MAANEET SS;Destiny or Faith..Thrd 2..upd Pt25 Pg71 - Page 37

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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update
love how maan confess ifront his mom
wonder how beeji react precap sounds scary
thnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update darling...dadi is so cool..she wanted maan to tell the truth hehe...loved it so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme update.precap was scary agar beeji ko geet maan ke office me kaam karna pasand nahi hai tho o shadi ke liye bhi nahi maanegi shayad.the sng seq selectn was gud.waitng 4 next update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n rocking update! Maanet happy n in luv! SD n Dev tease Maaneet n Maan tells him will marry only Geet! Everyone happy, well written, update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome updt

aww maan confessed infront of his mom lolzz

they were so embarrased

omg why beeji wud say no to maaneet mrg

cont soon

thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
now loved this update
now confession k baad everythng iz going okay
ab u gave Beeji's reaction suspense ..
will wait for next part eagerly ..
do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry friends well i could not comments and say thanks to ur replies on my SS...m really sorry but believe me m very busy these days...i have my sisters wedding coming up very soon and its very difficult for me to be online now...

please bear wid me...M so sorry...Well just wanted to say thanks to one and all who read my SS and encourage me so much...😃

Here is the next part...!!



PART-24


Maan: tumhe mujpe vishwas hai na??

Geet: khud se zyada

Maan: to bas thik hai kal hum milke beeji ko sab sach sach bata denge I promise

Geet: chaliye maan main ab chalti hu beeji mera wait kar rahi hongi

Maan: haan haan beeji wait kar rahi hogi iss baat ka to dhyan hai par jo main har waqt har pal tumhara wait karta rehta hu uska kya??

Geet: ye kya baat hui maan'

Maan: haan ab to muje yahi sunne ko milega na''

Geet: to baatiye maan aap kya chahte hai main kya karu???

Maan: nekki or puch puch geet'ye acha hai''..

Geet: vo dekhiye maan bahar kya chal raha hai??

Maan: main tumse kya baat kar raha hu or ye tum kya bole ja rahi ho geet

Geet: maan dekhiye to sahi

Maan: kaha geet muje to kuch bhi nahi dikh raha

Maan is searching here and there while in the meantime geet places a kiss on maan's cheek and leaves from the car'.geet comes out and waves her hand and enters her house

Maan: to ye acha tareeqa tha madam koi baat nahin aaj main issi se kaam chala lunga'.par muje ye tareeqa pasand aaya'.I love u geet'.

Geet's House:

Beeji: aaj badi der ho gayi puttar ghar aane mein

Geet: haan beeji vo aaj office mein kafi important kaam tha'..isliye hi'..

Beeji: puttar mere man mein ek baat kafi din se chal rahi thi..

Geet: kahiye na beeji

Meera comes out from her room'.meanwhile geet's cell beeps up''.she takes her cell out from her bag but meera interrupts

Meera: geet tera paas ye mobile kaha se aaya???

Geet is over cautious as what to say??? Beeji too is surprised to see a mobile phone

Geet: vo na kya hua'company ko kafi profit hua tha to maan sir ne pure staff mein mobile gift kie

Meera: arrey wah maan bhaiya ne mobiles gift kiye'.zaara dikha to

Meera takes the cell from her and notices that the screen is flashing maan's message'.she keeps shut and decides to talk about this later.

Beeji: puttar ye sab to thik hai par main nahin chahti ki tu ab uss company mein or kaam karein

Geet is shocked hearing this'..

Geet: par baat kya hui beeji main kuch samjhi nahin

Beeji: puttar tu to jaanti hai ki meera ki shaadi ussi ghar mein the hui hai or tu uss company mein kaam karegi to log sau baatein banaenge'..tu samaj rahi hai na main kya kehna chahti hu

Geet: par beeji muje waha kaam karne ki salary milti hai'.

Beeji: puttar muje jo sahi laga maine tuje keh dia aage teri marzi'.agar meri mane to tu kahi or naukri dhooond le...muje tera waha pe kaam karna pasand nahi

Geet: par beeji muje'.

Beeji leaves from there'..Geet is all shattered and is in tears'she does not know how to react to all this'

She leaves crying in to the room''meera notices that something is wrong for sure'''she decided to clear everything from geet

Meera enters her room but she was lyng on her bed and crying'.

Meera: geet tu apna cell bahar hi bhul aayi'.

Geet keeps quiet wipes her tears'..and sits besides meera.

Meera: geet koi baat hai kya??

Geet: di aap hi bataiye company mein kaam karne mein kya problem hai'..main to sirf apna kaam hi kar rabhi hu na'ab achanak se ye sab kya hua? Aap jaanti hai waha par sab mere kaam se kitne khush hai'..sabhi meri itni tarref kar te hai'sab mere itne ache dost ban gaye hai

Meera: bas yahi baat hai ya kuch or bhi???

Geet: di or kya baat hogi'..

Meera: ye maan bhaiya ka tere cell pe jo message aaya hai use to baat kuch or lagti hai muje???

