MAANEET SS;Destiny or Faith..Thrd 2..upd Pt25 Pg71 - Page 41

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry friends well i could not comments and say thanks to ur replies on my SS...m really sorry but believe me m very busy these days...i have my sisters wedding coming up very soon and its very difficult for me to be online now...

please bear wid me...M so sorry...Well just wanted to say thanks to one and all who read my SS and encourage me so much...😃


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PART-25

Last Part


Adi comes and informs maan that geet has sent her resignation letter'..

Maan is shocked hearing this'.

Maan: thik hai adi tum jao hum baad mein baat karte hai

Adi: ji sir

Maan (self thought) kuch na kuch baat to zarur hai,,pehle geet ka vo msg karna'uske baad phone band karna'..subah office na aana or ab resignation letter''muje khud hi pata karna hoga ki aakhir baat kya hai

Maan calls up at geet residence and fortunately meera picks up the call''..

Meera: hello

Maan: hello meera main maan bol raha hu'.please meri abhi ke abhi geet se baat karwao

Meera: maan bhaiya baat kya hai??

Maan: meera main tumhe baad main bataunga pehle meri geet se baat karwao meri'..mera use baat karna kafi zaruri hai

Meera: maan bhaiya main apki baat kaise karwayu geet to subah se apna room lock karke baithi hui hai'..na khana kha rahi hai na hi kisi se baat kar rahi hai

Maan(ST): aisa bhi kya hua hoga

Maan: thik hai main abhi ke abhi ghar aata hu

Meera: nahin maan bhaiya aap abhi mat aiyega'.main geet se bolti hu ki aapka call aya hai vo apse baat karein abhi

Maan: thik hai meera main wait karta hu

Both of them ends the call.

Meera: shukar hai babaji ka ki beeji ghar par nahin hai nahin to pata nahin kya ho jata''geet ko bolti hu ki maan bhaiya se baat kar le

She knocks geet's door''geet is crying in her room and does not want to listen to anyone''meera tries everything but she doesnot listens'

Meera: thik hai geet teri jo mann main aye tu vo kar'.par tere aise behave karne se problem solve nahin ho jaegi'..agar meri baat mane to tu ek baar maan bhaiya se baat kar le'.vo kafi pareshan lag rahe the'..

Meera: tu sun rahi hai na geet

Geet hearing maan's name gets up'..she did not reply to meera but she comes back to her senses.

Geet(self thought): geet tu ye kya kar rahi hai'.inn sab mein bechare maan ka kya kasoor hai'..vo kab se pareshan ho rahe honge''tune unse kya waada kia tha na ki har pal unke saath rahegi'phir aisi bhool kaise kar sakti ho'.

Geet picks up her mobile and calls maan'..maan is finally relieved to get geet's call''adi comes in maan's cabin to discuss something important but he tells him to go out as he is busy..maan picks up tha call

Maan: hello geet

Geet: hello maan in a low voice

Maan: geet ye kya paagalpan hai main kal raat se dekh raha hu'pehle vo msg'..phir tum office nai aayi or ab ye resignation letter'..or use bhi badi baat tumhara mujse baat na karna'.baat kya hai geet??

Geet is quiet and doesn't say anything

Maan: geet kuch to bolo'mujse ab or sehen nahin ho raha or agar tumne abhi ke abhi muje nai bataya to main tumhare ghar aa raha hu

Geet: nahin maan aap please aise mat ki jiye ga

Maan: to batao geet baat kya hai'.please

Geet: maan muje lagta hai beeji kabhi bhi hamare rishte ke liye tyar nahin hongi'.

Maan: geet tum aise kyu bol rahi ho'tumhari koi baat hui hai kya beeji se??

Geet starts crying'.

Maan: geet please rona band karo or muje baton ki baat kya hui hai'.?

Geet: vo maan kal jab main ghar wapis pahunchi to beeji ne muje office se resign karne ko keh dia

Maan: par kyu??

Geet: maan kyuki beeji nahin chahti ki jis ghar mein unki ek beti ki shaadi ho rahi ho ussi company mein unki dusri beti kaam karein

Maan: tum tension mat lo geet main kuch karta hu bas tum apna khayal rakho or please rona band karo

Geet: par maan hum ab kya karenge'.maine to socha tha ki aap or main milkar beeji se baat karenge par yaha par to koi or baat hi ho gayi'..

Maan: geet sach batau to abhi muje bhi kuch samaj nai aa raha hai'par haan main tumse waada karta hu ki main iss baat ka jaldi hi koi solution dhoond lunga

Maan: tumhe apne maan par bharosa hai na geet

Geet: khud se zyada

Maan: to bas aaj tumhe uss bharose ki kasam tum ab bilkul bhi pareshan nahi hogi'.

Geet: thik hai maan

Maan: chalo geet main tumse sham ko baat karunga'..

Geet: bye maan

Maan(self-thought) ab lagta hai muje hi kuch karna hoga'..par main karu to kya?????

