ff Love,Lies and Deceit-LLD A Maneet Story - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you dear. but expected mor feedback from you😭😭 plz when u point out the flaws it helps me to do something about it so plz give ur honest opinion and plz point out what u feel should be different. i will really appriceiate it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you so much
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Hmm...an insight of Maan Singh Khurana's feelings...not any less interesting than the story itself...so he's in to deceit in a way to achieve what he desired for...his Cheri...these are sort of Lies n deceit he applied to bring her to himself...which he did in his love for her...the title accountability has already started...lets see what more he did to gain what he wanted more than anything else in the whole world...

well esha u have a great insight in my story and maybe u r right. I was going to explain it in more detail(actullay i had written it, as ur answer but erased it as it gave away lot more than i wanted at this point)...lets see how the story progresses.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crystal-rose

well esha u have a great insight in my story and maybe u r right. I was going to explain it in more detail(actullay i had written it, as ur answer but erased it as it gave away lot more than i wanted at this point)...lets see how the story progresses.


No problem dear...I'll rather wait for the story to unravel...take ur time...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweettaz16

i jus read all parts, love the story.. plz add me to ur pm list... thanks😊 n am also thinking geet( probz cheri) is probably havin an affair with maan... am curious now... plz continue soon

i jus read all parts, love the story.. plz add me to ur pm list... thanks😊
Thank you dear for liking this story. And as u r liking this story hope u will read the future updates and comment and press the like button.
n am also thinking geet( probz cheri) is probably havin an affair with maan...
No she is not having an affair with maan. don't know about the future.(Do u want her 2 have an affair?)... she is getting engaged to Dev so how can she???????
am curious now...
well... curiousity killed the cat...have some patience
plz continue soon
will do
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

i know its geet .. in fact it has to be geet ... plzzz ... reveal it now ...

Thank you dear
u r most wellcome
will do it
i know its geet .. in fact it has to be geet ... plzzz ... reveal it now ...
well i don't know whether it is geet or not? and if i reveal it now will u read the future story???
so have patience dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
next update to only those friends who have clicked the LIKE button on ALL THE PARTS... so dear friends plz click like button if u like this story and want a pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crystal-rose


Ha my fingers crossed for Geet to be Maan's love interest... I can't see any other girl on which Maan is falling so intensely... but his behaviour with Geet is rude so that is confusing me...

No kiran(can i call u that) he is not rude with geet. but he is falling so intensely for his 'Cheri'. Well variety is spice of life so y geet only? y can it not be someone else?
Interesting update...thanx for pm
Thanks ...wellcome dear.



Yes u call me Kiran because Tushti is my 8 yr daughter name and Kiran is my name...

we are Maaneet fans that is why we prefer Geet...let us see how u have planned...

thanx for answering my query...actually this is my habit...whenever I get pm...I don't forget like button and comments and when I read next part I will first go to previous part and see my comment if it has been answered or not...I also feel elated when a writer finds my comments worthy of answering...as u may be feeling by seeing people commenting on ur update.


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