MG FF: For the Love of a Child (ch. 29 on p. 136)

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#601

Loved the update :

Riya and Thomas were so cute and lovely ...I specially loved Thomas' gallantry😃

Sameera was nosy and unwanted

Geet and Maan were so comfortable and romantic...loved their interaction and the soft admission !

Continue soon !😃

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meenu

@-Nia04-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#602

i love thomas for not leavin rhea!!
sam definitely needs a slap!!

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#603

my apologies for the late reply but caught up with some busy work.. 😕

anyways coming to the update it was PURRFECTO! i loved every bit of it and i am loving the pace of the story... riya is a sweetheart n thomas just cracks me up with his chivalry... he actually reminds me of Don Quixote 😉😆... and the chocolate wedding cake reminded me of this funny incident that happened few weeks ago...

this little girl i know came around the room announcing it was her mother's birthday and would like to invite every single person to the birthday party. out of curiosity i asked what cake she would buy and she promptly replied chocolate! i knew it was the child's favorite but tried to pull her leg and tell her it was her mother's birthday and that she should but what her mother likes and insisted she ask her fav flavor. the girl insisted it was choco but i made her go and ask the flavor and heard her mother say vanilla yet the little one reported choco to me 😆

ugh the nosy sameera... why do i feel she would be listening to maaneet convo and blackmail them that they arent married and maan should take her back 😡... the last line made me reel forward in time (pl excuse my mediocre thought process) n think about future proceedings in the story n the particular line "i promise to never leave you" triggered a line from maan in the future after getting back from sameera (dont ask for the details of the plot in why maan went for sameera for i am very sure its very cheesy n bad 😆 ) saying, "did u really think i would accept a woman who mercilessly stabbed my back in the name of love? tum mujhe itne hi samjh payi geet?"

PS: lol me n my melodramatic thinking!! excuse me please 😳

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seshatree

@seshatree

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#604

simply superb...loved Riya & Thomas...

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mchopra

@mchopra

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#605

Tht was lovely..i just hope the kids are ok..

and tht promise..hope that means something..

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hopehot

@hopehot

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#606

i m a very impatient thing 😆😳

Edited by hopehot - 13 years ago

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kooliio

@kooliio

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#607

Amazing update!

I love this Thomas dude 😆

"Are you cold, my queen?" so sweet!

Aww and then he gave riya his jacket...!

Their Popsicle talks were also very cute lolz

And then him not leaving riya alone...love him more!

So the parents knew about Thomas having a crush on riya lol

Haha sameera getting confused over "finances" was funny

"Business partners" seriously maan? 😆

"You never 'let her go,' Geet. You *gave* her to me. Her father. And only for a little while. You are with her now. . . ." Aww Loved it!

Glad maan and geet are supporting each other!

Hope they will find the kids soon...!

And hope nothing will happen to them!
Cant wait for the next update!
Please continue sooon!

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#608

Kumari 🤗 .....awesome update...poor Riya out in the jungle...Thomas is so cute...that Samira is so irritating 😡.. ...loved the Maaneet scene 😍...thank u for the PM...plz continue...sorry for the short comment...crazy busy with work and family 😕...love u...TC 😊

Edited by PerfectYaRav - 13 years ago