In the meantime meera calls up dev and tells him everything what all happened that night

Meera: dev mujse geet ki aisi haalat dekhi nahi jaati'or beeji se baat kaise karu ye muje samaj nahi aa raha hai

Dev: meera hume kuch na kuch karke bro or geet ki madad karni chahiye hai'.un dono ne hamare liye bahut kuch kiya hai'ab hamari baari hai ki hum un dono ki zindagi khushiyon se bhar de

Meera: par hum karein to kya karein dev

Dev: meera kyu na hum kuch aisa karein ki beeji ko yeh bhi na pata chale ki bro or geet ek dusre se pyar karte hai or unka rishta bhi ho jayee

Meera: main kuch samjhi nahi dev

Dev: par main sab samjh gaya kya karna hai'acha tum ye batao ki bro ye sab jaante hai I mean geet ne unhe bataya kuch

Meera: muje pakka to nahin pata par haan maine geet ko maan bhaiya se baat karne ko kaha tha to shayad usne bata diya ho

Dev: chalo thik hai to aaj hum bro or geet ko surprise denge sham ko

Meera: par dev batao to tum karne kya wale ho

Dev: meera hum sham ko tumhare ghar aa rahe hai main abhi mom se kehkar beeji ko phone karwata hu

Meera: dev muje kuch samaj nai aa raha tum karne kya wale ho'chalo jo bhi ho bas sab acha hona chahiye

Dev: aisa hi hoga meera dekh lena

Dev goes and tells everything to savitri devi'.they plan something'''savitri devi calls up at geet's place and tells that they are coming to their place to fix future ceremonies.

In the evening maan comes back from office'..he is really depressed with what all was happening

Savitri: maan bte aap tyar ho jaiye hume kahin jaana hai

Maan: maa please aap or dev chale jaiye mera kahin jaane ka mann nahin hai

Savitri: maan bte baat kya hai aap thik to hai na

Maan decides not to tell anything to dev and his mom as they wud get tensed'..

Maan: bas mom thoda sir mein dard hai

Savitri: beta sir ka dard to abhi bhaag jaega jab hum apko batenge ki hum kaha ja rahe hai

Maan: mom please saaf saaf bataiye

Savitri: bte hum geet ke ghar ja rahe hai

Maan: please mom aap waha mat jaiye abhi'..waise hi vo bechari kafi pareshan hai

Savitri: bte kya hua geet ko or waise bhi hum dev or meera ki engagement ki baat karne ja rahe hai

Maan: oh! Acha'.maine socha

Savitri: maan aap bhi na waise apne bataya nahi geet kyu pareshan hai

Maan: vo kuch nai mom bas

He is about to say something as dev interrupts

Dev: mom, bro aap yahi khade hai vo log hamare wait kar rahe honge'..aaj waise bhi mere liye double khushi ka din hai

Dev and savitri share a smile

Maan: double khushi matlab???

Dev: bro aap chaliye jaldi tyar hoke aiye na'..aapko jaldi hi sab pata chal jaega

Maan leaves to get ready. Dev goes and hugs her mom

Savitri: maan ke chehre par pareshni saf dekhayi de rahi hai par aaj unki saari pareshaniyan hum khatam karke rahenge'..badi mushkil se to hamare bte ne jeena sikha hai or aaj hum unhe unki jeene ki wajah dilwa kar hi rahenge

Dev: right mom

Meanwhile Maan is changing in his room but is still very disturbed.

Maan(self thought) waise ye acha mauka hai geet se baat bhi kar lunga''pata nahin kitni pareshan hogi vo

All of them proceed to geet's place. On the other hand all of them were waiting desperately for their arrival.

Beeji: bas sab baat ache se ho jaye''bas rab karein jis tarah se meera ko itni acha rishta mila geet ko bhi waise hi rishta mil jaye

Geet was really getting upset by beeji's words now'..but she controlled herself'the bell rang and geet opened the door. She took blessings from savitri devi'..

Savitri: geet bte badi murjhai si lag rahi hai sab thik to hai na

Geet: ji aunty sab thik hai

She looks towards maan who could easily feel her pain'..they had an eye to eye talk which made her feel bit better'..

Well all sat in the drawing room. Geet had a fake smile on her face''maan was constantly noticing her'..but they were not getting any time to speak to each other. On the same time Beeji asks savitri devi about what do they want next to be done

Savitri: muje lagta hai ki hume meera or dev ki sagai ab kar deni chahiye

Beeji: ji jaisa aap thik samjhe

Savitri: waise mere maan mein ek baat or bhi hai'..

Beeji: ji kahiye na

Savitri: hum chahte hai ki dev ki shaadi se pehle hum maan ki shaadi karein

Beeji: ji ye baat to aapne bilkul thik kahin hai'.maan puttar bhi bade hi honhar hai''to aapne koi ladki dekh li hai kya??

Savitri: ji ek ladki to hai hamare mann mein'.badi hi susheel hai'

Beeji: acha g ye to badi change gal hai

Maan and geet are very confused on all this''.

