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Seher

@Speechless

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

to handle

The way he kicked the Fone

grhhh dev disturb kar diya na stupid spoiled the moment of togetherness

They both never liked to share

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HiddenTruths

@HiddenTruths

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

thats hot😳 i love it👏

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Hey marvee...
awesome...
fab...
superb...
wonderful...
loved the upd...to the core...
thanx for the pm...
take care...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Hi thanks 4 da pm n sensual hawt update! Maan start asap on da business lust deal n r gettinh hawt on heavy per Geet's terms wen silly stupid Dev interrupts 😡. Poor Maaneet! Everything else forgotten. Maan upset wid Dev bt worried abt Geet! Luckily clever geet takes charge! Love da way she addressed Dev! Loved the convo betwen dem! Bt business first! Well written! Precap is awseum. Update soon n pm wen u do! 😉

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Anjali

@Gurlygirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

lovely update. M loving the business proposal! Update soon

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

nice part. thanks for the pm

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maaneetfanatic

@maaneetfanatic

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

OMG...I READ ALL 8 PARTS IN ONE GO..AND WOW...THIS IS ONE HOT FF!!! EVERYTHING IS PRESENT HERE...LOVE, LUST, ANGER, JEALOUSY...EVERYTHING...AND I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU HAVE CAPTURED IT ALL IN JUST 8 UPDATES😲 AS FOR THIS ONE NOT BECOMING LIKE UNTOLD EMOTIONS...HHMMM CHALO DEKTAI HAI KI KYA HOTA HAI😉 I SERIOUSLY AM ENJOYING MAAN PLAYING WITH GEET'S EMOTIONS JUST SO SHE CAN OWN UP TO HIM...HHMM ME LIKEY LIKEY😆😆 AND GEET..UFFF AS IF SHE DOESN'T SEEM DESPERATE AT ALL...😳😳 BUT STILL I LOVE THIS LOVE SHOVE THEY R DOING...SO HOT AND SEXY☺️ CAN'T W8 FOR THE NEXT UPDATE👍🏼

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

OMG😳😉☺️

now, you must have guessed that what i am feeling right now😆 ... man, these lustful partners-cum-friends are really desirably uncontrolled indeed ... gosh, were they really doing all that ???❤️😍 ... and DID Maan really throw there phone so as not to be disturbed🤣 ... they are really impossible😎 ... curse that devil😡 ... but both managed to show him that as nothing happen there👍🏼 ... but Maan was impressed by Geet's calmness & the way she is talking to that devil (clearing cunning him for disturbing them) ... that devil is drooling on wrong girl🤬 ... only Maan can affect Geet by his charm & only Geet can make Maan forget almost everything🤗 ... god, they are not ready to do any meeting whereas they always prefer work first ... now that meeting darkness precap is🥳

do cont soon & do PM me😃

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sreejita Das

@sree12

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#229

Your writing is very much impressive and I love this story. I have started my own fan-fic "Remember Me". Plzzz do read it and let me know how is it. Continue soon. The link of my fanfic is

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1795121/remember-me-a-maaneet-fanfic-part-8-updated

Read it guys and let me know how is it.