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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

I am super sleepy hasini will read it first thing tomorrow morning
Bye good night and Thank you

HIma

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princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Rubbing it in, eh! 😆

My becoming a dazzler?😛

yeah!

I love the aqua-green!😊

And, please, my posts are far less important and sensible than yours😆

For now, I am happy to be a goldie and look at you to say Same-TO-Same😃😆

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: Ramhari
I am super sleepy hasini will read it first thing tomorrow morning
Bye good night and Thank you

HIma

Hey Hima di😊

*swati waves*

how are you doing?

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#314

How much time will you take Hasini?

I have just about half-an-hour before I leave for 10days😭

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: princess163
How much time will you take Hasini?
I have just about half-an-hour before I leave for 10days😭

Sorry Gurl! I indulged in the thread for a long time and lost time on writing the update. Hope we can catch up soon...

You have a good one.
Hasini

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Aarya,
Can I take it that you are finally taking to NY times Maan?

You know I remember our discourses about 'perfect' and now you have lined up perfect in the same line for three times. So coming from you it really does mean a lot.

And then we also talked about eternity...Lord! I'm feeling all nostalgic now.
Love the sonnet.

The foundation of my next OS comes from this quote and I think it very much applies to our M&G as well. What do you say to that?

"Anyone can be passionate, but it takes real lovers to be silly." ' Rose Franken

Congrats H on Goldie, the color does add a little 'zinc' to the name! :)

Now, as for liking your Maan; meaning 'I like you', cause both Maan and Geet are part of you! 😉

~Anyone can be passionate, but it takes real lovers to be silly...

When you can be your true self with someone, and you only want to be your true self because of them, you have found true love...

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#317

Hey dear me again.. finally i finished with the NYT marathon reading..all the parts till date...ur writing skills have spun a different world around me... HOT CHOCOLATE is what i feel right now.

Right from the song Ore piya to marjawan what different emotions the two have gone through... to Geet's realisation of her feelings for him.. to her breaking away from her marriage bond...the trauma faced at the alley...Maan's own way of bringing her out from it... to her showing him her divorce papers the first...His christmas keepsake👍🏼👍🏼

Maan's whole confession style right from the actions at the flea market to put it in words..in the apartment... was so dreamy😍

Then came Geet's not being able to accept it...and planning to go away to frisco... and the thread tying them together finally bringing them to come toghether in india...loved Maan's protectiveness of brij's behaviour..follwed by Geet's indirect confession of HIS position in her life.. so beautifully put...the birthday celebration & gifting of the bracelet...so beautiful..each & every charm the way they are connected to the moments they spent together..

right after that the painful phase of their misunderstandings.. & problems.. to Maan's proposal at the atrium to her nonacceptance... loved the efforts put by Dadi & Meera..to bring these two souls together...& Dadi making Geet see through her confusion & bringing about the much needed clarity her acceptance for marriage..

loved the whole marriage & rituals.. the way they start understanding each other & as well accepting their flaws...& knowing each other.. their trip to sohra ..and mysterybeing demystified👏👏

Their return to NY.. revelation of geet's past.. and the way Maan helped & supported her to process her baggages just loved it.. followed by the divorce date issue..& all the problems it created to renewal of thier vows to each other..culminating to their nirvana ... just awesome...

Their honeymoon.. her word substituion..to him being adamant for her to open up..to her putting her shyness aside and saying the words to him..as she realised he too is as vulnerable as her..again mindblowing

Revelation of Naini & Maan's past family issues.. and how he found solace in Geet...too good

Geet's moving to frisco..and all the problems faced by them in the long distance relation with communication issues and need to understand each others wants...very well put forward ..loved Geet's way of putting it forwars to him thru the blinfold game...followed by some sensous updates...

Naini-Rishab relation loved this couple too... & loved the closure u gave them..& their wait for their bundle of joy..

also Yash- Meera...loved even them as a couple...

finally the climax that u put forward thru the tragic 9/11 incident was so beautifully given by you...to the finale of both of them understanding & accepting the other in their on ways...HOT CHOCOLATE..

I know ur ending this ff in another few updates and i'm glad i could be a part of this ...loved each part & ur writing ... eagerly waiting for the remaimning parts...

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#318

All Maan remembered in those awful event was Geet.
Beautiful hospital scene.
Really loved how all Maan's family moved towards him once he gain conscious..
Maan keep murmuring Hot Chocolate.. That was the best.
Maan back home safely.. Lucky him.
He made Geet goes for her conference.
Geet was leaving.. She didnt want Maan to continue blaming himself.
Naini came right on time to tell it off to Maan..
Airport scene was marvelous...
Maan poured out his unspoken feelings towards Geet.
Am really glad at last he did it..
Misunderstanding could be solved by speaking out.
Their whole convo was brilliant.. I loved it to core...
Hot Chocolate!!!!

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#319

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#320

Guess what...I'm at Peets...trying to finish the last part.

Hope no one is eyeing to attack this one down...😉 Lol...I'm too full of myself.

Don't ask me what is taking this long...I have been writing this kiss scene like forever...only finished it this morning...So got to the remaining scenes only after that.

Bear with my tardiness my dearies...

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago

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