Beeji: to apne bataya nahin ki maan puttar ke liye jo ladki aapne pasand ki hai use hame bhi to mil wayiye na

Savitri: haan haan kyu nahin''lo abhi mila dete hai

Beeji: ji main kuch samjhi nahin

Savitri: aaj hum aapse maan ke liye geet ka haath maangne aaye hai'..hum chahte hai ki geet maan ki dulhan banker hamare ghar aaye'.

Maan and geet are shocked with this'''''they both were just speechless

Beeji: ji ye kaise ho sakta hai'..geet or meera ek ghar mein''

Savitri: to isme aitraaz hi kya hai''muje to apki geet pehle hi nazar mein bha gayi thi'..kitni pyari bachhi hai'.maan or geet to waise bhi ek saath kaam karte hi hai'dono ki apas mein achi understanding bhi hai'..agar geet maan ki dulhaan banke ayegi to isse badhkar khushi ki baat mere liye or ki nahin hogi

Beeji: ji baat to aapki thik hai par aise kaise hoga meera choti bahu or geet badi bahu'.

Savitri: ji aap iski bilkul chinta mat kijiye geet or meera hamare ghar bahu nahin betiyan banker jaengi'..unka rishta ekdum waise hi hoga jaise shaadi se pehle'hamara yakeen maniye

Beeji: savitri ji aapne ye baat kehkar mera kitna bada bojh halka kar dia

Dev and meera are excited as their plan was successful''.

Savitri: waise humne khud se to sab the kar lia in bachcho se to pucha hi nahin'kyu maan geet tumhari kya rai hai iss baat mein

Savitri: agar aap chahae to do minute jake bahar baat bhi kar sakte hai'.hume koi aitraaz nahin hai

Beeji: haan bacho jao baat kar lo

Maan and geet went out''

Maan: geet tumhare to chehre ki saari pareshani bilkul hi khatam ho gayi hai

Geet: thanku maan ye sab apne kia na'bilkul bhi beeji ko kuch pata nahin lagne dia

Maan: nahin geet ye to mere liye bhi surprise tha'muje lagta hai ye sab mom or dev ne kia hai'..

Meanwhile savitri devi comes and sees both maan and geet happy

Savitri: to hamare dono bache khush hai na

Maan: mom ye sab aapne kia na'.thanku so much

Savitri: na bte humne kuch bhi nai kia ye plan to actually dev or meera ka tha''.aski thanks ke haqdaar vo hai

Savitri: to chale geet waise tumhara chehra saaf bata raha hai ki tumhari taraf se haan hai'haina geet???

Geet is embarrassed and hugs savitri devi

Savitri: khush rahiye beta''aaj hamari saari parshaniyan khatam ho gayi'waise geet aapka or maan ka milna taqdeer ka khel tha'.dekhiye bhagwaan bhi nahi chahta ki aap dono kabhi juda ho'..bhagwan aap dono ki jodi sada salamat rakhe''

Finally everything was sort out''geet and maan's engagement date was fixed''so was dev and meera

After three months''

It was marriage for the two couples'..dev and meera were married first and then was maan and geet's marriage''!! But all happened the same day''...😉😉

"Destiny or faith-" well the title itself justified the entire journey for maan and geet'.not for this pair the destiny played a part in dev and meera's life too'.but it was their love and faith which overcome all the hurdle and they were together' a small journey of maan and geet from my side''

Hope u all enjoyed the journey..😛😛

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Authors' note


Well m not the best of writers but I tried hard to write the best I can''..My real motivator was my best friend Sai who really encouraged me to start with this SS and then the constant motivation and encouragement was from my dear friend Piya'Thanku so much guys'..!! its because of you guys I completed 25 parts of my SS

The next thanks to all my readers who beared with me and read my ss'..i know I at times bored u wid my update but now ill put a full stop to my writing.

Well I am not very good at explaining things,,,,,if I had ever committed any mistake or disappointed u'.please forgive me for that

Now lot of my chitter pitter'.

Bye for now'..

Will miss my SS and all ur comments

Take care

God bless u all!!!


Wishing u all a very Happy Diwali and a Prosperous New Year

Have a safe Diwali

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Wow Silky kya baat hai really a wonderful begining of a beautiful story well i m not going to tell that it was an end no...it is a begining for me
beautifully written just left me speechless
the way Meera and Dev along with Savitriji helped Maaneet was portrayed beautifully
the best part of ur ss was the simplicity with which u showed the entire divine journey of Maaneet
without any problem or misunderstandings maaneet's relationship grew stronger with each passing moment...
Finally I loved your justification of the title it was perfect...
somethings are destined and these things always turns out to b good
thank you for giving us such a beautiful ss and thanks for mentioning my name i m really touched
love u my angel
urs- Shona (Piya)
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it was a lovely ss and a wonderful last part 😊
thank you for such beautiful ss😊
hope we will get an epilogue
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was lovely ending and beautiful too . will be waiting for next venture on maaneet .
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful ending...
bt pls cum bak with another damaka..
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It was an amzing journey and I loved every bit of it.
I hope we get to see another FF or SS from you soon
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This was actually an awesome part...

All is well that ends well...


I just loved it...👏

Waiting for your new SS

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