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Posted: 13 years ago


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Part XIX

Maan was still thinking about Geet'''. Hearing about the engagement 100 questions runs into his head'''

MAAN'S HOME

Maan did not talk to anyone and went on do his exercise''.. Something was disturbing him''.. Maan( self talk) Why am I feeling so much for her'.. Mujhe itni takleef kyu ho rahi hai''' Why Why ?????? and he hits the punching bag with great force'''

Savitri sees this and comes to Maan

Savitri: Maan kya baat hai'' Why are you so tensed'''.

Maan: Nothing Mom''

And without saying anything Maan leaves'''

All were having dinner'''

Maan's mind was somewhere else'''' He was not at all interested in having dinner'''

Vicky: Bro everything is your favourite on dinning table and still you are not having your food'''.

Maan: ????? (No answer)

Anvesha: Vicky Bhai I have never seen Maan Bhai like this'''. What happen to him'''..

Vicky: Bro Bro'''

Maan: Ha Vicky'''

Vicky: Are you all right''..

Maan: Ya I am fine'''.

Savitri: Maan mai aapko kab se dekh rahi hu''. Aap kuch pareshan hai''. Baat kya hai beta'''

Maan: Nothing Mom

Maan (self thought): Why am I feeling like this'''.

Meera enters the house'''.: Hello everyone'''.

Vicky: Hi Darling''. What are you doing at this time''

Meera: Why I cant come at this time''.

Vicky: No No I was just kidding''

Savitri: Maine bulaya hai Meera ko

Vicky: But why????

Savitri: Why should I tell you????

Adi and Pinky enters with a file and were talking among themselves''

Adi, Pinky: Good evening sir''..

Maan: Adi have you bought the file

Adi: Yes sir''.

Pinky had an invitation card in her hand''..

Anvesha: Pinky''.

Pinky: Ya Ani''.

Anvesha: Yeh kiska invitation card leke ghum rahi ho''.. kahi tum shaddi to nahi kar rahi'''..

Pinky (looking at the invitation card): Yeh lo bhul hi gayi''. And gives the card in the hand of Savitri. Nahi nahi mera nahi''' yeh to Geet ka invitation card hai''. Uski shaddi hai'''

Everyone shocked'''.

Vicky: But I thought it was her engagement'''.

Pinky: Yes sir but the boy's side wanted that the wedding should happen''

Savitri: But why???? And her parents agreed also'''.

Adi: Aunty in detail we don't know''.. we only came to know from her friend Pari that now instead of engagement direct wedding will take place''..

Maan was shocked to hear this''.. He didn't know what to say''.

Savitri reads the card and gives it in the hands of Maan and says: Maan kal hi shaddi hai'''

Maan: aap log jaye'' mujhe kaam hai'''

Vicky and Meera sees the card''.

After seeing the card Meera's expression changes''' Vicky and Anvesha notices that'''..

Anvesha: Meera Bhabhi aapka ko kya hua suddenly'''

Vicky: What happened to you????

Meera: Vicky Vicky'''

Vicky: Ya Meera''

Maan: Kya Baat hai Meera''

Meera: We should stop this wedding'''.

Everyone looks at each other in a shock''''..

Vicky: What are you saying????

Meera: Ya we should stop this'''.. The guy with whom Geet's wedding is fix is totally a gunda''' He gets married only for the sake of money and then he dumps the girl'''.

Maan : Yeh kya keh rahi ho tum Meera''.

Meera: Mai sach keh rahi hu Maan Bhai'''

Savitri: But how can you be so sure that this guy is the same one''..

Meera: Aunty the guys name is Vikram and in the card also is the same name along with his family''. I can be sure because same thing has happen with one of my friend where it was only her engagement but then it was converted into a wedding''' We need to save Geet from him'.. I have already lost my friend but now we cannot let it happen with Geet''..

Vicky: Bro we have to stop this at any cost'''

On the other side Geet Home

Geet was in a utter shock to hear that instead of engagement it's her wedding''.. She was not ready for it''.. Pari was always with her''. But in front of Geet's papaji she was also helpless''.

