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seems like there is some problem in page 33 so plz give the update in page 34
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Part: 49

Meera: What are you talking about Maan. I was just trying to make you realize that you still love her. She is alive Maan. I am sorry for playing this trick on you. But she is alive and in her room.
Meera takes him to Geet's room. He walks with her but was still too numb to react. When Meera reaches the room she gets a shock herself.
Meera screams to the nurses: WHERE IS GEET!
That was when one of the hospital security guards come yelling, "SHE ESCAPED!"

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She was throwing her clothes in the suitcase with tears running all over her face. She felt like she was running low on oxygen it was so much harder to breathe. His words were piercing through her heart again and again. She wouldn't stop whatever came to her hands she was throwing everywhere in frustration. She unknowingly picks up a picture frame to smash it against the wall when her eyes fall on his . . .picture. Instead of smashing it she freezes in place. All their moments from the night he pulled her out of the water and saved her playback in her head. . . torturing her already broken pieces of her heart even more.
"BREAK IT" a voice tells her from behind. A tear falls from her right eye then her left eye.
"I SAID BREAK IT" the voice from behinds yells out to her.
He comes and faces her takes her hand and puts it on his head "Tumhe meri qasam geet. . . BREAK IT"
She pulls her hand away and screams, "NAHIII KAR SAKTAAA"
She falls on her knees her tears running like a faucet from her eyes. She sobs out "MEIN NAHI KAR SAKTA ROMEO. . . NAHI KAR SACKTA!!!!!!!!"
Romeo bends down trying to comfort her, he never intended to hurt her, but he wanted to break through her and make her realize the truth.
"NO MATTER HOW MUCH I WANT TO HATE HIM I CAN'T. KYUN! KYUN MEIN ABHI BI USHE PYAAR KARTA HUIN? MERI JAWAB DOH ROMEO! MERI JAWAB DOH!!!" she weeping screams holding his collar.
Tears also started to well up in his eyes seeing his friend . . . his sister like this. He embraces her in a hug and tries to comfort her.
Geet hugs him back crying out still, " Please tell me. . .Why do I love the man who has hurt me so much. . . who never loved me? Why Romeo!!!!".
Romeo: Because somewhere inside you. . . deep deep inside your heart Geet you know he loves you too and your heart is still holding on to him.
Geet lets go of him not believing what she just heard.
Geet: You don't know anything Romeo. He doesn't love me.
Romeo wanted to retort back, but Geet stops him.
Geet: Please Romeo I don't want to talk about this right now. Please.
Romeo: If I knew you were planning to run away from everything I wouldn't of helped you escape.
Geet: What do you want me to do Romeo? What do you think is left in me to do?
Romeo: Fight for your love. I think there is a misunderstanding going on here. I think . . .
Geet: Bas Romeo! If you really care for me you will drop and end this topic right here and now. Please! Have mercy on my poor heart.
Romeo just couldn't see her ruining her life like this. Maybe she needed some time and space. After all she has gone through a lot Romeo thought to himself.
Romeo: Theek hai. But I am coming with you wherever you are going!
Geet: Nahi Romeo.
Romeo: Nahii? Tumhare matlab you don't want me to come with you?
Geet: Don't take this the wrong way Romeo. I just don't want you to suffer along with me. You just got transferred here and you are a CEO. I won't let you leave everything for me.
Romeo: But Geet. . .
Geet: Please Romeo I already have enough pain and if I let you suffer with me it will just increase it.
Romeo: But I just got you back Geet. It hasn't even been a full 24 hours yet and this time you are leaving me. We are like family how can I leave you like this Geet?
Geet: I am a big girl now Romeo. I am not the little spoiled "laddoo" you used to pamper and tease. Life has thrown a lot of thorns in my way and alone I will pass through them.
She goes and grabs his hand and puts it on her head, "Tumhe meri qasam Romeo. Please let me go".
Romeo quickly takes his hand away and winces in pain. What crossroad was life putting through him?
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Maan was at home. He was looking out the window. The security guard's words still ringing in his ears "His name was Romeo that is what I heard her say. She escaped with him".
Than her words rang in his ears, " Mujhse dhoor raho Maan. Nahi chahiye apki madad. Nahi chahiye apki jhooti sympathy. Mujhe nahi chahiye samjhe tum.
He lifts the taveez as it twists in the air. " Jaane dijye mujhe please. Tak gayi hoon mein Maan. Tak gayi hoon mein"!
It was a maze wherever he turned he couldn't get himself to forget her memories or her heart wrenching words. She was everywhere, all over his thoughts. She left with her Romeo, but had to leave her taveez behind to torment him even when she was not here. Little did she know that her memories were enough to even take his life. . . but God was too cruel to let that happen.
He closes his eyes. He felt like the inexorable pain was drowning him. He couldn't escape from it. Where to escape was the question?
Meera watched him from the corner, her heart sinking deeper looking at his condition. She decided to keep an eye of Maan as Vicky looked for Geet. Although Maan protested and yelled that nobody would look for her, she could die for all he cared; Vicky needed answers though from her before she left. Meera couldn't believe Geet would leave like this partially blaming herself for all that's happened. Only if she never allowed to leave her alone. . . .
Vicky slowly walked through the doors of the gloomy filled house. He walks over to Meera and from his look Meera could tell that he couldn't find her.
" I looked everywhere. Geet has left for good!" he says hugging Meera and fighting back a tear.
Maan tried not to listen but he heard and as he winces in pain a tear escapes from his eye. He crunches his fists in anger fresh new blood oozing out of his wounds.
"tink . . . tunk. . . .tink" A sharp sound pierced through the air as if a coin falling to the ground and then rolls and rolls until it finally stops against maan's foot.
Maan turns around and bends down picking the object up. When he brings it up to meet the level of his eyes shock coursed through him. It was a ring and in front of the doors stood his daadima whose face showed nothing but horror shock.
Vicky and Meera ran up to her, but she silenced them with her hand and tears threatening to spill out of her eyes. Maan just stood rooted at his Daadi silently approached him with eyes full of pain and questions. She raises her hand and slaps Maan right across his right cheek, the sound of the slap stabbing through everyone's hearts. Meera and Vicky both moved their faces away not being able to see what was taking place.
Maan silently took the slap and didn't say anything. In a way he took it as punishment for letting himself fall in love again.
Daadi: Two weeks I was gone! TWO WEEKS!
Aur pata hai kyun? Tumhara liye!Tumhara khushi ki liye. . . I went to a religious trip! And when I come back you have kicked Geet, the reason of your happiness out of your life!
Maan head snaps up hearing his Daadi say such things about him and Geet.
" You love her phirbi you have sent her away! Why are you doing this to yourself beta? Why don't you want to accept that you love her?" she says crying and shaking him.
She grabs the ring from his hand. "You see this ring I have been holding for 6 hours now not being able to wait for the second I see you to give to you and you put it on Geet's finger.
Maan: But Daadi. . .
" I don't want to hear a thing Maan" she stops him.
" Bahut hogaya! If the next time I see you and you have not brought my bahu, Geet, back with this ring on her finger than. . . than you can forget about me being your Daadi" she says before leaving.
She didn't want to do it this way, but she was tired of him pushing his happiness away from himself. Till when we he let himself suffer?
He looks at the ring and anger started to pulsate through his veins. He clutches on to the ring and encloses it with his hand and starts to walk out of the house. How the hell was he supposed to bring back the bahu of this house who has escaped with her Romeo. . . who never loved him, but someone else . . . who was never his, but someone else's. KAISA!!!!!!
He sits in the car and hits the accelerator, the car roaring into life. He was suffocating in there he had to get away from everything. He felt so helpless and weak. Where was he going he didn't even know? As he takes a turn at the end of the street he comes face to face with another car, and instantly he presses on the breaks. His body jolting forward and then back against the seat. Whoever the poor person was in the other car had to get ready for the wrath of Maan Singh Khurana, especially at this uncontrollable state.
He barges out of the car and so does the other guy. Once Maan's eyes meet with his Maan instantly freezes in place as shock courses through his body.
Maan: TUM???