Geet is shocked''.and is unable to speak now'..

Meera: sun zara message:

" geet muje tumhara tareeqa khoob pasand aaya'..mere pass shabd bhi nahi hai tumhe kuch kehne ke liye'.par haan ek baat hai ki main har pal tumhare aath hu'tumhe ghabrane ki zarurat nahin hai

Meera: geet sach sach bata baat kya hai''. kuch baat to zarur chupa rahi hai mujse''or agar tu kuch nai bategi to main hi khud pata karti hu

Geet hugs her and starts crying'''..

Meera: baat kya hai geet'.??? Tu ro kyu rahi hai??

Meera: muje jo lag raha hai kya vo baat sach to nahin hai????

Geet keeps quiet and just nods her head in approval''.

Meera: geet tu jaanti hai na beeji ko''vo iss baat ke liye kabhi tyar nahi hongi'..phir bhi'.

Geet: di sach main pata hi nahi laga ye sab kaise or kab hua''

Meera: or tune muje bhi kuch nahin bataya'..or ye soch beeji ko agar pata chala to vo kya kahengi???

Geet: maan kal aakar beeji se baat karne wale hai

Meera: geet maan bhaiya ko mana kar ki abhi von a hi aye baat karne'.main khud beeji se baat karne ki try karti hu

Geet again started crying''.. " di agar beeji tyar nahi hui to"

Meera: tu tension mat le geet'tune or maan bhaiya ne meri or dev ki kafi help ki hai,,,,main koi kami nahin chodungi tere liye'tu abhi maan bhaiya ko mana kar de or office bhi mat ja kuch din..'.main kuch na kuch socti hoon

Geet: thik hai di'.

Meera: chal tu ab aaram kar le'..

On the other hand maan is disturbed as geet had not replied to his message.

Maan(self-thought) geet ne ab tak reply nahin kia'sab thik to hoga na''

Maan(self-thought) kya pata beeji ke pass baithi ho to mauka nahin mila hoga reply karne ka'..chal thodi der or wait kar leta hoon

Its quite late at night now'maan was damn worried now'..

Maan(self thought) ab to raat ke 12 bajne ko aa gaye'.baat kya hui hogi'.abhi tak geet ka koi reply nahin aaya'.aisa karta hu use kal karke dekhta hoon

Maan is just about to call her as he receives a message''its geet flashing

Maan(self-thought) to meri geet ko akhir meri yaad aa hi gayi na

Message " sorry maan main apko reply nahin kar payi" bas muje yahi kehna tha ki kal aap ghar mat aiyega'.good night

Maan(self thought): kal aap mat aiyega'..ye kya message tha'abhi geet ko call karke puchta hoon

Maan tries her number but it was switched off''

Maan: ye ho kya raha hai'.geet ka number off'.sab thik to hoga na''.ab kaise pata karu'..upar se geet ne phone bhi off kia hai''.ab to subah ka wait karna hoga''

Both maan and geet could not sleep the whole night''.

Next morning at Khurana Tehnology:

Maan reaches the office and he was searching for geet''.

Maan: pinky geet ko kaho ki vo abhi mere cabin mein aye

Pinky: vo sir geet to abhi tak ayi nahin hai

Maan: ayi nahi abhi tak'..chalo jaise hi aaye use mere cabin mein bhejna

Pinky: yes sir.

Maan was getting more and more worried'.he tried calling her several times but cell was unavailable''.

Maan(ST) ye ho kya raha hai'.kuch samaj nahi aa raha'.geet aise kyu react kar rahi hai'..ab muje hi pata karna hoga

In the meanwhile adi comes in maan's cabin and informs that geet has sent her resignation letter''

Maan is shocked completely'''''''''..😭😭😭

Guys what u think will happen now'..?? well I wont be giving any precap''.. sorry for that

One thing more the next update will the last update of my ss'..!!!!!

Well do tell how did u find the update???

Do comment ill be waiting😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow first me 🥳
Awesome part
geet ko chahiye tha maan ko saab batade.
last update hoga yeh last part.
loved it

Edited by kahkashansakina - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hmm... the update was as usual superb
loved the way geet kissed Maan that was really very cute and innocent
Ye bheeji bhina ye kaha ka rule hai k agar ek beti ka rishta pakka ho gaya toh dusari beti uss office mein kaam nahi kar sakthi
Meera ko batakar geet ne achha kiya
Maan is shocked don't b shocked dear
ok ur question
I feel Geet ka resignation dekhkar maan waha baithnewala toh nahi hai he will rush to her house waaha pe koi drama chal raha hoga hmm... say beeji shayad ye keh de k geet ka rishta pakka ho gaya hai
maaneet r in a big dilemma kuch aur drama hoga aur phir jaisa savitrijine maan k muh se ugalwaya k he loves geet in a similar fashion bheeji will also force geet to openly accept her feelings
end mein ye sab savitri aur bheeji ka plan hoga
all is well maaneet ka rishta pakka ho jaayega
continue soon
love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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