MG FF: For the Love of a Child (ch. 29 on p. 136)

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Lonely.Cat

@Raina123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#581

aww poor riya stick in the wood all alone ..i just hope they find her in time

todays update had such a cute ,sweet,adorable ending

i can really see maan and geets relationship progressing now

cant wait till the next update

like always... u rock!!!!

raina

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@-memorable-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#582

first thing first i can never get tired of saying

i love Thomas ❤️

hope kids will be rescued soon & sameera wouldn't catch the reality of mann-geet's relationship

cont soon with next part

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#583

good one dear...but i felt it short. Maybe, i just wanted to read more...it was so engrossing

you may find it kiddish but my daughter's name is Rhia...pronounced as riya...and i could just feel Maaneet's pain...

i so hope kids come back in next update

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#584

I AM IN LOVE WITH THOMAS

WHAT A PERFECT HUSBAND HE WILL MAKE

HE IS SO CARING NOW, HE IS WILLING TO BEAR THE COLD, THE DARK AND HUNGER FOR HIS FUTURE WIFE

THAT SAMEERA, SHE IS JUST OUT TO CREATE TROUBLE

HOPE SHE DOESNT COME TO KNOW THAT THEY AREN'T MARRIED

THIS SHOULD BRING MAANEET CLOSER

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SiniHanda

@SiniHanda

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Posted: 13 years ago

#585

Okay, I need to stop this. I read your update a 5th time. Jeez! I just so love that Maaneet interaction! Gurti better be back onscreen before I revisit your FF a 100 times!

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#586

Wow,this update was my xmas gift,that much i loved it!!thank you!
Ok..the scene with the kids was so innocent and pure as snow!thomas is my favorite,his talk was as sweet as chocolate cake: "my queen","i am your future husband and i have to take care of you",i was totaly melting when he gave her his jacket then he himself was cold 😆 Must say riya's brilliant plan did the trick and brought maneet more close!! I loved it when maan said "our child" !!The scene with worrying parents could easily picture it,you were amazing describing it!!Hope the kids are found asap,ur realistic writting got me worried for the angels...so again a wonderful job coz u got me feel the scene! 👏 Last part was heart touching,so special,loved it,his last line-was cherry on top!! Thank u for this fabulous part!! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!

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Kshitija

@krndr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#587

Superb update
I hope both the kids remain safe in the woods
Wow Maan nicely twisted the word 'Finances' and fooled Sameera
The last part was so emotional
Ria has indeed been successful in getting them close
But I hope Maan finds both the kids and return safely
Continue soon

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#588

awww... soo cute update...
thomas n riya r soo cute...
loved their convo...
nothing should happen to kids...
continue soon...
thanks 4 the pm...

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Bahaar

@Morning Star

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Posted: 13 years ago

#589

awww Thomas is such an adorable FINANCE . He did not only offer her help but his jacket and then look at the level of his maturity that he rejected her for the first time and that too for protecting her. Such should be kids raised. innocent yet very mature, careless yet very responsible. I salute u and am sure u r or would be an amazing mother. continue soon