HEARTBEAT: Part 14 updated [ EXAM FEVER ]

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Posted: 14 years ago

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wow.. thanks guys.. looks like even i have fans .. :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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u always rokz yaar👏 ur promo is awesome and i'm ready to read their face to face conversation😊and i'm waiting for ur ff😍so plz continue 😊thankz for pm😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

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please update soon- I cant wait for the next update!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

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plzzz update d next part... hope dat it will b longer...if nt den plz make it coz i want to go reading... plzzz... i cant stop dreaming 😍 wat u'll rite bt i m dam sure dat wat u will rite will b OSM...sooo keep wriring 👍🏼

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kriyansh96

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Posted: 14 years ago

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awesome Mick👍🏼
amazing promo!!
waiting for the next update :)

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Saumya Rathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

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OH MY GOD...!!! osssooommm...!!!😃

plz plz plz...upload the next part fast...!!!!

im really xcited...!!! is supreb promo k baad...even more xcited...!!! im sure the chapter's gonna b just great...!!!!!👍🏼

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NEXT PART COMING UP SOON.. :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: kriyaaansh
NEXT PART COMING UP SOON.. :)

DINKA CHIKA DINKA CHIKA YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY

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~~ MICK ~~

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Recap:

Rey n Kriya solve their misunderstandings wen Rey sneaks into Kriya room..

PART 4:

(Both of them are lying on their beds thinking abt each other. Karwat badal rahe hain unable to sleep)

(Rey has Kriya's mask n her purple scarf in his hand n is talking to them)

Rey to Kriya's Mask n Scarf: Mujhe pata hai ki tum bhi mere liye kuch feel karti ho. I promise u baat cutter ki mein tumhe hamesha khush rakhunga n tumhe kabhi sad nahin hone dunga. . :)

{ i hope u r not expecting a dialogue back from the mask or the scarf } 😆

While on the other side Kriya is wondering if all this is a dream? Has she fallen for him? Kya isse Pyaar kehte hain? Kya Rey bhi mujhse??

Next Day In College:
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Early Morning, Rey is waiting for Kria outside.. Lift dene ke liye.. Kriya is very surprised to see Rey standing outside her place..
Piche se Kriya ki Mom also comes n sees a smart guy who somwht looks very familiar looking towards her daughter n Kriya towards him..
On seeing Kriya's Mom, Rey turns his face in the opp side n puts on his shades.. but he is still there wanting ki kriya goes wid him..

Kriya's Mom: Chalo beta, late ho raha hai na..
K: nahin maa.. tum kyu takleef karti ho, mein khud hi chali jaungi.. (Rey is listening to their conversation)
K's Mom: Arey.. Ajeeb ladki hai.. abhi thodi der pehle hi toh tumne mujhse kaha ki tum aaj bahut late ho gayi ho n tumhe coll GS ko report karna hai kisse imp kaam se??
K: Maaa.. haan woh mein keh toh rahi thi.. but u dnt worry.. mein time par pahunch jaungi..
K's Mom: chalo theek hai.. tumhare marzi as always.. bbye.. shaam ko milte hain.. :)
K: ok MAA.. bbye.. luv u..
(After Kriya's Mom goes away)
R: Kya.. kya kaha tumne abhi??
K: (wid a smile) bye kaha maa ko..
R: Bye ke baad?
K: (Blusshingg) Bye ke baad kuch nahin.. :P
R: R u sure??
K: (Slowly) haan.. Chalen.. Late ho rahe hain..
R: Hmm sure.. (Opens d door for her) { Sorry to disappoint u gals: But this thing boys sirf shuru shuru mein karte hain.. :P So Kriya, dont expect he wil do it everyday for u.. :P Do let me know wt u guys feel abt this from ur experiences or observations }

(Both r silent n dnt know wt to say n expecting d other to say something n they start their silent talks)

K: Kuch toh bolo Rey..
R: Baatcutter Tum ho.. Mein nahin.. So tum bolo..
K: hmm keh toh sakti hun but kuch samajh nahin aa raha ki kya kahun..
After a while Both say Together: So Tum aaj.. (Both start laughing)
K: Tum pehle bolo
R: Nahin tum kaho.. Ladies first..
K: acha theek hai.. So aap aaj mujhe pick up kyu karne aaye??
R: Woh mujhe laga ki tumhe lift de dunga n isse bahane tumse kuch baatein bhi ho jayenge..
K: hmmm.. thank god Mom ko shak nahin hua tumhare baare mein..
R: ya.. Senior Laxmi Bai..
K: Senior??? agar woh senior hai toh matlab mein Junior hun??
R: (Smiling) Aisa mein nahin tum keh rahi ho..BTW, aaj tum bahut cute lag rahi ho..:P
K: (Blushhing) Thanks.. Rey, mein aapse kuch kehna chahti thi..
R: haan kaho..
K: Mein chahti hun ki baki humare friends ke beech mein bhi fights khatam ho jayen n hum sab saath mein chill karen.. wt say??
R: M sorry Kriya.. But mujhe nahin lagta ki aisa ho sakta hai.. Jo bhi mere frends ne tumhare saath kiya.. i dnt think i can forget that..
K: Ab bhool jao na Rey.. purani baat ho gayi hai woh..
(Rey tries to change the topic): itni jaldi aa gaye na coll??
(Kriya Gives no reaction)
Rey: tum nikalo, mein park karke aata hun..N ek bahut imp kaam pending hai jo mujhe poora karna hai.. Class mein milte hain..
K: Theek hai.. Thanks for the lift.. (She is thinking ki kaunsa kaam ho sakta hai)

(After a while, Rey heads straight to Rehearsal Hall expecting Sharon to be there...)