Geet was continuously crying but no one was there to help her'' Not even her Chachu and Chachi because of her Papaji''..

Geet mind was continuously thinking that what big mistake I have done that I have been punished like this''

Geet: Pari I don't want to get marry'''

Pari: I can understand Geet'''.

Geet: Maine asi bhi kya galti kar di hai jo mere sath''. (and she starts crying)

Pari was trying her best to console her because nothing was in her hand'..

Maan was continuously trying to call Pari and Geet'' But was in vein as the both the phones were switch off''' Because of this Maan was getting furious'''

Next day - The Wedding day

Ranjana: Geet get ready fast'''.

Geet: Mom why this is happening all of the sudden'''

Ranjana: We don't have to answer you anything''.. Pari make Geet ready fast''' ladke wale ate hi honge''..

Pari: Ji

Ranjana leaves and Geet hugs Pari and cries'''..

Vikram and his family comes''' and at the same time Maan, Vicky, Meera also enters''.

Vikram is shocked to see Meera as he knows her'''.

Maan: Yeh shaddi nahi ho sakhti''..

Anand: Kaun ho tum aur tumari himmat kiase hui yeh kehne ki''..

Maan: Uncle Vikram is not a nice guy''.. He only wants your property''.

Anand: Shut up''.. and get loss'..

Vicky: Uncle bro is right''.. Meera also support's him

Listening to so much of awaz Pari and Geet also comes down''.

Meera tells everything about Vikram to Geet and her family'''..

Anand: Chup raho tum samji''' I don't believe you''.. Vikram jaisa ladka koi nahi ho sakhta''..

Maan: Ha aapne sach kaha uske jiasa ladka nahi ho sakhta jisko shirf paise chaiye''''.

Anand: Enough now I don't believe all this''''. You were right Vikram that some one will definitely come and tell me all this stories'''

Maan and everyone were shocked''' But Geet knew that Maan will never lie'''.

Geet: Papaji, Maan sir can never lie''''

Anand: Ohhh so you know him'''.

Geet: Yes Papaji'''. I was working in his company''..

Anand: Then I am dam sure that you also must be involved in this''' any ways you never wanted to get marry'''.

Geet: No papaji''' I was not aware'''.

Anand: Enough now'''.. Points out finger at Maan and says: Please leave''..

Vikram had that smile on his face (thinking): Mera jadoo ispe chal gaya''.

Maan: I wont allow this to happen'''

Anand: Geet will get marry to Vikram only'''..

Geet: No papaji I will never get marry to such a guy''.

Ranjana: Geet'''.. You are going against your papaji''..

Geet: No Mom''.. But I wont get marry to this guy'''

Maan: Geet chalo yaha se'''.

Geet was shocked to here''.

Vicky and Meera also support Maan and says to come with them'.

Geet looks at Pari and Pari supports Geet''.

Maan: Geet chalo and puts his one hand forward''..

Geet was about to leave at that moment

Anand: Geet if you leave this house at this moment then tumhara aur humara rishta khatam''' You will no longer be daughter of this family''.. For us you will be dead'''

Geet was shocked to hear those words'''..

Precap ' Geet decision'''. New Beginning



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Edited by ana1411 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
di how come we not loving ur ff. it was really great di, thanks a lot for wesome part
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely one...
i will b happy if geet take d right decesion...

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice geet will go with maan yippeee
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update dear...
Ana continue fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
if geet's family doesnt believe anymore den wat s the point of staying dere..?she shud go with maan..
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Posted: 13 years ago


thank God...Maan and all friends get to know about Vikram's truth on time so that they have come to save Geet from him...

but how can a parents be so blind and cruel towards their own child...disgusting...

what will be Geet's decision...she should leave this type of family...what is the benefit of a family like this...enemies are better than them...

interesting update...thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
i just read this ff
all parts are just amazing
i just want to more and more update of this ff
plzzz update the next part asap
plzzz add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates loved the part where maan says to geet chalo yaha sey continue soon dear thanks for the pm thanks for the updates

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