faiti, all the updates have been beautifully written...the realisation that life is fickle makes you value every moment...the last update was truly hot chocolate...gotta love this maan :-)

The entire journey is so well written, you really should think about submitting it to a publisher...and of course please provide us with a pdf whenever you can...looking forward to Mr Iyer and Mrs Khurana !

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#382

It's a beautiful ending Hasini.
The family planning to catch Maaneet while sneaking out.
The expect sneaking love birds Naini-Rishabh joined to tease Maaneet 😆
Loved the ending.. Central Park...
Puppy... Its so adorable...
So they adopted him... Seems like Maan got a competitor now😉..
Geet wants to spent more time with Maan..
That is wat needed for now..
Loved the way she said it as..
She just want both of them for few years and later plan for their junior..
Like Maan said... We cant predict what will happen next...
All the best to Maaneet...

Finally NY has come to an end..
It looks perfectly fine without an epilogue...
Am truly going to miss reading ur updates...
But will surely drop by to read my fav parts...
I will keep stalking you on ur other FFs...
Keep writing Hasini... 👏

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hamini_yash

@hamini_yash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#383

Well! do you by any chance remember me?

hi hi hi.

I haven't been able to login to this forum since my comp crashed and then I got busy with dasara celebrations.

Any ways today after trying accidently, my pc did work but at donkey walking speed, so here I am , I read all your, say 10 updates together and any amount of words would fall short.

I liked each and every update, it was like you were competing with your own writings and forcing me to replace old moments with new ones,

the best entertaining being :naini telling abhi that maan forgets his family when given the laptop and phone,

funny reading about abhi crying that they lost maan in vegas ,

dreadful and terrible to read you creating that 9/11 scene again( I know it must have been very difficult to write it)

romantic when maan spoke sooo many things at once. Finally he spoke

"You too brutus" moment( this one was there in Mrs.Khurana and Mr. Iyer too right?)

And the last one , what shall I say???? You might even vaguely remember me as one who used to plead after each comment not to stop this ff. But honi ko kaun tal sakta hai, and I did understand when you used to console me that finishing NY times is for our own good.

Anyways, pleeeaaase don't remove me from your PM list.

And I am eagerly waiting for your more and more magical writings.

Happy Dasara

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-eiya-

@-eiya-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#384

errr i will miss geet nd maan of new york times...they surely wr a replica of reality ... not imaginative characters...their fights..their love...their make up...finally one relizing that she had fallen in love with the maan for who he is nd wht she wants him to be...nd maan adding some words to 'his' vocabulary...never thought that i will love any other characters other than maan nd geet for their love...but u made me add rishab nd naini to that list ...daadima-the best daadi in the world...loved meera nd yash too...the way u play with words is just amazing...wil miss reading them 😒...

thank you so much for giving NEW YORK TIMES👏...nd nd most importantly for HOT CHOCOLATE...

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Antares

@Antares

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#385

The last part was fabulous! From the time they were in the closet to Naini and Dadimaa along with the others teasing them to their outing at the Central Park. It was all brilliantly planned and your blending in the past moments with the present ones made the memories even more beautiful.

Loved all your characters, especially Maan and Geet, of course! 😆... They came a long way from where they had started. Loved the way their characters and relationship developed and how they grew individually to fit together and come close to becoming a perfect couple that we saw in the very last bit.

Even Abhi and Naini became my 2nd most favourite couple and I enjoyed how you portrayed all the characters...including Dadima, Yash and Meera. Giving each one a story of their own and keeping me hooked to it throughout.

The story, the concept, the characters... it was all great. Your descriptions, words, profundity...everything proves what an amazing writer you are and I mean it. It was a wonderful experience and am going to cherish this remarkable journey for a long time. Thanks Hasini.

Hope you continue to write a lot more stories. Would love to read your work.

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#386

i started to bloody read and you end it.. ugh.. me want more
but but but
it was a beautiful ending..
will go more indepth later :D
xxx

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Shalini

@shalini01

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#387

i really did enjoy this FF. its sad that it has ended. but it was a great journey with you and the characters.

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#388

I've waited all day to write a comment here

Honestly, I really don't know how to express my feelings because I'm confused on whaty they are myself

Bottomline: I'm very proud of you, more than you'd believe and more than I can convey

I've felt joy at the completion of a storyline that I've followed for months, but I've also felt sadness that the journey of self-discovery within the past year is over (you know what I'm talking about here, I hope). To be honest, I think I've been mostly sad all day that its over.

I know good things have to end sometime soon but I was really hoping that the story would pull through another 22 days till Oct 25th. Why that particular date?

-----> That's because that is the date last year when I first commented on this story and we got to know of each other. We met through this story and I'm so happy that we've become friends.

I know I'm making a muck of what I'm trying to say. I'm going to stop and post more later once I can think more rationally ;-)

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568124

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#389

Hello Folks,
I'm have terrible schedules for the next few days. I'm sorry I will be available to look at the comments and respond only starting Wednesday. Its unfortunate that I'm not able to enjoy the lovely comments you folks are leaving for me.

Oh! for Iyer and Khurana...I will only start writing towards the weekend. I will keep you guys posted if things change at my end.

Hasini

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thea_angely

@thea_angely

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#390

hmmm...a journey filled with your words, which marked emotions of a relationship...has come to an end...but seriously being a silent reader all i can say is it was worth reading...thankyou dear...
NY times 👏

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