FFonMaaneetPride&PrejudiceThrd 2 (Note pg 125) - Page 31

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear..
maan's restlessness was superbly described...

geet ki shaadi!!!! hey tho unexpected tha..
waiting for their new beginning dear..
thank u

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Posted: 13 years ago
so fast forward situations but awsome as always.😊...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update...

Loved the turn up of events

Can't wait for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ana awesome update yaar...
thank god woh log tym par aaye...
wat will b her decission????luvd meera vicky aniie nd pari dey r so supportive...
poor geet feeling sad 4 her...plzz cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update ana di
awesome
i just loved it
finally maan was successful in stopping the marriage
um sure geet will agree to go with maan
and then a new beginning as per ur precap
lovely update
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Superb awesome update I hope k geet maan k favour me hi decision le .plz update soon me waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it.so maan can to the rescue.
i think geet will leave with him n 'll start a new life.
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Posted: 13 years ago


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PART XX

Maan: Geet chalo and puts his one hand forward''..

Geet was about to leave at that moment

Anand: Geet if you leave this house at this moment then tumhara aur humara rishta khatam''' You will no longer be daughter of this family''.. For us you will be dead'''


Geet was shocked to hear those words'''..

Sakshi and Ranjana: Yeh aap log kya keh rahe ho''..

Madan: We are telling the right thing''' Yes if she leaves this house'' she will no longer be us''..

Anand: Geet you have to decide now''..

Geet: I am your daughter''. Aap log mujhe aise admi se shaddi karne ko keh rahe ho jisne pata nahi kitne logo ko barbad kiya hoga''..

Madan: We are not ready to believe'''.

Geet: Papaji'''.. Chachu you also don't believe what they are saying (pointing fingers at Maan)

Anand: No why should we believe them we don't know them'.

Geet: You don't even know Vikram'' I will never marry him'..

Papaji: Then you can leave this house'''. Aaj se tumhara aur humara rishta khatam'..

Geet couldn't take it any more she sits on her knees and cries at no end'..

Anand and Madan both warns Sakshi and Ranjana not to go besides Geet'''..

Vikram (self talk): I wont leave her so early''.. I will get her back'.. How could she do this to me'''

Pari and Meera goes near Geet and make her get up''

Meera: Geet chalo yaha se''

Pari: Ha Geet come''..

Geet gets up and looks at her family but they turn their faces''..

Geet goes away from that house''..

Maan, Vicky, Meera, Geet and Pari come out'''

Maan is continuously looking at Geet as he is feeling bad for her''

Pari and Meera try to console Geet ''.. But the tears just don't stop flowing from her eyes''

Pari: Geet tum mere ghar chalo''

Geet: Nahi Pari''.. Anyways you are going to London so what will I''

Pari doesn't allow her to complete the sentence and says: Geet I am canceling that trip'''.

Geet: No how can you do that'' That was your dream project''..

Pari: Geet for me nothing is important then you''

Geet: Pari for my sake you wont cancel your trip''..

Pari: Geet but''..

Geet: Pari I will stay at the place where we used to stay in our college days'''

Pari: That is not a place that is khandar''..

Maan who was listening to all this finally spoke

Maan: Geet will stay with us''.

Everyone was shock to hear this'..

Geet: How can stay with ''' I mean

Maan: Why what is the problem in staying with us'..

Vicky: Geet, Bro is right''..

Geet: No No I cant do that''..

Maan: I cant leave you''.. like this''

Geet was shocked to hear this sentence''

Geet: But Sir''

Vicky, Pari and Meera had a small smile on their face''..

Vicky (very slowly tells to Pari and Meera): Lagta hai Bro to gaye'..

Pari: Geet ab waha jane mai kya problem hai'''mere ghar mai mai nahi hu isliye tu nahi ja sakhti but Maan ke ghar kya problem hai'..

Geet: But how can I go''. I can't just stay at all of yours place'' It is not a question of day or two'..

Maan: Geet no more questions, no more arguments'' You are coming with us that's my final decision.

Geet: Sir but'''

Maan: Geettt'''. Chalo ab gadi mai baito'''

Vicky: Bro aap Geet ko leke jaiye mai aur Meera Pari ko ghar chod ke ate hai'''.

Maan: Ok''.

Maan and Geet go in one car''..

On the other side Vicky, Meera and Pari goes in one car'.

IN CAR

Meera: Vicky tell me''. You did it purposely right''..

Vicky: what????


Meera: tumne jan bujkar Bro aur Geet ko sath mai bheja right''..

Vicky: Ha actually mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki Bro Geet ko pasand karne lage hai

Meera: Ya even I think the same''..

Pari: Ya mujhe bhi aisa laga''..

Vicky: Acha hai''. hum jo soch rahe hai who sach ho''

IN MAAN's CAR

There was a pin drop silence in the car''..

Geet was continuously crying'..

Maan: Geet don't cry''.. mujhe manana to nahi ata but tum unke liye roh rahi ho jinhone tumhe chod diya''

Geet: Nahi Sir'' am not crying''

Maan: Listen Geet this tears are not meant for them who are not worth for it''

Geet: Thank you sir''

Maan: For what???

Geet: aaj aapne mere liye jo bhi kuch kiya uske liye'''

Maan: Geet how can I see your life been spoiled'''

Geet: But sir how did you came to know about all this'''

Maan tells everything to Geet'''

Geet: Thank y'''...

Maan doesn't allow her to speak further and keeps his hand on her mouth'''

Maan: Chup bilkul chup''.

They both stare at each other'''

Precap: Geet crying on Maan's shoulder



I hope you all will like this part... Please press like do comment... Waiting for your response...


Edited by ana1411 - 13 years ago

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