OS: Bepanaah Pyar - P3 Final Pg14

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: mohini4u

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Raunika

@rsk16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

loved the update.very nice and an amazing concept.

brilliant update.

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Mohini

@mohini4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: divya4salmanyk
awsum OS!
i luved it!
d start was awsum! cnt wa8 2 c wht happens nxt! they stil luv each othr..!! Plz do update soon! n do add me in ur pm list if u hv! :-)

Hey Divya - WOW

Thanks so much for liking it! 😳 yes they still madly love each other! I will be posting the next part soon! 😛

BTW you are already in my buddy list!

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

plz do update soon dear! cnt wa8! :-)

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Mohini

@mohini4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: lostlove

speechless

speechless

really the os is fabulous

i loved the great way that you used it in writing ( talking about the past and remembering the memoriable memories)

is better than start the story from the begining

that means how imaginative writer you are👏

include the update some nice videos makes your os more a live and approch the scenes of the os to our imagination

i hope you could complete the next part soon

it's exciting i can't wait

aww dear these are some really amazing comments!!

I can't believe how beautifully you responded.

I am really at loss of words.

I have already started writing the next part. It should be up by this weekend. 😳

Thank you so much!!

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Mohini

@mohini4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Anisha_91
OMG Mohini!!! What and AWESOME OS!! The concept is very different totally loved it. The Prelude gosh I have no words for it *speechless* And Mohini how, how can you leave it like that eagerly waiting to read more. I totally loved it and awww they are so attached to each other its super cute. Gosh I loved how u used those songs it almost made me cry. Loved it and continue soon. Thanks for the PM sweetie 🤗

Aww thanks Anisha! That's really sweet! 😳

I have started writing the next part dear! Will be up shortly!

Glad you liked the prelude! I wasn't sure! 😕

Thanks soo much for your beautiful comments dear! 🤗

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Mohini

@mohini4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: tina_1234
waitin for next

Coming up darling ! 😳 It will be up by the weekend I promise! Sorry it's hard for me to write during work week! Thanks for your patience!

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Mohini

@mohini4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Wafa_94
Simply loved it. An interesting and unique concept. Can't wait to read the next part. 👏 And thanks so much for the last PM.🤗

awww thanks so much for your lovely comments dear! 😳