(Rey arrives Rehearsal hall and finds that Sharon is not alone, she is with Swayam. They were discussing about the upcoming cultural event in the college. Sharon in her usual tone was saying to Swayam "ab tum mujhe sikhaoge ke mujhe kya karna hai. I know it better OK..aur tum yeh mat bhulna ki main tumhara...".before Sharon could complete her sentence Rey storms in and looks at Swayam with a different look, not the type of look Rey gives usually. His eyes were telling something to Swayam. He wanted to tell Swayam "Can you leave the room, I want to talk to Sharon". But, Rey is such a kind hearted person, he couldn't speak out in words. But, Swayam having known Rey for a long time now, senses that something has gone wrong as he had never seen so much fire in Rey's eyes, not even when Kria had slapped him. Swayam starts to make a move without speaking a word and that is when Rey broke the silence and said in his Calm voice "Thanks Swayam"

Rey turns away from Sharon and looking towards the mirror. He is looking at himself and deciding, who is he actually angry at, Himself or Sharon. He was mad at himself for not trusting the person who he admired the most and for whom he had no ends of Love. Kria was the only one who could bring the real Chabilaal in him, Kria had taught him to live life without barriers of Dazzlings. But now, things had fallen apart and he believed it was all because of his lack in trust for the one special person who he kind of worshipped.
But, his attention and thoughts were interrupted when Sharon broke the ice )

S: Rey, tum yahan, iss waqt? acha hua tum aa gaye..
R: Tumne mujhse promise kiya tha sharon ki tum kriya k against kuch plan nahin karoge. kiya tha ke nahin??
S: Rey Tum theek toh ho na.. and itne gusse mein kyu ho?
R: Meine jo pucha, mujhe uska jawab chahiye..

In the mean time, Kriya is passing through close to Rehearsal hall n hear Rey's loud voice. So she moves closer towards the entrance n hears their conversation

S: Haan Rey, meine kiya tha promise n meine kahan kuch kaha uss Kripa ke baare mein..
R: Pehli baat toh Uska naam Kria hai.. Kripa nahin.. Dusri baat, Kya tumne Election campaign ke time par Kriya ke against Kuch nahin kaha tha??
S: (Flashback mein jaati hai n Remembers what all she said) Haan Rey kaha tha.. But woh toh Opposite team mein thi naa.. Har koi karta hai Rey.. M sure ki agar tum woh speech dete toh tum bhi yahi karte..
R: Aisa tumne soch bhi kaise liya ki mein Kriya ke against aisa kuch bolunga.. In fact, not just Kria, aur koi bhi hota, toh mein aisa kuch na jismein uski dignity n character involve ho.. Meine socha nahin tha sharon ke tum yeh bhi kar sakti ho..
S: Rey, tum toh faltu mein pareshan ho rahe ho.. In fact, iss speech ke karan hi students ne humein itne votes dilwaye n tum jeet gaye..
R: jeet?? sharon jeet toh tumhari hui hai.. mai toh harr gya..
S:(trying to keep hand on his shoulder)- Rey ye tum...
R: Bas Sharon .. aajtak i was listening to all your tantrums just bcoz ur my best friend. Har waqt meine tumhe support kiya n tumhari har baat maani.. Elections mein bhi mein tumhare karan khada hua.. but i just can't believe that u can go to such an extent
S: Rey tum uss behenji ke liye mere sath lad rhe ho?? Are u out of ur mind??
R: (Freaks out completely) Out toh mein pehle tha Sharon.. n fr ur kind information uska naam kria hai.. kria ghai.. aur wo koi behenji nahi hai.. just bcoz wo tumhari tarah sabse arrogantly baat nahi krti, it doesn't mean she is a behenji.. n u know what tum kabhi uske jaisi nahi ban sakti.. she is way too good for u.. Tumhare wajah se mein usse itna duur raha aaj tak..Sab misunderstandings, woh thappad incident.. all coz of u..

(Sharon has tears in her eyes n is trying to cool him down but with no effect. While Kriya is outside feeling guilty that all this is happening coz of her)

R: N U KNOW WAT SHARON??
ITS ALL OVERRR.. FOREVER...
I never expected that i wud ever say this to u but
i regret the day we became friends...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He just storms out of the room (without noticing Kriya ) leaving sharon all dazed.. Sharon has no clue on how to react to all this.. Still those last few lines are hovering all over her mind..

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A very special thanks to Preety n Aarti for helping me out with this post ...👍🏼

In case you have any Suggestions or want to help me make these creations even more spl by writing some parts, plz PM me...

Leave ur comments here.. Will surely be taking them as motivation for the upcoming parts.. :)

Thanks for Reading.. 😊
~~MICK~~

Edited by kriyaaaansh - 14 years ago