Pre-cap:

Wind and leaves start to blow around him. The sun was setting, the sky a mix of all colors. He slowly starts to open the letter and read it.

COme on come on come on ...guess who Maan runs into???? i know u all know😆.

omg omg omg ahhh***me screaming**** it is getting close...the most awaited part...my body is already going through a rush just thinking about it. ( no it is not next update...it is most likely part 51)

Do u guys love me now. I updated so fast...😲 😆. see i told u seeing the like buttons and comments motivates me. I was so happy beyond words...236 likes guys 😳...i just couldn't believe it. and so i took shreya's aka mchopra suggestion ( p.s i fell for ur pouting face...i couldn't say no😳) and decided to give you guys a treat 😳. I have two big exams in two days..but i left it and wrote for you guys...i just couldn't stop myself. I love u guys too much😳

i promise to update my other two ff's by next weekend. so i hope u can bear with me becuz i seriously need to get to studying...i don't want to fail 😭. Lol so pray for me guys! please!


Don't forget to hit the like button ...i want to see if i will beat 236 likes..😃 ahhh i am so excited 😆
Edited by zeynab111 - 13 years ago
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
i think the person mift me geet's romeo
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg what u updated again
Thank god i logged in time
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And the updatee..
i cant believe you updated😲
I guess its all the LIKES kamal😆
jo bhi ho a
we dont have to wait long for the most awaited part😍
Anyways..awesome update as usual
love it..uff how can u write so well zee
i love how u described geet's emotions
Opss dadi is here..i like how she slapped maan he deserved it
poor geet
omg omg it looks like Maan has faced romeo

and now romeo will tell him the whole truth

i cant wait for next part
PLEASE 200 LIKE JALDI SE JO JAO

AND yippiee congo for the 50th part to be
me waiting eagerly for next part or next next part😆
and

dhunki


yours
chammak challo😆



Edited by maangeetcrazy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
THATS NIT FAIR
it started to get good and then it finished
Pweaseee update soon
Your leaving it at one if those annoying cliffhangers!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update loved it
i think the person mift me geet's romeo
continue soon


thank you abi!!!😳
will try my best to continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome , beautiful part
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ilovemsk

THATS NIT FAIR
it started to get good and then it finished
Pweaseee update soon
Your leaving it at one if those annoying cliffhangers!


sowieee yaar.
i couldn't write anymore this took me 3 hours. and i have to study 😔
i promise to continue soon.😊

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